सच्ची स्वतंत्रता--रस्तोगी

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आओ सब प्रण करे भारत को मुक्त करे भ्रष्टाचार से
कोई नारी पीड़ित न हो अब किसी के अत्त्याचार से
संसद को पूरे सैसन चलने दे कोई भी व्यधान न करे
जो संसद में ऐसी हरकते करे उसे संसद से बाहर करे
जनता को सासंद चुनने के साथ हटाने का अधिकार मिले
नारी को इस देश में हर जगह पूरा पूरा सम्मान मिले
कोई भूखा न सोये यहाँ,भारत को मुक्त करे भुखमरी से
आओ सब प्रण करे भारत को मुक्त करे भ्रष्टाचार से
कोई नारी पीड़ित न हो अब किसी के अत्याचार से

घर घर शिक्षा का दीप जलाये,कोई भी न अनपढ़ रहे
हर हाथ को रोजगार मिले,कोई भी न बेरोजगार रहे
स्वच्छ भारत हो,कोई गंदगी न फैलाये ऐसा प्रण करे
कोई भी बेटी की हत्या न करे ऐसी मन में धारणा धरे
जो भारत के सविंधान में विश्वास न करे उसे बाहर करे
जो खाता यहाँ,गुण गाता किसी के उसे देशद्रोही नाम धरे
आओ सब मिलकर करे भारत को मुक्त करे आंतकवाद से
तभी भारत स्वंतत्र होगा जब ये धारणा धरे सब आज से
आओ सब प्रण करे,भारत को मुक्त करे भ्रष्टाचार से
कोई नारी पीड़ित न हो,अब किसी के अत्याचार से  

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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2015, 12:06:50 PM »
Bahot hi khubsurat creation sirji...one rau aapki is creation ke liye...

Bilkul sahi kaha hai Aapne...agar Aisa ho jaye to humare desh Mai sab khushi se rahe payenge....bah u betiya aazadi se ghar se bahar nikal payegi....
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2015, 01:34:06 PM »
बहुत अच्छी बात कही आपने सर जी।
आपकी रचना की प्रशंसा करता हूँ।
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2015, 01:44:08 PM »
श्री उमराऊ सिंह जी,प्रंशसा के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद| साथ ही स्वन्त्रता दिवस की शुभकामनाये भी स्वीकार करे|
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2015, 01:48:27 PM »
Bahot hi khubsurat creation sirji...one rau aapki is creation ke liye...

Bilkul sahi kaha hai Aapne...agar Aisa ho jaye to humare desh Mai sab khushi se rahe payenge....bah u betiya aazadi se ghar se bahar nikal payegi....
शिखा जी, प्रंशसा व राऊ देने के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद,साथ में स्वन्त्रता दिवस की शुभ  कामनाये स्वीकार करे|
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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2015, 05:42:59 PM »
Bahot hi achha likha aapne! Very nice!
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«Reply #6 on: August 15, 2015, 06:52:03 PM »
पूजा जी,प्रंशसा के लिए धन्यवाद,साथ ही स्वतंत्रता दिवस की बधाई स्वीकार करे
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2015, 07:27:29 PM »
waah waah waah bohat khubsurat
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2015, 10:21:33 PM »
श्री जीत जैनम जी शुक्रिया
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2015, 09:12:33 AM »
bahut khoobsurat ehsaas hai Rastogi Sahib. However what can really be achieved in India's democracy & how I don't know. I know elections are expensive, that is why in India they hold elections every five years. In between you just can't do a damn thing. Here in America elections are held every 4 years, In between twice you have the opportunity to put to ballot anything you don't agree with. In India you can only make slogans which does not achieve anything. In fact it only disrupts everything.

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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2015, 11:45:12 AM »
shri Surindran ji, thank you very much for your comments and appreciation.
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