HATH PHAILATA NA SAR RAKHTA HAI ...................... HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 06, 2014, 10:15:38 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 07, 2014, 12:10:35 PM »
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वाह.....वाह...क्या बात है...बहुत खूब....दिली मुबारकबाद......

लाख नाकारा सही , फिर भी 'हसन'
शेर - गोई  का  हुनर  रखता  है

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«Reply #16 on: February 07, 2014, 01:59:21 PM »
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Aadaab Sir
bahut badhiya..kya ashaar hain..  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
choti bahr men maharat hai aapko
shukriya Mukesh ji . Dua karta hoon ki aap bakhair hon.
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«Reply #17 on: February 07, 2014, 05:16:42 PM »
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Wah Wah!!! Very Good!!! Bohat aachi ghazal kahi hai aap ne!

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«Reply #18 on: February 07, 2014, 07:05:26 PM »
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«Reply #19 on: February 07, 2014, 07:07:56 PM »
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«Reply #20 on: February 07, 2014, 07:39:35 PM »
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Tooti  chhat , kachchi diwaareiN haiN  magar
Fakhr  hai   usko   ki   Ghar  rakhta  hai

Muflisi  meiN   bhi  hai   Khuddaar  bahut
Hath   phailata  ,  na   sar   rakhta   hai

Chaahe   jitni    bhi    karo    tadbeereiN
Waqt   sab   Zer - o - Zabar   rakhta   hai
 
Laakh  nakaara  sahi  , phir  bhi  ' Hasan '
She'r - goi    ka    hunar    rakhta   hai

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,
Bahut hi khoobsurat khayalaat se pur ghazal hai hai aapne.Aik RAU ke saath meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
Sudhir ji , Bahut shukriya , duaaein
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«Reply #21 on: February 07, 2014, 08:17:04 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaah hasan ji kya kehne... ghazab ki peshkash kee hai aapne... bahut hi umda... hazaron hazaron daad qubool kare... khaas yeh ashaar bahut pasand aaye...

Muflisi  meiN   bhi  hai   Khuddaar  bahut
Hath   phailata  ,  na   sar   rakhta   hai

Chaahe   jitni    bhi    karo    tadbeereiN
Waqt   sab   Zer - o - Zabar   rakhta   hai
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«Reply #22 on: February 07, 2014, 09:44:48 PM »
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«Reply #23 on: February 07, 2014, 11:06:48 PM »
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Kaisi  Shaatir  woh   Nazar   rakhta  hai
Mere  Pal - Pal  ki   khabar  rakhta  hai

AsteenoN   meiN   haiN   Khanjar   uskee
Azm  sab   Khoon  se  tar   rakhta   hai

Chain   se   sone   naheeN    deta   hai
Raat   maango   to   Sahar   rakhta   hai

Dekh  le  gar  kaheeN  Barood   ka   dher
Mouqa  paate  hi   Sharar   rakhta   hai

Tooti  chhat , kachchi diwaareiN haiN  magar
Fakhr  hai   usko   ki   Ghar  rakhta  hai

Muflisi  meiN   bhi  hai   Khuddaar  bahut
Hath   phailata  ,  na   sar   rakhta   hai

Chaahe   jitni    bhi    karo    tadbeereiN
Waqt   sab   Zer - o - Zabar   rakhta   hai
 
Laakh  nakaara  sahi  , phir  bhi  ' Hasan '
She'r - goi    ka    hunar    rakhta   hai


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Azm = Iraade  ; Sharar = chingari / aag ;
zer o zabar = ooper neeche ; sher-goi=shairi
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कैसी शाति र वह  नज़र  रखता है
मेरे पल पल  की  ख़बर  रखता है

आस्तीनों में  हैं  ख़ंजर  उस  की
अज़म  सब  खून से तर रखता है

चैन  से  सोने  नहीं   देता  है
रात  मांगो  तो  सह र रखता  है

देख  ले  गर कहीं  बारूद  का ढेर
मौक़ा  पाते  ही  शरर  रखता  है

टूटी  छत , कच्ची  दिवारें हैं मगर
फ़ख्र  है  उस को कि घर रखता है

मुफलिसी में भी  है  ख़ुद्दार  बहुत
हाथ  फैलाता , न  सर  रखता है

चाहे   जितनी  भी  करो   तदबीरें
वक़्त  सब  जीरो - ज़बर  रखता है

लाख नाकारा सही , फिर भी 'हसन'
शेर - गोई  का  हुनर  रखता  है




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«Reply #24 on: February 08, 2014, 12:47:36 AM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan sir bahut hi khoob, khaastaur pe ye sher bahut pasand aaye:

Muflisi  meiN   bhi  hai   Khuddaar  bahut
Hath   phailata  ,  na   sar   rakhta   hai

Chaahe   jitni    bhi    karo    tadbeereiN
Waqt   sab   Zer - o - Zabar   rakhta   hai

shukriya Iftakhar saheb.
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«Reply #25 on: February 08, 2014, 01:28:33 AM »
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Wah Hasan Sahab. Ek aur Umda Kalaam Pesh Kiya Hai aapne. Dheron Daad.
shukriya saxena ji .
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«Reply #26 on: February 08, 2014, 12:48:27 PM »
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Shukriya saini saheb
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«Reply #27 on: February 08, 2014, 12:49:37 PM »
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shukriya Ravinder ji .
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«Reply #28 on: February 08, 2014, 02:57:59 PM »
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thanks jeet ji . God bless you.
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«Reply #29 on: February 08, 2014, 05:24:44 PM »
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Sir bas waah waah waah..
Dhero daad qubool farmaye..happy9

thanks nashwai ji.
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