PAANEE ..... ZARRAA -Panna 2:Shairi for Manzar -e- Kudrat

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«Reply #15 on: November 24, 2013, 08:51:29 PM »

Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on November 23, 2013, 04:20:30 PM

waah waah zarra ji, khoobsurat ghazal dheron daad...
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Aap ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Musaahib ji !!!


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Re: PAANEE ..... ZARRAA

«Reply #16 on: November 24, 2013, 10:54:49 PM »

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apne andar ki tum fizaa badlo
bas badalte rahe hawaa-paanee

zulf bheegee to ho gayee naagin
kya wo maaNge jise dasaa paanee

bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne. bahut daad


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Re: PAANEE ..... ZARRAA

«Reply #17 on: November 25, 2013, 02:31:48 AM »

Quote from: sahal on November 23, 2013, 05:43:32 PM

dhul gaye daagh bujh gaye shole
khushk aaNkhoN se jab bahaa paanee

apne andar ki tum fizaa badlo
bas badalte rahe hawaa-paanee

waah waah zarra sahab lajawaab kalaam pesh kiiya hai
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Aap ka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hooN Sahal ji ...


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Re: PAANEE ..... ZARRAA

«Reply #18 on: November 25, 2013, 04:35:50 PM »

lajawaab peshkash.... paanee anmol hai kudrat me..
waaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah bahut achhe.. Usual Smile


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«Reply #19 on: November 25, 2013, 04:49:22 PM »

Quote from: zarraa on November 23, 2013, 02:29:25 PM

kab hai roke se bhi rukaa paanee
beh n paayaa hua hawaa paanee

band mut’thee se ris gayaa paanee
haath phailaa diye bharaa paanee

kitne bhookhoN ki hai ghizaa* paanee
kitne beemaaroN ki dawaa paanee

wo kaheiN kya lahoo hua paanee
kab bhalaa is qadar bahaa paanee

kashtiyaaN paar deeN kaaghaz ki
aur safeenoN* ko pee gayaa paanee

jab ye saazish banaa siyaasat ki
sharm se paanee paanee thaa paanee

koyee aab-e-hayaat ho so ho
nal se aataa mareez saa paanee

ik niwaalaa falak se utrega
n halak se utar rahaa paanee

khet sookhaa kaheeN pe ghar doobaa
hai ye insaaN ki hi khataa paanee

lazzat-o-lutf tishnaa-lab* se pooch
ye jo be-zauq* be-mazaa paanee

dhul gaye daagh bujh gaye shole
khushk aaNkhoN se jab bahaa paanee

apne andar ki tum fizaa badlo
bas badalte rahe hawaa-paanee

kab bujhee bhookh-pyaas hastee ki
khwaahisheiN haiN khuraak anaa* paanee

aaj saaghar meiN tu ne daalaa zahar
saaqiyaa aaj mat milaa paanee

zulf bheegee to ho gayee naagin
kya wo maaNge jise dasaa paanee

bijliyaaN baam* se giree jaateeN
gesuoN se baras rahaa paanee

qatraa* gum hai gumaan-e-gauhar* meiN
geele tan se n sookhtaa paanee

yaad aaye ba-waqt-e-haajat* hi
ek “zarraa” to doosraa paanee

- ZARRAA

*
ghizaa = nutrition
safeenoN = ships
tishnaa-lab = a thirsty person
be-zauq = tasteless
anaa = ego
qatraa = drop of water
gumaan-e-gauhar = the misconception of being a pearl
baam = terrace
ba-waqt-e-haajat = at the time of need

Bas meri himmat toot gayee ....
Badi mushkil se padhe sab sher..
Har sher pe mar jaane ko jikiya .. jio khoob jio


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«Reply #20 on: November 25, 2013, 11:07:06 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 23, 2013, 06:59:40 PM

Waah zarra saheb , Paani par mukammal kitab likh di . Paani ki ahmiyat , istemaal , zaroorat , majboori , quality, muhawron mein paani ka istemaal , sab kuchh samo diya iseikkalaam mein .Bahut bahut mubarakbaad .

Hasan sahab ... aapne jis qadar inaayat bakshi is koshish ko us se bahaut hauslafzaayee huwee aur himmat mein izaafaa huwa ... yoon hi bazm ki rehnumaayee karte rahein ... shukriya aur dua ke saath ... zarraa


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Re: PAANEE ..... ZARRAA

«Reply #21 on: November 26, 2013, 12:52:15 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on November 23, 2013, 08:55:18 PM

Behtareeeeeeeeeeen kalaaaaaaaaam... kaise tareef karoon zarra sahab... lafz nahin mil rahe.....Hazaron hazaron daad qubool kare.. Rau kal doongi insha Allah...

Aqsh ji ... aap ki inaayat ki aap ne is koshish ko tawajjoh di aur hauslafzaayee kari. Bahaut bahaut shukriya aap ka ...


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«Reply #22 on: November 26, 2013, 01:11:14 AM »

waah zarra ji Applause


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«Reply #23 on: November 26, 2013, 01:56:42 AM »

Quote from: nashwani on November 23, 2013, 09:58:46 PM

Shukriya Nashwani ji !


