Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

by mkv on June 08, 2012, 05:40:46 AM

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«Reply #15 on: June 09, 2012, 12:50:17 PM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on June 08, 2012, 07:27:13 AM

Bahut hi khoooooooooooob Mukesh jee, lajawab peshkash. Dheron daad meri taraf se.

Bahut bahut shukriya iftakhar jee


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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #16 on: June 10, 2012, 06:34:35 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 08, 2012, 07:47:22 AM

Waah Waah Waah!!!!!!

Mukesh Ji..Bahut Hi khoobsurat Peshkash..Bahut Bahut Khoob

Khaas Taur par yeh As'haar Dil Ko Chuuta Hua..

"Ik Gareeb Ki Zindagi Ka Sacha Afsaana Hai yeh
Rotiyan Namak Se Khaanee Nahee Achaar Aayega"

Thanks khwaish jee
Josh bhar dete hai aap apne shabdo se.


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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #17 on: June 10, 2012, 06:36:40 AM »

Beautiful!
Good Wishes.
_arun mishra.


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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #18 on: June 10, 2012, 06:18:39 PM »

Quote from: Anahita on June 08, 2012, 07:52:06 AM

BAHUT KHOOB MKV JEE.
BAHUT SARI DAAD AUR RAU
Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Anahita jee


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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #19 on: June 13, 2012, 12:19:56 AM »

Quote from: roy on June 08, 2012, 07:56:40 AM

boht umda mukesh g.... QATILANA SHAYRI

kya bakhubi har ek chez ko ek he mala mai piroya hai aapne

DHEROON DAAD OR EK RAU....

Shukriya Roy jee


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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #20 on: June 22, 2012, 06:51:52 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 08, 2012, 11:17:44 AM

Bahut khubsurat peshkash hai . MKV ji , dili mubarakbaad pesh hai.

Shukriya Hasan Sir


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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #21 on: June 23, 2012, 05:49:00 AM »

Quote from: sarfira on June 08, 2012, 11:27:38 AM

baht khoob Mkv sahab--bahot achi kalaam kahi aapne

meri kamakli dekhie ki mujhe
pehla aur aakhri sher baaki ke aasaaron se juda se lagte hain--

khus rahie
muskurate rahie

Thanks SF


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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #22 on: June 24, 2012, 02:31:21 AM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 08, 2012, 01:45:05 PM

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mukesh ji... bahut bahut khoob...!!!

thanks hriday jee


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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #23 on: June 24, 2012, 08:45:26 AM »

Quote from: Qais on June 08, 2012, 02:09:51 PM

BEAUTIFUL

Thanks Qais jee


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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #24 on: June 24, 2012, 09:01:29 AM »

Quote from: RAAJA1234 on June 08, 2012, 05:42:47 PM

very good mkv jee

thanks raaja1234


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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #25 on: June 24, 2012, 01:41:57 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on June 08, 2012, 06:56:39 PM

Bahut Bahut Khub MKV Ji Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

Shihab

thanks Shihab


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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #26 on: June 24, 2012, 06:03:17 PM »

Quote from: ahujagd on June 08, 2012, 07:34:10 PM

mukesh ji bahut umda rachna likhee hai aapne.maja aaya padne mein

Thanks ahuja jee


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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #27 on: June 24, 2012, 06:05:04 PM »

Quote from: arunmishra on June 10, 2012, 06:36:40 AM

Beautiful!
Good Wishes.
_arun mishra.

thanks arun sir


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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #28 on: July 24, 2012, 11:52:41 AM »

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Re: Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

«Reply #29 on: July 25, 2012, 01:46:42 AM »

Quote from: mkv on June 08, 2012, 05:40:46 AM

Hataao jaala nafrat ka najar pyaar aayega
Tujhe manane ko, aashiq ye baar baar aayega

Subah se bhookha hai tera beta khila de jaakar
Kaisi beraham maa hai too, kab dulaar aayega

Vo jaa chukaa hai pardesh kamaane ki khaatir
Swadesh milne ko sabse kabhee kabhaar aayega

Ik gareeb ki jindgee ka saccha afsaana hai ye
Rotiyan namak se khaanee, nahee achaar aayega

Tadap tadap ke maut ka intjaar kar tu ab
‘mukesh” dil ko tere ab na karaar aayega

Kabile daad! Bahut sundar prastuti, Mukesh ji.

Applause