Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

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«Reply #15 on: June 09, 2012, 06:20:17 PM »
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Bahut hi khoooooooooooob Mukesh jee, lajawab peshkash. Dheron daad meri taraf se.
Bahut bahut shukriya iftakhar jee
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«Reply #16 on: June 10, 2012, 12:04:35 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!!!

Mukesh Ji..Bahut Hi khoobsurat Peshkash..Bahut Bahut Khoob

Khaas Taur par yeh As'haar Dil Ko Chuuta Hua..

"Ik Gareeb Ki Zindagi Ka Sacha Afsaana Hai yeh
 Rotiyan Namak Se Khaanee Nahee Achaar Aayega"

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Josh bhar dete hai aap apne shabdo se.
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«Reply #17 on: June 10, 2012, 12:06:40 PM »
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Beautiful!
Good Wishes.
_arun mishra.
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«Reply #18 on: June 10, 2012, 11:48:39 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB MKV JEE.
BAHUT SARI DAAD AUR RAU
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Shukriya Anahita jee
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«Reply #19 on: June 13, 2012, 05:49:56 AM »
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boht umda mukesh g.... QATILANA SHAYRI

kya bakhubi har ek chez ko ek he mala mai piroya hai aapne


DHEROON DAAD OR EK RAU....
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«Reply #20 on: June 23, 2012, 12:21:52 AM »
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Bahut  khubsurat  peshkash  hai . MKV ji , dili mubarakbaad pesh hai.
Shukriya Hasan Sir
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«Reply #21 on: June 23, 2012, 11:19:00 AM »
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baht khoob Mkv sahab--bahot achi kalaam kahi aapne

meri kamakli dekhie ki mujhe
pehla aur aakhri sher baaki ke aasaaron se juda se lagte hain--

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #22 on: June 24, 2012, 08:01:21 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mukesh ji... bahut bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #23 on: June 24, 2012, 02:15:26 PM »
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  Applause
 BEAUTIFUL
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«Reply #24 on: June 24, 2012, 02:31:29 PM »
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very good mkv jee
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«Reply #25 on: June 24, 2012, 07:11:57 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khub MKV Ji Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

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«Reply #26 on: June 24, 2012, 11:33:17 PM »
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mukesh ji bahut umda rachna likhee hai aapne.maja aaya padne mein
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«Reply #27 on: June 24, 2012, 11:35:04 PM »
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Beautiful!
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«Reply #29 on: July 25, 2012, 07:16:42 AM »
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Hataao jaala nafrat ka najar pyaar aayega
Tujhe manane ko, aashiq ye baar baar aayega

Subah se bhookha hai tera beta khila de jaakar
Kaisi beraham maa hai too, kab dulaar aayega

Vo jaa chukaa hai pardesh kamaane ki khaatir
Swadesh milne ko sabse kabhee kabhaar aayega

Ik gareeb ki jindgee ka saccha afsaana hai ye
Rotiyan namak se khaanee, nahee  achaar aayega

Tadap tadap ke maut ka intjaar kar tu ab
‘mukesh” dil ko tere ab na karaar aayega 


Kabile daad! Bahut sundar prastuti, Mukesh ji.

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