Plestine ke liye Awaz Uthate Kyoon Nahi !!

by abdulqadeer on January 11, 2009, 10:25:22 AM
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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #15 on: January 12, 2009, 04:36:26 AM »
Bohat Hi Achhi Soch Hai Aapko Qadeer Bhai
Mere Bhai Humpe Ye Sab Mushibaten Kyun Aati Hai?
Kyun Ki Hum Sab Amal Par Hi Nahi Hai
Aur Khuda Ne To Saaf Saaf Farma Diya Hai
Ki Agar Tum Log Imaan Se Hath Jaaoge
Mere Naafarman Ban Jaaoge To
Main Tum Par Zalim Baadsah Muqarrar Karunga
Hum Sab Koi Chahiye Ki Hum Pahle Amal Pe
Aa Jaaye ALLAH Se Dua Kare Insha ALLAH Phir
Kisi Ki Himat Nahi Ki Musalman Pe Ungli Uthaye
Par Hum ALLAH Aur Uske Rasool Ki Hi Na Farmani Karte Hai
To Hume Mada Kaise Milegi?
Bas Dua Karo Pahle Sab Faramabardaar Ban Jaaye
Aur Dua Kare Phir Insha ALLAH Dekhe Kya Hota Hai
ALLAH Hum Sab Ko Deen Ki Sachi Samajh Ata Kare
Aur Quran Aur Hadish Pe Chalen Wala Bana De Aameen.
Gar Meri Baatein Buri Lagi Ho  Maafi Chahta Hoon
ALLAH Sabko Khush Aur Salaamat Rakhe Ameen....



Kya Baath kahi haimere bhai !! kasam se dil chu liya tumne !!Allah tumhe khush rakhe aur ilam ki daulat se mala maal kar de !!khuda Hafiz mere bhai !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #16 on: January 12, 2009, 04:50:56 AM »
Abdul ji..Maaf kijiega...mai yaha nayi hu....apki soch achhi hai par bayan me thoda sa adhurapan hai.....Jis se galat matlab nikalta hai...K aap Arab mulko ko hamare mulk se upar bata rahe hai.....!
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«Reply #17 on: January 12, 2009, 04:58:29 AM »
Abdul ji..Maaf kijiega...mai yaha nayi hu....apki soch achhi hai par bayan me thoda sa adhurapan hai.....Jis se galat matlab nikalta hai...K aap Arab mulko ko hamare mulk se upar bata rahe hai.....!

YE sunch pe munassir karta hai janab maine arab bashindon ko uper nahi kiya us zarzameen ko upar kiya hai jiss zameen se islam ka wajood hai !! yahi to galti ho jati hai na hum message ko thik se samajh nahi pate aur naraz ho jate hain !! am  true indian and true muslim !! eak bar fir se pado aur raushni dalo to shayad meri koshish ke ahesaas tak pahonch ja-o-ge !!

Sorry if am worng some where try to make me correct !! mere is ahesaas ko koi mulk koi mulk ki sarzameen se na juden !! Watan se mahobbath to hum bi be panah karte hain salma ji  !!

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«Reply #18 on: January 12, 2009, 05:05:39 AM »
U hav taken me in wrong sense!!
Abdul ji maine pada or Apke msg ka do meaning nikla jisse ye confusion create hua hai........Or agar mujhe sahi nahi lagta to kavi na kehti!!
Neways its upto u hw u wana take ma words!!
Sorry to interrupt u!!
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«Reply #19 on: January 12, 2009, 05:10:47 AM »
U hav taken me in wrong sense!!
Abdul ji maine pada or Apke msg ka do meaning nikla jisse ye confusion create hua hai........Or agar mujhe sahi nahi lagta to kavi na kehti!!
Neways its upto u hw u wana take ma words!!
Sorry to interrupt u!!

