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by shayara__udita on September 29, 2005, 10:17:57 AM
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«Reply #30 on: September 14, 2006, 11:33:21 AM »
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«Reply #31 on: September 15, 2006, 12:25:36 PM »
Ur Welcome
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«Reply #32 on: November 19, 2008, 06:27:14 PM »
Quote from: ranjeet_rp on September 14, 2006, 06:38:10 AM
NAHIN HAI BANNA MUJHKO DEVI
NA CHAHOON RANDI KAA KHITAAB
MUJHKO BHI BAN KAR RAHNA HAI
SIRF EK INSAAN

INSAAN JAISE KI TUM HO
JISE RAAT BHAR BAHAR RAHNE PAR
NAHIN DENA PARTA KOI JAWAAB
JISKE BAHAR NIKALTE HI
KOI USKA PEECHA NAHIN KARTA
AUR BHAI KAHNE SE PAHLE
CHARACHTER CIRTIFICATE NAHIN MAANGTA

KISI KO BHAI KAHNE SE PAHLE
TUM KYA ITNA SOCHTE HO
JITNA SOCHNA PARTA HAI
KISI KO BAHAN BANANE KE LIYE?

MAANA KI TUMHARA BHI HOTA HAI SHOSHAN
PAR TUNAHIN NAHIN BHUGATNI PARTI
KISI KE SOSHAN KI SAJAA
JAISE MUJHE BHUGATNI PARTI HAI

MAANA KI LARTI HAI SAAS
APNI HAR BAHU KE SAATH
PAR KYA ISKA BHI KAARAN TUM NAHIN HO?
TUMHI NE TO BANAYA HAI YE RIWAZ
KI BETI KO MAAN KE PAAS NAHIN
SAAS KE SAATH RAHNA HOGA
AGAR HO JAAYE ISKA ULTAA
TO KYA LARANGE NAHIN
SASUR AUR DAAMAAD?

TUM CHAHE KUCH BHI KARO
TUM EK INSAAN HO
PAR AGAR MAIN BITAAON JINDGI
SAMAJ KI TANG GALIYON MAIN
FIR TO KAHLAATI DEVI HOON
PAR AGAR HO MERA SHOSHAN BHI
CHAHE BINA MERI MARJI KE
TO KAHLAATI RANDI HOON
AAJ TAK IS SAMAAJ MAIN
HOON EK JAROORAT KAA SAAMAAN
DUNIA WAALON YE TO BATAO
KAHAN SE HOON MAIN INSAAN?
KAHAN SE HOON MAIN INSAAN?
KAHAN SE HOON MAIN INSAAN?

Aacji koshash hay Ranjit.. bohat aacha mazmoon bandha hay... keep it up..

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«Reply #33 on: January 24, 2009, 03:14:18 PM »
Quote from: shayara__udita on September 29, 2005, 10:17:57 AM


mujhe garv hai ki main hu ek aurat,
usse bhi badkar garv hai ki mera desh hai bharat.
bharat ek aisa desh hai jahan auraton ko devi ka darza diya jata,
aur bharat hi wahi desh hai jahan adhiktar auraton ka balatkar kiya jata.
ek taraf school-collego me ladkiyo ke liye special reservation rakha jata hai,
dusre taraf ladki ki nabalik awastha me shaadi kar diya jata hai.
ajeeb se kuch rasme hai,
bharat me hi jo dikhte hai.
aurat ko agar beta huya to usse zyada khushnaseeb aur koi nahin,
lekin galti se gar ladki hui to-"kalmuhi,tu mar kyu nahi gayi".
arrey!chodo yeh dikhavat,
har bat me milavat.
do auraton ko unka asli darza,
hai humme itna dum ki utar denge apka sara karza.


 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Udita... Aaj Maine Yeh Kavita Dekha. Bahut accha likha hai aapne. Nice thinking... and creation ...
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«Reply #34 on: January 24, 2009, 03:21:35 PM »
Quote from: shayara__udita on September 29, 2005, 10:17:57 AM


mujhe garv hai ki main hu ek aurat,
usse bhi badkar garv hai ki mera desh hai bharat.
bharat ek aisa desh hai jahan auraton ko devi ka darza diya jata,
aur bharat hi wahi desh hai jahan adhiktar auraton ka balatkar kiya jata.
ek taraf school-collego me ladkiyo ke liye special reservation rakha jata hai,
dusre taraf ladki ki nabalik awastha me shaadi kar diya jata hai.
ajeeb se kuch rasme hai,
bharat me hi jo dikhte hai.
aurat ko agar beta huya to usse zyada khushnaseeb aur koi nahin,
lekin galti se gar ladki hui to-"kalmuhi,tu mar kyu nahi gayi".
arrey!chodo yeh dikhavat,
har bat me milavat.
do auraton ko unka asli darza,
hai humme itna dum ki utar denge apka sara karza.
Nice one Udita Ji
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«Reply #35 on: January 25, 2009, 08:52:57 AM »
good work all
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«Reply #36 on: February 01, 2009, 03:26:30 PM »
Aachi koshish Udita...  Applause