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«Reply #24 on: November 26, 2013, 02:07:50 AM »

Quote from: zarraa on November 23, 2013, 02:29:25 PM

kab hai roke se bhi rukaa paanee
beh n paayaa hua hawaa paanee

band mut’thee se ris gayaa paanee
haath phailaa diye bharaa paanee

kitne bhookhoN ki hai ghizaa* paanee
kitne beemaaroN ki dawaa paanee

wo kaheiN kya lahoo hua paanee
kab bhalaa is qadar bahaa paanee

kashtiyaaN paar deeN kaaghaz ki
aur safeenoN* ko pee gayaa paanee

jab ye saazish banaa siyaasat ki
sharm se paanee paanee thaa paanee :clap:baot alaa janaab

koyee aab-e-hayaat ho so ho
nal se aataa mareez saa paanee

ik niwaalaa falak se utrega
n halak se utar rahaa paanee

khet sookhaa kaheeN pe ghar doobaa
hai ye insaaN ki hi khataa paanee

lazzat-o-lutf tishnaa-lab* se pooch
ye jo be-zauq* be-mazaa paanee kya baat kahi hai janaab

dhul gaye daagh bujh gaye shole
khushk aaNkhoN se jab bahaa paanee

apne andar ki tum fizaa badlo
bas badalte rahe hawaa-paanee

kab bujhee bhookh-pyaas hastee ki
khwaahisheiN haiN khuraak anaa* paanee

aaj saaghar meiN tu ne daalaa zahar
saaqiyaa aaj mat milaa paanee

zulf bheegee to ho gayee naagin
kya wo maaNge jise dasaa paanee

bijliyaaN baam* se giree jaateeN
gesuoN se baras rahaa paanee

qatraa* gum hai gumaan-e-gauhar* meiN
geele tan se n sookhtaa paaneewaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

yaad aaye ba-waqt-e-haajat* hi
ek “zarraa” to doosraa paanee janaab bahot khoob

- ZARRAA

*
ghizaa = nutrition
safeenoN = ships
tishnaa-lab = a thirsty person
be-zauq = tasteless
anaa = ego
qatraa = drop of water
gumaan-e-gauhar = the misconception of being a pearl
baam = terrace
ba-waqt-e-haajat = at the time of need

mashaallah mashaaallah mashaallah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaah aur waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah janaab. itna alaa itna khoobsoorat. mushaire mein padne wali ghazal. ye to zarra sahab yoindia mein likhi gai behrteen ghazal mein se ek hui.kitni taarif karoon samjh nahin aa raha. maa'zrat ke saath rau ka quota aaj ka khtam hua . aainda jab bhi aana hoga de deoon gaa.

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah


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«Reply #25 on: November 26, 2013, 02:17:41 AM »

Mohtaram, kya taraasha hai paani ko aapne, samaa baaNdh diya, mehfil loot li, behad umda aur aala darje ke ghazal Zarra saheb, dili daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kareN. Ye ash'aar khaas pasand aaye:

kitne bhookhoN ki hai ghizaa* paanee
kitne beemaaroN ki dawaa paanee

wo kaheiN kya lahoo hua paanee
kab bhalaa is qadar bahaa paanee

jab ye saazish banaa siyaasat ki
sharm se paanee paanee thaa paanee

koyee aab-e-hayaat ho so ho
nal se aataa mareez saa paanee

khet sookhaa kaheeN pe ghar doobaa
hai ye insaaN ki hi khataa paanee

lazzat-o-lutf tishnaa-lab* se pooch
ye jo be-zauq* be-mazaa paanee

yaad aaye ba-waqt-e-haajat* hi
ek “zarraa” to doosraa paanee


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Re: PAANEE ..... ZARRAA

«Reply #26 on: November 26, 2013, 03:22:02 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on November 24, 2013, 02:11:53 AM

dhul gaye daagh bujh gaye shole
khushk aaNkhoN se jab bahaa paanee

apne andar ki tum fizaa badlo
bas badalte rahe hawaa-paanee

zulf bheegee to ho gayee naagin
kya wo maaNge jise dasaa paanee

Wah Kya Kehne Bahut Khub Sahab
Yeh Ashaar Mujhe Bahut Pasand Aaye
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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab

Thank you Sir Usual Smile

Aap ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Shihab sahab !!


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«Reply #27 on: November 27, 2013, 02:06:25 AM »

Quote from: soudagar on November 24, 2013, 03:33:54 PM

just awesome incredible qalaam............speechless

Thank you very much for your kind words friend !!!


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«Reply #28 on: November 27, 2013, 03:05:37 AM »

Quote from: qalb on November 24, 2013, 04:50:03 PM

boss!!!!!!!!!!!! kya paanee pilaayaa hai aap ne

is ghareeb ki aur kya auqaat, bas paanee hi pesh kar sakta hai ... so use khushi khushi qabool kar lene ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Qalb ji Usual Smile


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«Reply #29 on: November 27, 2013, 12:57:17 PM »

Quote from: suman59 on November 24, 2013, 10:54:49 PM

bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne. bahut daad

Aap ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Suman ji ...


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