Salma Ji baath mujhe kavi kahene ki nahi hai hum sab yahan eak family jaise hain agar family koi shaqs galti karta hai to paheli nahi bhojha-e- jaati saaf bataya jaata hai aur app naraz mat ho !!hum sub dost hain yaar bus itna bata-o ke dubble meaning kahan se nikalta hai mujhe bhi pata chale ke maine galti kahan ki hai to sudhar sakoonga na aur maafi bhi maang sakonga sub se !!

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«Reply #20 on: January 12, 2009, 05:16:17 AM »
Mujhe kuch nahi kehna hai Abdul ji!!
Aap to bahut behtarin shayar hai...Or bahut purane yaha k....Meri aukad nahi k mai apki galti pakad k sudhar saku....Isliye pehle hi maafi mang chuki hu!!
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«Reply #21 on: January 12, 2009, 05:20:21 AM »
Abdul ji..Maaf kijiega...mai yaha nayi hu....apki soch achhi hai par bayan me thoda sa adhurapan hai.....Jis se galat matlab nikalta hai...K aap Arab mulko ko hamare mulk se upar bata rahe hai.....!

maine arab mulk hamare mulk se upar nahi bataya salma ji maine sirf us zameen ko upar bataya hai jo har musalmaan maanta hai !! magar ye sirf muslim ke liye mere non muslim bhai isko react na karen ye sirf hum muslim bhaiyon ke aqide ki baath hai !!duniya ki har religion maanti hai where ever there is house of god that place is best place in the planet aur kaaba jis zalim per muslim ke liye zarori hai ke us zameen bahetar maane !! aur meri non muslim bhai us jaga ki respect karte hain aur hum bhi us jaga ki dil se izzath karte hain jahan mere non muslim bhai maante hai!!mai ne mere muslim bhaiyon ke liye likha hai us zameen ke bare apne usse hindustan aur arab countries se jud diya salma ji !!

fir maafi chahata hon agar galti howi to !!

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«Reply #22 on: January 12, 2009, 05:25:05 AM »
Mujhe kuch nahi kehna hai Abdul ji!!
Aap to bahut behtarin shayar hai...Or bahut purane yaha k....Meri aukad nahi k mai apki galti pakad k sudhar saku....Isliye pehle hi maafi mang chuki hu!!


yaar tum is tarah kyoon react karti ho hum se !!ke tum naye ho ghar me agar naya bacha hota hai to wo naya hota apna hota hai aur wohi subka laadla hota hai salma ji !! aur next time se ye maafi wafi maangne mangwane ki riwaz change kardo yaar !! hum eakhain hum eak hain aur hum sub eak jaise hi hain koi bada nahi koi chuta nahi aur naya nahi koipurana nahi !!mujhe maaf kardo salma ji !! tahe dil se maafi mangta hon !!sorry salma

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«Reply #23 on: January 12, 2009, 05:31:40 AM »
Ye Ghazal maine Phlestine ki basbasi ko khuli ankhoon se dekhne wale har wo arab country ko dyhan me rakhte howe likhi hai !! aur kiske against me likhi app mere isharoon se samjh jayen agar ghazal tak pahonch gaye to !!tawajo chahonga !!


Sub milke uske qilaaf awaz uthate kyoon nahi !!
Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !!

Agar eak ho ja-o-ge tum to gazi kahela-o-ge !!
Apni taqath ko eak baar azmate kyoon nahi !!

Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !!

Tumhari sar zameen pe paida howe umar aur hussain !!
Leke howi jazba had se guzar jate kyoon nahi !!

Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !!

Duniya ke har daur me tumne fate payi  hai !!
Is daur me bhi ayyub ki tariq dahorate kyoon nahi !!

Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon  nahi !!

Tumhari sarzameen se milti hai pure alam ko raushni !!
Fir apne andheroon me charag jalate kyoon nahi !!

Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !!

Allah bakshe ga unhe hussain ke hausle qadeer !!
Bus eak baar wo apne hausloon ko azamate kyoon nahi !!

Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon  nahi !!

Sub milke uske qilaaf awaz uthate kyoon nahi !!

