Khoobsurat Hai Zindagi....!!!

by Talat on March 03, 2010, 02:56:36 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 04, 2010, 11:26:27 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 04, 2010, 11:18:50 AM
Thankyou ! Thankyou ! Thankyou ! Thankyou !

Thanks A Million For Dedicating This Beautiful Piece Of Poetry To Me..

Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooooooooo Much Dear  Hats off to you!

Mujhko Zindagi pe positive likhne ke liye aapne hi hausla-afzaai ki thi Dost...Yahi wajah hai ki aapke diye hauslon ko maine lafzon main utaar diya.....It's my pleasure Khwaish Dost...Thanks a lot for being there for me always.....!!  icon_flower
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«Reply #16 on: March 04, 2010, 11:29:37 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 04, 2010, 11:22:37 AM
Bahut bahut Khoob Talat Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks again Khwaish Dost...Thanks a lot....
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«Reply #17 on: March 04, 2010, 11:30:23 AM »
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Pal-Pal Badalti Hai Zindagi
pal-Pal Badalte Hai Sab Rang!!!

Kabhi Gham mein Ashko se Bhari Hai Aankhein
To kabhi Khushi Mein Aankhein Hoti Hai Nam

Pal-Pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal Badalte Hai Sab rang!!!!

Kabhi Tanha Rehkar Bhi tanhaai Ka Ehsaas Nahi
Kabhi Bhari Mehfil mein Bhi Akele Tanha Hai Hum

pal-Pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal Badalte hai sab Rang!!!

Kai Rishton ko Dum Todte Hue dekhte hai
To kai Rishto Ko Badi Hifaasat Se Rakhte Hai Hum

Pal-Pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-pal Badalte hai Sab rang!!

Kabhi Kuch Bhi Naa Paakar Bhi khush Rehte hai
To kabhi Sab kuch paakar Bhi Udaas Hai Hum

Pal-Pal badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal badalte hai Sab rang!!

Kabhi Apni hi Pehhaan Chupate Phirte Hai Logon Se
To kabhi Apne Naam Ke Liye Ulaj Padhte Hai

Pal-Pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal Badalte hai Sab Rang!!!

Kabhi Halki Si Chot Par Aansoo Behte Hai
To kabhi Har Gham Par Muskurate Hai Hum

Pal-pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal Badalte Hia sab Rang!!!

            ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #18 on: March 04, 2010, 11:41:38 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

What a lovely dedication Talat di.. Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat likha hai .. bahoot Khoob!


God bless U All!
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«Reply #19 on: March 05, 2010, 09:53:03 AM »
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Tahe dil se shukriya aapka Talat-di.....
Koyal he kahiye...ji mat lagaiye....bahut chhoti hu main aapse...abhee bees bhee nahi huye poore....

Nahi hai mujhe koi Gila--shikva zindagi se meri
Bas intezaar hai us pal ka jo bane zindagi meri

Duaa hai aapki tou har khawaab hoga poora mera
Gulshan-e-bahaar ban k aayega ek sunehra savera

Quote from: Celmira on March 03, 2010, 10:05:41 PM

Thanks a lot Koyal ji....Very nice lines from you....


Gulshan-e-bahaar Ban Jaaye Tumhaari Zindagi,
Har Khwahish Har Ummeed Bar Laaye Tumhari Zindagi

Ho Na Koi Gila, Na Koi Shikayat Isse,
Khwaab Ki Surat Nazar Aaye Tumhari Zindagi
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«Reply #20 on: March 05, 2010, 11:28:58 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 04, 2010, 11:41:38 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

What a lovely dedication Talat di.. Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat likha hai .. bahoot Khoob!


God bless U All!

Thank You so much Divs.....
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«Reply #21 on: March 05, 2010, 11:32:29 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on March 05, 2010, 09:53:03 AM
Tahe dil se shukriya aapka Talat-di.....
Koyal he kahiye...ji mat lagaiye....bahut chhoti hu main aapse...abhee bees bhee nahi huye poore....

Nahi hai mujhe koi Gila--shikva zindagi se meri
Bas intezaar hai us pal ka jo bane zindagi meri

Duaa hai aapki tou har khawaab hoga poora mera
Gulshan-e-bahaar ban k aayega ek sunehra savera



Hahahaha.  DOH...Aapse ye kis ne keh diya dear ki "JI" lagane se umr ka koi waasta hai.....mujhe bhi yahan bade chote ziyadtar sabhi Ji kehte hain par usse meri umr to nahin bad gayi na  Usual Smile

Khair, aapko nahin pasand to nahin kehnge..... aur bohot bohot khoob..Khuda kare , aapka har khwaab poora ho....!
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«Reply #22 on: March 05, 2010, 11:34:29 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 04, 2010, 11:30:23 AM
Pal-Pal Badalti Hai Zindagi
pal-Pal Badalte Hai Sab Rang!!!

Kabhi Gham mein Ashko se Bhari Hai Aankhein
To kabhi Khushi Mein Aankhein Hoti Hai Nam

Pal-Pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal Badalte Hai Sab rang!!!!

Kabhi Tanha Rehkar Bhi tanhaai Ka Ehsaas Nahi
Kabhi Bhari Mehfil mein Bhi Akele Tanha Hai Hum

pal-Pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal Badalte hai sab Rang!!!

Kai Rishton ko Dum Todte Hue dekhte hai
To kai Rishto Ko Badi Hifaasat Se Rakhte Hai Hum

Pal-Pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-pal Badalte hai Sab rang!!

