dost..ka mil jaana hua.

by guhar on November 26, 2009, 06:33:35 AM
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pankshivam
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«Reply #15 on: November 26, 2009, 08:13:36 PM »
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Nice Effort Guharji Applause
Keep it Up  Thumbs UP

Ye Kaisa discussion Shuru Kar diya Aap Logo ne
Agar Aap Sab Ko Discus hi Karna tha Toh Yoindia chitchat Pe Karte

Guhar ji
Aapne achha likha hai aur mehnat kijiye aap aur achha likh saktin hain

is Discussion ke liye last point kahna chahunga
becoz abhi ek nayi thread ke liye waqt nahi hai

Yahan sb ko apne thoughts rakhne ka haq hai
Madhuji ko jo achha laga unhone uski tarif ki
Sabhi Me Kuch Na Kuch khamiyan hain
Jo Kamiyan hain unhe Bhi indicate Karne k liye Qabil Teachers ki jarurat hai

Aur Riyaz Bhai Madhu ji ne Meri Lagbhag har post pe Yahi copy Paste Kiya Hai
Vo thread Padh ke Pasand Kartin hai Aur uspe Apne Reply Deti hain simple
Ummid karta hun unke copy paste pe kisi ko aaitraz nahi hona chahiye...

i hope ye discussion yahi khatm ho gaya hoga
is baat pe discussion jari rakhne ke liye yoindia chitchat pe koi thread shuru karen

~Pank~
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #16 on: November 27, 2009, 06:09:29 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 26, 2009, 05:15:17 PM
Main aapki baat se sehmat nahi hu Rishiji......
Hosla bhdhana ek baat hai...par galat ya kamjoor rachna ka vishleshan hona chahiye.....sahi criticisam ka koi bura nahi maanta....is se achha likhne ka mauka milta hai...nahi tou wahi galti repeat hoti jaayegi.....
Geet-di sahi ko sahi aur galat ko galat kehti hai....aap use samjho....