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Bakhoobi likha hai aapne Qadeer Ji..
Aur yakeenan bahut hi neik neeyati se bhi likha hai... Applause Applause Applause

Aapne guhaar di hai soye hue zameeron ko.. dua hai aapki guhaar unke soye hue zameeron mein nayi jaan daale..  notworthy

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«Reply #24 on: January 12, 2009, 05:39:37 AM »
Shukriya itni izzat afzayi ka abdul ji!!
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«Reply #25 on: January 12, 2009, 05:44:37 AM »
Bakhoobi likha hai aapne Qadeer Ji..
Aur yakeenan bahut hi neik neeyati se bhi likha hai... Applause Applause Applause

Aapne guhaar di hai soye hue zameeron ko.. dua hai aapki guhaar unke soye hue zameeron mein nayi jaan daale..  notworthy



Shukriya janab itni izzath ki hai apne is ghazal ki meri mahenat ka sila de diya apne !! meri guhar se kahin achi apke reply ki guhar hai jisne meri ghazal ko utha diya mahefil me !! shukriya janab !!

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«Reply #26 on: January 12, 2009, 10:07:04 AM »
Bohat Hi Achhi Soch Hai Aapko Qadeer Bhai
Mere Bhai Humpe Ye Sab Mushibaten Kyun Aati Hai?
Kyun Ki Hum Sab Amal Par Hi Nahi Hai
Aur Khuda Ne To Saaf Saaf Farma Diya Hai
Ki Agar Tum Log Imaan Se Hath Jaaoge
Mere Naafarman Ban Jaaoge To
Main Tum Par Zalim Baadsah Muqarrar Karunga
Hum Sab Koi Chahiye Ki Hum Pahle Amal Pe
Aa Jaaye ALLAH Se Dua Kare Insha ALLAH Phir
Kisi Ki Himat Nahi Ki Musalman Pe Ungli Uthaye
Par Hum ALLAH Aur Uske Rasool Ki Hi Na Farmani Karte Hai
To Hume Mada Kaise Milegi?
Bas Dua Karo Pahle Sab Faramabardaar Ban Jaaye
Aur Dua Kare Phir Insha ALLAH Dekhe Kya Hota Hai
ALLAH Hum Sab Ko Deen Ki Sachi Samajh Ata Kare
Aur Quran Aur Hadish Pe Chalen Wala Bana De Aameen.
Gar Meri Baatein Buri Lagi Ho  Maafi Chahta Hoon
ALLAH Sabko Khush Aur Salaamat Rakhe Ameen....



Beshaq Majid Bhai,.
Sahi Kaha Tumne,.
Hum Sab Apne rab Ki Na Farmaani Kar rahe Hain,.
Tabhi To Hum Logon Par Pareshaaniyaan Bardhti Jaa Rahi Hai,.
Aur Is Mien kisi Ko buraa Kya lagega,.
Kyunki, yahi Sachchaai Hai,.
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«Reply #27 on: January 12, 2009, 10:13:32 AM »
Sajid bhai Apki Ghazal padi maine aur usko samjha bhi maafi chahata hon ke maine khuch aisa mahesoos kiya ke Apko Shayad ye bura laga ke maine arab ki sarzameen ko bada chada ke bolo !! magar wo sarzameen hai tareef ke qabil mere bhai !! Mai manta hon ke duniya me rahene wale insaan sub eak jaise hain koi bada nahi aur koi chuta nahi magar koi sarzamee ko us sarzamee se na mila-o-to bahetar hai.


Aisi Bahoth si Qusisiyaten hain uss zameen jo inshallah kabhi ghazal me pesh karonga sajid bhai !!

Allah ne ussi zameen pe nabiyoon ko utara kyoon hai !!
Ussi zameen pe uski rahemat ka qazana kyoon hai !!
Agar nahi maante zameen ki qusosiyath ko tum !!
To bolo fir ussi zameen pe banaya “Kaaba”  kyoon hai !!

Wo zameen na kabhi  napaak thi, na hai, na hogi !!
Ye is bath ki daleel hai ke “isa” (Alssw ) ki fir se wahin amad hogi !!

