नज़र रह गई तकती ........saru.................

by SURESH SANGWAN on November 18, 2013, 10:03:21 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 20, 2013, 06:16:36 PM »
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icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flowerbahut2 shukriya nashwani ji.....hausla afzahi ka aur apna waqt dene ka
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bahut khoob Suresh jee..happy9

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«Reply #16 on: November 20, 2013, 06:17:12 PM »
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bahut2 shukriya iftekhar  ji.....hausla afzahi ka aur apna waqt dene ka
हम आज तक ना समझे क्या हैं चालाकियाँ
बच्चे  भि इस दौर के  बहुत सयाने हो गये

Bahut khoob Saru jee, sabhi sher achhe haiN per sher sab se achha laga.
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«Reply #17 on: November 20, 2013, 06:18:47 PM »
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bahut2 shukriya sksaini  ji.....hausla afzahi ka aur apna waqt dene ka icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
उम्र के ख़ाते में हाय दिन हज़ारों जुड़ गये
ज़िंदगी के मायने बस दिन बिताने हो गये

bahut sunder waah waah waah
हम आज तक ना समझे क्या हैं चालाकियाँ
बच्चे  भि इस दौर के  बहुत सयाने हो गये

Bahut khoob Saru jee, sabhi sher achhe haiN per sher sab se achha laga.
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«Reply #18 on: November 20, 2013, 06:19:19 PM »
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bahut2 shukriya amit ji.....hausla afzahi ka aur apna waqt dene ka
वाह.....वाह...बहुत ही खूब सुरेश जी....ढेरों दाद

उम्र के ख़ाते में हाय दिन हज़ारों जुड़ गये
ज़िंदगी के मायने बस दिन बिताने हो गये

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«Reply #19 on: November 20, 2013, 06:20:10 PM »
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icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flowerbahut2 shukriya sudhir ji ji.....hausla afzahi ka aur apna waqt dene ka
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: November 20, 2013, 06:21:02 PM »
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icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flowerbahut2 shukriya aqsh ji.....hausla afzahi ka aur apna waqt dene ka
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaaaah Saru ji hamesha ki tarah bahut hi umda peshkash rahi.. sabhi ashaar behad umda the..dheron dheron daaaaaaad.... khaas yeh ashaar bahut pasand aaye..

हम आज तक ना समझे क्या हैं चालाकियाँ
बच्चे  भि इस दौर के  बहुत सयाने हो गये

हो गया हम-दर्द  कोई  जब  दर्द  में  शामिल
दर्द- भरे   गीत  भी   मीठे   तराने  हो  गये

दिल-ए-सरु की हलचल का अंदाज़ नहीं उसको
लब  खुले  भी   नहीं  और  अफ़साने  हो गये
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«Reply #21 on: November 20, 2013, 06:21:49 PM »
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bahut2 shukriya Musaahib ji.....hausla afzahi ka aur apna waqt dene ka icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Kya kahne Suresh Ji, bahut bahut khoob...
Sare ahsaar  2 se 3 baar padha hai maine or har baar har ahsaar ke gahraii badhti hi chali gayi...
Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aaapne, dheron daad..
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #22 on: November 20, 2013, 06:22:34 PM »
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bahut2 shukriya shihab ji.....hausla afzahi ka aur apna waqt dene ka

हम आज तक ना समझे क्या हैं चालाकियाँ
बच्चे भि इस दौर के बहुत सयाने हो गय

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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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