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Re: Yeh dour-e-zeest hai, gamkhwaar bhee sataatey hain!

« Reply #15 on: June 03, 2009, 10:44:10 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on June 02, 2009, 07:33:36 PM

bahot hi acha likha hai aapne Abd ji,

as a shayar i dn deserve to give comments or say
ki aapne acha likha hai coz u r so senior but phir bhi mujhe acha laga to likha, tahe dil se daad qubool kijie

Thanks a lot, @kaash ji! Kayee 'junior' bhi saikarhoun 'seniors' sey achchhaa likhtey hain! Aap 'sammaan' deytey hain, wah aap kaa 'badappan' hai!
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Re: Yeh dour-e-zeest hai, gamkhwaar bhee sataatey hain!

« Reply #16 on: June 03, 2009, 10:52:06 AM »

kahaan hai bhaijaan aajkal bahuit kam dikhte hain aap...............bahut hi achcha likha hai aapne hamesha kii tarah


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Re: Yeh dour-e-zeest hai, gamkhwaar bhee sataatey hain!

« Reply #17 on: June 03, 2009, 10:54:39 AM »

Jee bahot shukria,ye aapki dilnawaazi aur prem hai,Hindi aur urdu ke words ka ocean hai aapke paas aur har nagma har ghazal yaadgar hain aapki,bahot seekhne ko milta hai


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Re: Yeh dour-e-zeest hai, gamkhwaar bhee sataatey hain!

« Reply #18 on: June 03, 2009, 11:01:35 AM »

4 lines me dil ki dastaan wow bahut khoom umda work Abd Ji,

Shally.


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Re: Yeh dour-e-zeest hai, gamkhwaar bhee sataatey hain!

« Reply #19 on: June 03, 2009, 11:56:10 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on June 03, 2009, 10:52:06 AM

kahaan hai bhaijaan aajkal bahuit kam dikhte hain aap...............bahut hi achcha likha hai aapne hamesha kii tarah

salil2002 ji!
IPL (cricket) key zariye dil-o-dimaag ko thorhaa 'wishraam' diyaa hai! Cricket kaa 'mousam' June 2009 mein bhi raheygaa! July sey fir waisaa kaa waisaa paayengey aap mujhey! Tennis, Cricket tathaa Badminton sey meyraa lambaa lagaaw rahaa hai! Fir bhi mein likhtaa to rahaa hi hoon! Aap key 'pyaarey-pyaarey' alfaazoun key liye bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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Re: Yeh dour-e-zeest hai, gamkhwaar bhee sataatey hain!

« Reply #20 on: June 03, 2009, 11:57:20 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on June 03, 2009, 11:01:35 AM

4 lines me dil ki dastaan wow bahut khoom umda work Abd Ji,

Shally.

Thanks a lot, Shally!
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Re: Yeh dour-e-zeest hai, gamkhwaar bhee sataatey hain!

« Reply #21 on: June 03, 2009, 12:01:47 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on June 03, 2009, 11:56:10 AM

shukriya bhai jaan....chaliye aapki chhutti kii arzi manjoor kii jaati hai


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Re: Yeh dour-e-zeest hai, gamkhwaar bhee sataatey hain!

« Reply #22 on: June 03, 2009, 12:02:15 PM »

bahut bahut khoob Abd ji,bahut acha likhte ho aap.
aise hi likhte rahe. Clapping Smiley


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Re: Yeh dour-e-zeest hai, gamkhwaar bhee sataatey hain!

« Reply #23 on: June 03, 2009, 03:49:52 PM »

Quote from: salil2002 on June 03, 2009, 12:01:47 PM

shukriya bhai jaan....chaliye aapki chhutti kii arzi manjoor kii jaati hai

Thanks! I'm truly obliged, dear salil2002 bhai!
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Re: Yeh dour-e-zeest hai, gamkhwaar bhee sataatey hain!

« Reply #24 on: June 03, 2009, 03:54:42 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 03, 2009, 12:02:15 PM

bahut bahut khoob Abd ji,bahut acha likhte ho aap.
aise hi likhte rahe. Clapping Smiley

Madhu bitia, agar korey dhanyawaad sey kaam chal jaye, to dhheyr-saa DHANYAWAAD!
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