Kabhi Kuch Bhi Naa Paakar Bhi khush Rehte hai
To kabhi Sab kuch paakar Bhi Udaas Hai Hum

Pal-Pal badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal badalte hai Sab rang!!

Kabhi Apni hi Pehhaan Chupate Phirte Hai Logon Se
To kabhi Apne Naam Ke Liye Ulaj Padhte Hai

Pal-Pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal Badalte hai Sab Rang!!!

Kabhi Halki Si Chot Par Aansoo Behte Hai
To kabhi Har Gham Par Muskurate Hai Hum

Pal-pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal Badalte Hia sab Rang!!!

            ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~



Bohot bohot khoob Khwaish Dost...Bohot hi achchi nazm likhi hai aapne aur zindagi ke har rang ko dikha diya   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai....
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«Reply #23 on: March 05, 2010, 11:49:11 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      CELMIRA JI....

USKI KHOOBSURAT HAI ZINDAGI
JO GUM MEIN BHI KARE KHUSHI
GAR TOOTE BHI JAYE ZINDAGI ME TOH
KABHI KAM NA KARE JEENE KI RUCHI...
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«Reply #24 on: March 05, 2010, 12:26:38 PM »
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Marhaba Talat ji behad khubsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne. Aapka falsafa bahut achha hai. Sudafreen. Bahut achhe. Apni ghazal ka ek sher yaad aa raha hai:

Shukre-rab kar 'Ashna' har mein,
Wo hi chahe to rawaa.n hai zindagi
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«Reply #25 on: March 05, 2010, 03:15:13 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 05, 2010, 11:34:29 AM
Bohot bohot khoob Khwaish Dost...Bohot hi achchi nazm likhi hai aapne aur zindagi ke har rang ko dikha diya   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai....





Teh Dil Se Shukriya Talat Dost icon_flower

Aapne Likha Hi Itna Acha Tha Ke Hum Bhi Aapka Saath dete Chale Gaye..

Aur Aapne Phir Se Bahut bahut Khooob Likha Hai Talat Dost!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuch Aur Likhne Ki Gustaaki Kar Raha Hoon..

Kabhi Subeh Bankar To Kabhi Raat Bankar Tehar gayi
Zindagi To Zindagi hai Har Haal Mein guzar Gayi...

Naa Jaane Kis Raah,kis Mod par Log Milte-Bichadte Rahe
Kabhi Muskurayi to kabhi Toot Ke Bikhar gayi...

Zindagi To Zindagi Hai Har Haal Mein Guzar Gayi..

Kabhi Kuch jazbo mein Behkar,Kabhi Palkon Mein Chupke Se Rehkar
Kabhi Sab kuch seh kar,Kabhi Har Baat Dil ki Keh kar

Jisne Har lamhe ko jeene ki koshish ki,sAMJHO zindagi uski sawar gayi
Zindagi to Zindagi hai Har Haal mein guzar gayi


Kabhi Ghamon mein bhi Muskuraate Hue
Kabhi Apna Haal-E-Dil Sunaate Hue

Naa Jane Kitne Chot khaakar Bhi yeh Nikhar Gayi
Zindagi To Zindagi Hai Har Haal mein Guzar Gayi....

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #26 on: March 05, 2010, 05:02:40 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #27 on: March 05, 2010, 07:37:52 PM »
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Thanks a lot Talat-di..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


Mann mai hai vishwaas....
Poori hogi meri sab aas...
Bas karna hai dil se prayaas...
Mit jaayegi janam-janam ki pyaas.....


 Suuna hai jab bhi hum sache dil se kuchh bhi maangte hain.....
 Kaaynaat ki sabhi taaketein ek ho k usse poora karne mai maddad karti hain.....


Quote from: Celmira on March 05, 2010, 11:32:29 AM

Hahahaha.  DOH...Aapse ye kis ne keh diya dear ki "JI" lagane se umr ka koi waasta hai.....mujhe bhi yahan bade chote ziyadtar sabhi Ji kehte hain par usse meri umr to nahin bad gayi na  Usual Smile

Khair, aapko nahin pasand to nahin kehnge..... aur bohot bohot khoob..Khuda kare , aapka har khwaab poora ho....!
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«Reply #28 on: March 05, 2010, 08:30:02 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 03, 2010, 02:56:36 PM
Jab main India se wapis aayi, aur bohot mayoos aur dukhi thi apni ammi ki untimely, early death ki wajh se, tab mujhse ek dost ne yahan Zindagi pe kuch positive likhne ko bola tha.
Aaj main Zindagi pe kuch likh rahi hoon.....!

This ghazal is dedicated to my friend Khwaish,
who has always supported me in good and bad times.




Talat,
very impressive writing !!!
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«Reply #29 on: March 23, 2010, 11:29:32 PM »
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Talat ji, aapne bahut khoobsoorti se Zindagi ki vyakhya ki hai apne shabdo me. Bahut pyaari kavita hai . Zindagi se kabhi shikayat karni bhi nahi chahiye... Sach... jo kuch bhi hai sab isi zindagi k kaaran hi to hai....

Zindagi k naam ....

"Kya shikwa kya gila kare zindagi se,
Jo hamare kismat me na tha wo bhi mila,
Jo doosro ke liye rakha tha wo bhi hume mila,
Pyar ,khushi, dosti,  sab kuch to mila........"
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