तलाश करता है

by RAJ SOLANKI on August 25, 2014, 03:48:38 PM
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गिद्धों का झुण्ड लाशों को तलाश करता है

जुगनू का झुण्ड रातों को तलाश करता है,

गिर गया शज़र साथ घोंसलों के तुफानो में

परिंदा रोज अपनी शाखों को तलाश करता है,

जिन्होंने देखा था अपनों की नज़र से उसको

बेगानों में रोज उन आँखों को तलाश करता है,

ज़नाज़े में आया तो मरके ही लगा लूँ सीने से

ये मरने वाला चंद साँसों को तलाश करता है,

मिल जाएँ जिसमे वो अपने बनकर एक बार

नींद में हरसू उन ख्वाबों को तलाश करता है,

पानी बहुत पर किसी काम तो आता नहीं है

यह समंदर रोज प्यासों को तलाश करता है,

एक शब और गुजर गयी है बसेरे में रहकर

मुसाफिर फिर नई राहों को तलाश करता है,

रखी हैं डिग्रियाँ कैद फाइलों में ही और

ये नौजवान दर दर कामों को तलाश करता है
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«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2014, 05:10:37 PM »
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पानी बहुत पर किसी काम तो आता नहीं है
यह समंदर रोज प्यासों को तलाश करता है

Kya baat hai Raj Sahib!
Aap chhate jaa rahe hain iss bazm me!!
Dheron daad!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 25, 2014, 06:22:15 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2014, 10:21:06 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2014, 12:50:23 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2014, 12:52:57 AM »
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Doosron ki likhi kavitaayein kripaya shared section mein hi post karein
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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2014, 02:32:46 AM »
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 icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :icon_flower:bahut umdah.
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«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2014, 09:30:02 AM »
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राज जी......

ये अगर आपकी रचना नहीं है तो कृप्या इसके रचयिता का नाम ज़रूर लिखे और इसे संबंधित सेक्शन में ही पोस्ट करें....

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया.....
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«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2014, 11:38:40 AM »
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बड़ा अफ़सोस हुआ राज जी!!
अगर आपकी रचना न हो तो कृपया N.M. mention करें!
यह साहित्यिक भावनाओं को ठेस पहुंचता है!
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«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2014, 02:21:35 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bahut khub.....
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