Aapki Bat Se Sahmat Hu Per MEin Is bat ke liye nahi bol rha Geet Ji Ne Likha Ki Dusro Ka Hausla Badhane Mein Mein Bhi Ek Hu To Mein Unse Puchta Hu Ki Wo Roj Yo Pe Aati Hai Per Kis Kis Post Pe Wo Reply Krti Hai Kis Kis Ka Wo Hausla Afjai Karti hai Mujhe Agar Yad Hai TO MeinE Ek Bar Geet Ji KO PM Karke Bola Tha ki Geet Ji kya Aap meri Thread Padhoge aur reply karoge tab Jakar Unhone reply Kiya Tha Aur Uske bad meine kam se kam 30 se upar thread kholi per unka ek bhi reply nahi aaya to hausla kaha badha wah wah na sahi per galti to nikal skte hai jise aage aur kuch behtar likhne ko mile thats clear Koyal Ji
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #17 on: November 27, 2009, 06:12:41 AM »
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Ha Sahi Kaha Pankaj Bro Ki Bahas Ke LIye EK Alag Thread Ho Kyuki Yaha Pe Likhana PHir Kisi Ki LIkhi Huvi Thread Ko Kharab Karna Hai Bus meine kisi ke likhi bat ka reply Diya Sorry Bro
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #18 on: November 27, 2009, 06:56:05 AM »
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Thank you so Much Rishi ji,Pank ji Koyal ji,Geet ji,aap sabhi ne dosti nibhaye dil se,love you all.aur Riyaz ji ko maine maaf kar diya.Rishi ji aap Geet ko kuch mat kaho pliz.ab kuch mat kahena pliz Rishi ji.hum sab dost hai.mujhe poora umeed hai aapse.God bless you all love4 love9
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riyaz106
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«Reply #19 on: November 27, 2009, 07:14:43 AM »
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Madhu Ji aur Pank Ji, Aapko meri baat achhi nahin lagi, iska dukh hai mujhe. Madhu ji sabhi ki tareef karti hain wo bahut achhi baat hai, mujhe kya etraaz ho sakta hai. Mera matlab sirf itna tha ki Madhu Ji bajaye baar baar typing se bachne ke liye copy paste kar deti hain.Pank Ji ki baat bhi sahi hai ke ghaltiyan nikalne ke liye qabil teacher ki zaroorat, tabhi sahi margdarshan ho sakta hai. Albatta achhi shayari ke liye sub ko koshish karni chahiye. Iske liye mash-hoor shayaron ka kalam padhna fayedemand ho sakta hai, wahi hamare teacher hain jaise Waseem Barelvi, Firaq Gorakpuri, Bashir Badr, Manzar Bhopali, Raahat Indori, Bekal Utsahi, Sahir Ludhyanvi etc.etc. Shayari ki jo bunyadi zarooraten hain, achha shayar banne ke liye,unka pura karna zaroori hai aur wo seekhna chahiye. Thank to all.
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #20 on: November 27, 2009, 07:17:19 AM »
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Doston...ka mil jaana hua...Madhuji.....aap ke effort se....thanks...di
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Sorry I don't agree with Pankji....poem ka criticism tou same thread mai hoga anyatha uska koi arth he nahi rahega......comments padhne ko chat mai koi nahi jaata.....
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«Reply #21 on: November 27, 2009, 07:57:14 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on November 27, 2009, 06:09:29 AM
Aapki Bat Se Sahmat Hu Per MEin Is bat ke liye nahi bol rha Geet Ji Ne Likha Ki Dusro Ka Hausla Badhane Mein Mein Bhi Ek Hu To Mein Unse Puchta Hu Ki Wo Roj Yo Pe Aati Hai Per Kis Kis Post Pe Wo Reply Krti Hai Kis Kis Ka Wo Hausla Afjai Karti hai Mujhe Agar Yad Hai TO MeinE Ek Bar Geet Ji KO PM Karke Bola Tha ki Geet Ji kya Aap meri Thread Padhoge aur reply karoge tab Jakar Unhone reply Kiya Tha Aur Uske bad meine kam se kam 30 se upar thread kholi per unka ek bhi reply nahi aaya to hausla kaha badha wah wah na sahi per galti to nikal skte hai jise aage aur kuch behtar likhne ko mile thats clear Koyal Ji

Rishi Bro Tumne Thikh Hi Kaha Hai Geet Ji Ne Kaha Ke Woh Hausla Afjai Karti Hai Lekin Hum Kuch Bhi Send Kare Unhe Fark Nahi Padta Yeh Mere Sath Bhi Huwa Hai Maine Bhi Kahin Post Send Kiya Lekin Kuch Log Hi Rly Dete Hai Geet Ji Hum Aapko Yeh Nahi Keh Rahe Hai Ke  Rishi Bro Aur Mere Kehne Ka Matlab Yeh Nahi Ke Aap Hamari Post Ki Tareef Karo Lekin Jo Chiz Aap Nahi Karti Ho Toh  Pls Uska Zikr Bhi Naa Karo Hamari Taqleef Hum Jaante Hai
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #22 on: November 27, 2009, 08:13:08 AM »
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GEET JI KIYA LIKHA HAI AAP SABKO KYUN SAMAJH MEIN NAHI AATI,UNKA KAHENE KA MATLAB HAI UNHE HUMSE HAUSLA MILTI HAI.AB BAS BHI KARO,AUR RIYAZ JI I AM SORRY.
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #23 on: November 27, 2009, 08:51:19 AM »
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Madhu JI Mein Geet Ji Ki Her Bat Samjh Aati Hai Geet Ji Meri Bahut Acchi frnd hai aur Mein unke bare mein nahi mein un sabhi yoindia users ke liye bol rha hu jo thread padhte to hai per kuch reply nahi krte kyuki meine yaha pe dekha hai ki koi yo ka purana user likhta hai to na jane kitne reply mil jate hai per jab koi naya user likhta hai to usse kuch bhi reply nahi milta aisa kyu are kisi ki agar hum himmat badhane mein humare kya chala jayega bus yehi kahna chahta hu agar geet ji aapko bura laga to tahe dil se sorry bolta hu i m so sorryyyyyyyyy
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #24 on: November 27, 2009, 09:48:40 AM »
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Kuchh bhi kaho....har thread ko kholna aur padhna aur comment karna....har kisi ke liye sambhav nahi hai...samay ka abhav hota hai....kai baar aap khali stress relive k liye aate ho..games khelne ko he....
Kai baar sirf achhi- achhi rachna padhne ka he dil hota hai...
Koi jaroori nahi ki aap comment kare he....
Kai baar negative comments karne ka dil nahi hota.....aur galat appriciation kar nahi paate....kavita...shayari..ye sab mood ki baat hai......aur mood kisi ka kisi k haath mai nahi hota...
Hope U all will agree with me....


Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on November 27, 2009, 08:51:19 AM
Madhu JI Mein Geet Ji Ki Her Bat Samjh Aati Hai Geet Ji Meri Bahut Acchi frnd hai aur Mein unke bare mein nahi mein un sabhi yoindia users ke liye bol rha hu jo thread padhte to hai per kuch reply nahi krte kyuki meine yaha pe dekha hai ki koi yo ka purana user likhta hai to na jane kitne reply mil jate hai per jab koi naya user likhta hai to usse kuch bhi reply nahi milta aisa kyu are kisi ki agar hum himmat badhane mein humare kya chala jayega bus yehi kahna chahta hu agar geet ji aapko bura laga to tahe dil se sorry bolta hu i m so sorryyyyyyyyy
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«Reply #25 on: November 27, 2009, 09:52:04 AM »
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YAHAN KYA LAFDA CHAL RAHA HAI SAMAJH NAHIN AATA HAI...
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #26 on: November 27, 2009, 09:52:56 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 27, 2009, 09:48:40 AM
Kuchh bhi kaho....har thread ko kholna aur padhna aur comment karna....har kisi ke liye sambhav nahi hai...samay ka abhav hota hai....kai baar aap khali stress relive k liye aate ho..games khelne ko he....
Kai baar sirf achhi- achhi rachna padhne ka he dil hota hai...
Koi jaroori nahi ki aap comment kare he....
Kai baar negative comments karne ka dil nahi hota.....aur galat appriciation kar nahi paate....kavita...shayari..ye sab mood ki baat hai......aur mood kisi ka kisi k haath mai nahi hota...
Hope U all will agree with me....

Sorry Shayad Mujhe Ab Kisi Ke Sath Bahas Nahi KrnI Aur Mein Agree Hu Ya Na Hu Ye Mera Dil Janta Hai Bus Aap LOg JO Bolo WO Hi Ab Mere Liye Sahi Hai
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«Reply #27 on: November 27, 2009, 09:53:45 AM »
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Quote from: cara on November 27, 2009, 09:52:04 AM
YAHAN KYA LAFDA CHAL RAHA HAI SAMAJH NAHIN AATA HAI...

Kuch Nahi Cara Ji New Thread Open Krne Ki Koshish Chal Rahi Bus Aur Humara Yaha Se Jane Ki Taiyari
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«Reply #28 on: November 27, 2009, 09:54:53 AM »
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Aap sahi kaha Koyal ji,i agree with you,main bhi stress ke wajah se yanha aati hoon,yahi soch kar ki todha toh sukun milegi,par jab ye sab baatein hone lagti hai toh bahut dukh hoti hai. sad7
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #29 on: November 27, 2009, 10:05:42 AM »
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Kab aur kahaan ja rahi hai janaab ki Sawaari....? Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! hello hello hello

YU NA RUKSAT HONA GULSHAN SE ruth ke
Patt-jhad ke baad he bahaar aati hai
Jaith ke baad aata hai saawan bhado
Kadi garmi ke baad aati thandi fuhaar... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on November 27, 2009, 09:53:45 AM
Kuch Nahi Cara Ji New Thread Open Krne Ki Koshish Chal Rahi Bus Aur Humara Yaha Se Jane Ki Taiyari
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