Aisi Bahoth si Qusisiyaten hain uss zameen ko jo inshallah kabhi ghazal me pesh karonga sajid bhai !!

Har zameen ko us zameen se na mila-o- wahan gumbade qidra hai!!
Har jagah sirf insaan rahete hain wahan nabiyon ka basera hai!!

Agar maine khuch galath kaha ho to maafi chahata hon sajid bhai !! Allah Hum sub ko taufiq ata farmaye Ameen Sum Ameen !!

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Bhai Mujhe Tumhaara Ye Safaai Dena, Dil Ko Choo Liya,.
Bohat Bohat Badhiya,.
Tareefein Kam Lagti Hai,.

Subhan Allah,.
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«Reply #28 on: January 12, 2009, 10:21:07 AM »
Abdul ji..Maaf kijiega...mai yaha nayi hu....apki soch achhi hai par bayan me thoda sa adhurapan hai.....Jis se galat matlab nikalta hai...K aap Arab mulko ko hamare mulk se upar bata rahe hai.....!

Are Salma Madam,.

Islaam Hume Seekhaata Hai,.
Watan Se Mohabbat Karna,.
Chahe Jis Watan Me Bhi Raho,.

Nabi-e-Kareem {SAWS} Ka Irshaad Hai, Ke Watan Se Wafaadaari Karna Bhi, Imaan Waale Ki Nishaani Hai,.

Aap Qadeer Bhai, Ke baaton Ka Galat Matlab Nikaal Rahe Ho,.
Waise Hamaara Bharat Bhi Mahaan Hai,.

Yahaan Bhi, Allah waalon Ka Basera Hai,.
Hazrat Khwaja Gareeb-un-Nawaaz,.{RA}
Hazrat, Haji Ali,.{RA}
Harzat Nizamuddin Auliya{RA}
Hazrat, Tipu Sultan,.
Aur Bhi Hai, Allah Waale, is Bharat Desh Mein,.

Bas Qadeer Bhai, Ka Kehna Alag Tha,.
Wo Rab Ki Sar Zameen ke baare Mein keh Rahe The..

Please Salma Ji, Aap galat Matlab Na Nikaalein..

I Respect Ur Patriousim.
Allah Kareem Sabko Aisi Hi Watan Ki Mohabbat Bakshe, aameen,.
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«Reply #29 on: January 12, 2009, 10:53:58 AM »
Are Salma Madam,.

Islaam Hume Seekhaata Hai,.
Watan Se Mohabbat Karna,.
Chahe Jis Watan Me Bhi Raho,.

Nabi-e-Kareem {SAWS} Ka Irshaad Hai, Ke Watan Se Wafaadaari Karna Bhi, Imaan Waale Ki Nishaani Hai,.

Aap Qadeer Bhai, Ke baaton Ka Galat Matlab Nikaal Rahe Ho,.
Waise Hamaara Bharat Bhi Mahaan Hai,.

Yahaan Bhi, Allah waalon Ka Basera Hai,.
Hazrat Khwaja Gareeb-un-Nawaaz,.{RA}
Hazrat, Haji Ali,.{RA}
Harzat Nizamuddin Auliya{RA}
Hazrat, Tipu Sultan,.
Aur Bhi Hai, Allah Waale, is Bharat Desh Mein,.

Bas Qadeer Bhai, Ka Kehna Alag Tha,.
Wo Rab Ki Sar Zameen ke baare Mein keh Rahe The..

Please Salma Ji, Aap galat Matlab Na Nikaalein..

I Respect Ur Patriousim.
Allah Kareem Sabko Aisi Hi Watan Ki Mohabbat Bakshe, aameen,.


Shukriya Janasheen apne izzath bakshi is nacheez ko tomera hausla badne laga !! waise salma ki baat kam aina zara bhi bura nahi mana azeem bhai yaar ye to hota raheta hai hum eak family ki tarah hai !!allah hum sub ko taufeeq ata farmaye !! Ameen !!

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