Hume Dosti Nibhani na aai!!!

by Pooja on July 11, 2008, 08:45:51 PM
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«Reply #60 on: July 26, 2008, 06:23:59 PM »
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Buhat shukriya Roja saahiba,,, bade dinon baad aap ko dekha...
Aap bhi likhte...
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«Reply #61 on: July 27, 2008, 03:48:33 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 26, 2008, 05:41:28 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob Pooja didi Applause  Applause
thanks Roja...
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«Reply #62 on: August 20, 2008, 06:12:08 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 26, 2008, 05:46:37 PM
Khwaish ji bahut dino ke baad bahut accha laga aapko padkar.
bahut accha likha hai aapne .. esp.. the following lines really very good to read.

Tujhe Rote Dekh kar, Dusra Bhi Ro Padhe,
Har ek se itna pyaar aur samaan le...

Kabh Tak Insaan Chalte rahega yuhi
Dil mein Gile aur shikwe liye...
Mita de har uss sawaal ko jo
tere apno se tujhe door karta hai,


 Applause  Applause Keep up. Thumbs UP


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Roja..
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«Reply #63 on: April 08, 2009, 05:31:29 PM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on July 12, 2008, 07:00:03 AM
Subhan Allah..La-Jawaab..La-Raib

Is Yoindia Me Agar Kisi Ko Shayri-e-Dost Padhni Ho To..

Pooja Ji
Bhai Syed
Sayyid Saab...A'ala Paaoge Sub Main..

Waah Kya Khoob Likhte Ye Shoa'ra Hazraat..

Aur Waise Bhi..Bhai Syed,sayyid Saab,Bhai Azeem,bekarar ji,abd ji,
Ek Se Badhkar Ek..A'ala se a'ala Kalaam Pesh Karte Hai...

Wo Alfaaz Inki Kalam Se Rawaa'n Dawaa'n Har Dam Rehte Hai Ki..Jiska Main Taswwur Bhi Nahi Kar Sakta Kabhi..!!!

pata nahi is post ka jawab dena kaise rah gaya... ajj jab phir se yah thread parr rahi thi to apni galati ka ahsaas hua!!

bahoot bahoot shukaria Muhammed ji!!!
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«Reply #64 on: April 22, 2009, 06:30:14 PM »
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Dosto ki berukhi,
is kadar jaati hai chubh kabhi kabhi
mil bhi jaaye to,
tees rahti hai ander kahin thumi thumi
sabar hai, sabar tha,
sabar ki to yaha koi baat nahi
samjh jayega tu, nasamjh to nahi,
thum ke rah gai thi jameen wahin ki wahin!!
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«Reply #65 on: May 05, 2009, 04:45:08 PM »
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Kuchh arz karte hain...

Dil men dabba kar aah ko rehne lage ho tum,
Khud jante ho kis tarah tarapne lage ho tum,
Hoti hain khatayen dastoor-e-dosti men kai,
Kahdo sabhi bebaak kyun chup rehne lage ho tum...

Syed
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«Reply #66 on: May 06, 2009, 04:25:11 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 08, 2009, 05:31:29 PM
pata nahi is post ka jawab dena kaise rah gaya... ajj jab phir se yah thread parr rahi thi to apni galati ka ahsaas hua!!

bahoot bahoot shukaria Muhammed ji!!!

Pooja ji..aapko shayad Pata Na Hoga Lekin Meri Ye Comment Ne Kuch Sharr-pasand Logo k Dil Mein Ajeeb Sa Toofan Paida Kiya..Aur Us waqt bada Hangaama Khada Hua Tha..Maine Un Ahl e Taqbbur ko qarara Jawaab bhi Diya Tha..
Fir Ye Baat Aage Na badhe Is Liye Mere Bhai Syed Nami K Kehne se Maine Saari Reply waapis Le Li Thi..
Aur Na Chahte Huee bhi Un Tamam Logo Se Maafi Mangi Thi..Jo Is Thread pe Shayad Moujud Ho..Khaar rakhne wale To Jal bhoon K Khaq Ho gaye..Kasam Khuda Ki..Pooja ! Mazaa aa Gaya..Reply To Maine La Jawab Di Thi Un sabko Jo


