Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

by Prateek Mardia on March 21, 2008, 04:01:26 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 21, 2008, 08:41:15 PM »
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na koi aaya saath na koi saath he gaya
fir saath chalne ki manzil hi kaha
chund ghariyan dil ke behlaane ko
'safar' ka naam deti ho kya?
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«Reply #16 on: May 21, 2008, 09:05:43 PM »
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Nice Charu and Prateek ji!!
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«Reply #17 on: July 19, 2008, 01:54:33 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 21, 2008, 09:05:43 PM
Nice Charu and Prateek ji!!

shukriya pooja ji.aapke dasthkat ka intzaar thaa.

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«Reply #18 on: July 19, 2008, 11:16:33 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on March 21, 2008, 04:01:26 AM
kuch leta hu mein jaan ke,
kuch behad anjaan mein,
baaki bekhauf itni nidar
lekar apna saara kehar,
aa jaato he khud-b-khud
ab mera mun pareshaaniyon ka
aashram hein doston!


Aaaye bethen ghar kar jaye
apna sampoorn jeevan yahan bitaye
faile itna ke hriday dukhaye
bebas,laachaar, asahaye
mun sisak,sikud, sankuchit ho jaaye
pur aasshram badhta he jaaye!

Kabhi kabhi  kuch inme aabhagi
jo hokar apne saathiyon se baagi
aashram se bhagh jaaye,
to sekaron aane ko aatur
mun ki chowkhat khadkhadaye
ek jaaye--dus ko laaye
aashram badhta he jaaye!

youn aanker aaise kaafilon mein
kyaa jaachti ho hausla!
karna he he gar mera shakti parikshan
to aa jaon alehda alheda
youn samooh bun vaar karna
to kapat hein buzdilon
yudh he he gar zarrori
toh ek ek karke aakar milon!

woh to fir bhee tha veer Abhimanyu
pur ghir gaya maara gaya
yeh mera adna sa mun
saath subko is tarah se
kub talak jhel paayega
lekin yeh to tay he fir bhee
ladta yeh bhee jaayega...
ladte ladte gar hua parajit
to vahi itihaas dohraayega
haar kur bhee mun yeh mera
saahsi kehlaayega
aur tumhaari jeet ko
bus chul he maana jaayega!


wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob Prateek ji..bahoot he acha likha hai...

jeevan ke is ashram mai, kaya koi hume ajmayega
is zindagi ne to hai chalte he jaana,
her preshani ka waqat jo ek din ayya
ek din waise he chala jayega

Chorega yaadein, jeet - haar ki
zindagi ka beeta pal banta jayega
is ashram mai he rahna hans kar ya ro kar
ek din aise he insaan yah mar jayega
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«Reply #19 on: July 20, 2008, 06:32:26 AM »
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Quote from: sarthika on July 19, 2008, 11:16:33 PM
wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob Prateek ji..bahoot he acha likha hai...


shkriya saarthika ji jo aapne kavita ko saraaha aur apne hastaakshar bhee kiye apni rachna dwaara. Aabhari.

Prateek

 
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«Reply #20 on: July 20, 2008, 06:52:58 AM »
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wah prateek ji...........ek ek ashar kissi had tak hum sabhi ki manosthiti ka chitran sa prateet hota hai......bakhubi shabdon me dhala hai apne..........
ek behtareen peshkash....
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«Reply #21 on: July 20, 2008, 08:52:09 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 20, 2008, 06:52:58 AM
wah prateek ji...........ek ek ashar kissi had tak hum sabhi ki manosthiti ka chitran sa prateet hota hai......bakhubi shabdon me dhala hai apne..........
ek behtareen peshkash....


bekarar ji,

aapse saraahna mil jaati he to apni kalam pur kuch garv ho jaata he...prashansa ka dheron shukriya.

(aapki manosthithi pur hi likha he! badi naazuk he ji!)

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«Reply #22 on: July 20, 2008, 09:15:47 AM »
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prateek ji,
is baat me koi do rai nahi....ki aapne meri manosthiti ko bakhubi pahchana......aur use shabdon ka sahara diya.....ek naam diya.."pareshaniyon ka aashram" is baat ke liye punah aapka dhanywad..

samandar se jaise pahunche kinare,
sahil pe tufan ka dhara gaya,
is kadar bad gai meri nakamiyan,
pahle kashti gai fir kinara gaya
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«Reply #23 on: July 20, 2008, 11:40:51 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 20, 2008, 09:15:47 AM
prateek ji,
is baat me koi do rai nahi....ki aapne meri manosthiti ko bakhubi pahchana......aur use shabdon ka sahara diya.....ek naam diya.."pareshaniyon ka aashram" is baat ke liye punah aapka dhanywad..

samandar se jaise pahunche kinare,
sahil pe tufan ka dhara gaya,
is kadar bad gai meri nakamiyan,
pahle kashti gai fir kinara gaya
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bahut khoob panktiyon se awagat karaane ke liya shukriya hazoor.
Prateek
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«Reply #24 on: November 17, 2008, 05:08:01 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on March 21, 2008, 04:01:26 AM
kuch leta hu mein jaan ke,
kuch behad anjaan mein,
baaki bekhauf itni nidar
lekar apna saara kehar,
aa jaato he khud-b-khud
ab mera mun pareshaaniyon ka
aashram hein doston!


Aaaye bethen ghar kar jaye
apna sampoorn jeevan yahan bitaye
faile itna ke hriday dukhaye
bebas,laachaar, asahaye
mun sisak,sikud, sankuchit ho jaaye
pur aasshram badhta he jaaye!

Kabhi kabhi  kuch inme aabhagi
jo hokar apne saathiyon se baagi
aashram se bhagh jaaye,
to sekaron aane ko aatur
mun ki chowkhat khadkhadaye
ek jaaye--dus ko laaye
aashram badhta he jaaye!

youn aanker aaise kaafilon mein
kyaa jaachti ho hausla!
karna he he gar mera shakti parikshan
to aa jaon alehda alheda
youn samooh bun vaar karna
to kapat hein buzdilon
yudh he he gar zarrori
toh ek ek karke aakar milon!

woh to fir bhee tha veer Abhimanyu
pur ghir gaya maara gaya
yeh mera adna sa mun
saath subko is tarah se
kub talak jhel paayega
lekin yeh to tay he fir bhee
ladta yeh bhee jaayega...
ladte ladte gar hua parajit
to vahi itihaas dohraayega
haar kur bhee mun yeh mera
saahsi kehlaayega
aur tumhaari jeet ko
bus chul he maana jaayega!


Waah..prateek ji..achhe Hindi evam kuch urdu shabdo ka prayog kiya hai..is kavita Mei..
bahut hi achhi hai sari PanktiyaaN...bahut khub prateek ji
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«Reply #25 on: December 27, 2008, 12:40:11 PM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on November 17, 2008, 05:08:01 AM
Waah..prateek ji..achhe Hindi evam kuch urdu shabdo ka prayog kiya hai..is kavita Mei..
bahut hi achhi hai sari PanktiyaaN...bahut khub prateek ji


shukriaa muhammed ji,aapne isey pasand kiya.
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