Sajid Hadayat
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«Reply #37 on: August 17, 2009, 03:20:39 AM »
बडे खामोश रहते हैं अभी हम,
सुना है लोग अब भी बोलते हैं .
बडे दिल से लगाकर दिल यहाँ पर ,
सुना है लोग अब दिल तोड़ते हैं
कभी अमुआ की अमराई पे कोयल ,
कुहू कुहु के गाती गीत थी पर ,
सुबह की शाख पे बैठी कोयल है ,
नगर में गीत कागा छेडते हैं.
धनक खिलती दिखी थी कल जहां पर ,
आज मरघट सा वो पनघट रुआंसा .
जो बुझाया करे थे प्यास कल तक,
आज वोही क्यों प्यासा छोड़ते हैं
वो सागर रूप के हैं होंगे होंगे ,
कमल तो झील का होता सदा है
हमें अपना बनाने के भरोसे ,
दिला कर खुद भरोसा तोड़ते हैं .
किसी मन्दिर की चौखट पर जलेगा ,
जले गा या किसी मरघट पे फिर भी,
रहेगा दीप तो हर हाल दीपक,
जला कर मन-जलाता हैं छोड़ते हैं9815524600
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«Reply #38 on: December 02, 2010, 07:16:32 AM »
Quote from: shayara__udita on September 29, 2005, 10:17:57 AM


mujhe garv hai ki main hu ek aurat,
usse bhi badkar garv hai ki mera desh hai bharat.
bharat ek aisa desh hai jahan auraton ko devi ka darza diya jata,
aur bharat hi wahi desh hai jahan adhiktar auraton ka balatkar kiya jata.
ek taraf school-collego me ladkiyo ke liye special reservation rakha jata hai,
dusre taraf ladki ki nabalik awastha me shaadi kar diya jata hai.
ajeeb se kuch rasme hai,
bharat me hi jo dikhte hai.
aurat ko agar beta huya to usse zyada khushnaseeb aur koi nahin,
lekin galti se gar ladki hui to-"kalmuhi,tu mar kyu nahi gayi".
arrey!chodo yeh dikhavat,
har bat me milavat.
do auraton ko unka asli darza,
hai humme itna dum ki utar denge apka sara karza.


Bahut bahut Khoob Shayara Udita Ji..

Bahut Hi Damdaar Aur Zindagi Ke kadwe Sach se Bharpoor!!!

Mujhe aapke lekhni mein jo baat sabse zyaada pasand aayi hai Woh hai aapki Imaandari ek subject ko lekar..hum tareefe humesha kar sakte hai par ek sach kehne ke liye Himmat ki zaroorat hoti hai,aur aapne Sach ko lafzon mein utaara..

iss Subject par bahut kuch keh sakta hoon par phir kabhi...

Yoindia mein aajkal aise Social subject's ke par abhut kam hi log likhte hai,acha laga aapki yeh rachna padhkar..

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«Reply #39 on: December 02, 2010, 07:20:24 AM »
Quote from: sukha on August 09, 2006, 12:44:33 AM




Guru Nanak ji ne 500 saal pehle hi ye keh diya tha jab koi essa sochta bhi tha to kano mein brahman log sikka dal dete the
" so kyon manda akhiye jit janme rajan"

use bura kyon kehte ho jo rajaon ko janam dene wali hai

Bilkul Sach Sukha Ji..

Dhan Guru Nanak Devji Ne yeh Awaaz 500 Saal Pehle Uthai Thi..

Ke Hum Kaise Usse Bura Keh Sakte Hai Jo Raaje-Mahraaje,Aur hum sab Ko Janam Deti hai..
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«Reply #40 on: December 02, 2010, 07:27:29 AM »
poem ka theme achha he par ehsaaso ki kami he..

thoda or kam karne ki jarurat he..

nice tried..

dher saari daa shayar _udita ji ..

baki logo ne bhi bahut achhe replies diye hai..

sabhi ke liye dher saari daad~
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