Quote from: Pooja on April 22, 2009, 06:30:14 PM
Dosto ki berukhi,
is kadar jaati hai chubh kabhi kabhi
mil bhi jaaye to,
tees rahti hai ander kahin thumi thumi
sabar hai, sabar tha,
sabar ki to yaha koi baat nahi
samjh jayega tu, nasamjh to nahi,
thum ke rah gai thi jameen wahin ki wahin!!

kuch alag Hi Andaaz k Ash'aar..pooja ji
Likhe Hai Bade Hi Khoob
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«Reply #67 on: May 12, 2009, 05:42:08 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 05, 2009, 04:45:08 PM
Kuchh arz karte hain...

Dil men dabba kar aah ko rehne lage ho tum,
Khud jante ho kis tarah tarapne lage ho tum,
Hoti hain khatayen dastoor-e-dosti men kai,
Kahdo sabhi bebaak kyun chup rehne lage ho tum...

Syed


bahoot khoob syednaami
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«Reply #68 on: May 12, 2009, 05:43:01 AM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on May 06, 2009, 04:25:11 AM
Pooja ji..aapko shayad Pata Na Hoga Lekin Meri Ye Comment Ne Kuch Sharr-pasand Logo k Dil Mein Ajeeb Sa Toofan Paida Kiya..Aur Us waqt bada Hangaama Khada Hua Tha..Maine Un Ahl e Taqbbur ko qarara Jawaab bhi Diya Tha..
Fir Ye Baat Aage Na badhe Is Liye Mere Bhai Syed Nami K Kehne se Maine Saari Reply waapis Le Li Thi..
Aur Na Chahte Huee bhi Un Tamam Logo Se Maafi Mangi Thi..Jo Is Thread pe Shayad Moujud Ho..Khaar rakhne wale To Jal bhoon K Khaq Ho gaye..Kasam Khuda Ki..Pooja ! Mazaa aa Gaya..Reply To Maine La Jawab Di Thi Un sabko Jo


kuch alag Hi Andaaz k Ash'aar..pooja ji
Likhe Hai Bade Hi Khoob


apki pahli baat samjh nahi aai.....

doosri ke liye shukaria
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«Reply #69 on: May 12, 2009, 06:09:18 AM »
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Pooja sahiba, aapki haosla afzai ka shukriya...
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Sonu
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«Reply #70 on: May 12, 2009, 06:11:34 AM »
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sabne bahut acha likha hai keep up the wonderful work dosto
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«Reply #71 on: August 12, 2009, 09:50:56 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on May 31, 2009, 09:32:15 AM
Bahot hi acha aur dard aur sachai se bhara likha aapne Pooja ji,n very nice replies ek koshish kar rahe hain         

                                        
umr bhar sabse dosti nibhai ab kahte ho ki dosti nibhani na aayi,
na kahiya aisa varna Khuda kah uthega usne dosti hi nahi banayi,
ye to sach hai ki sach ko bolne ke lie himmat chahiye,
humne jab bhi hausla chaha doston ki yaad bahot aai

maafi chahtihu ki bahoot der baad apki is post per najar parri... shukaria meri kavita ko samjh kar.. itna acha likhne ka...

kuch lines dekhne main, padne mai sadharan hoti hai,... magar bahoot waqat ke liye dil ko chu kar kahin ander simat jaati hai...

thanks kaash ji!!
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«Reply #72 on: August 28, 2009, 11:08:15 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on August 28, 2009, 01:34:05 PM
ye welcome Pooja ji
aapne vaqai bahot hi achi poem likhi thi

shukaria Kaash ji!!
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«Reply #73 on: November 22, 2009, 02:45:33 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Pooja ji,Kaash ji,Syed ji,Muhmmed ji,sabhi ne kamaal ke likha.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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