Aisa Husn Dhoond Laaye Koi,..

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«Reply #60 on: June 12, 2006, 02:30:16 PM »
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wah janasheen ji bahoot khoob....bahoot muddat ke baad ek rally sun ne ko mili...ahaa...lagta hai khoob chale gi...

basti ek basi thi kal tak jahan
khandahar ab katha sunate hain
jis gulshan main kal tak rounaq thi
ab veerana wahan lagta hai.

kyuin dard ki batein kerte ho
ye saza nahi, ye safer tera
jin galion main bachhpan badal gaya
woh sheher pehchana sa lagta hai.



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bahoot sunder janasheen ji......

paanv hamaare apne hain
per safer anjana lagta hai,
Varshon se rehte jis ghar main,
ab woh begana lagta hai.


Shukriya Bhai,..
Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Apne,...

Jis Ghar Mein Basera Tha Apna,..
Wo Ghar Ab Begaana Lagta Hai,..
Manzilein To Lagti Hain Apni,..
Par Safar Anjaana Lagta Hain,..

Basaya Jahan Gulistaan Humne,..
Ab Gulshan Bhi Veeraana Lagta Hai,..
Jaane Kya Sazaa Mil Rahi Hai Mujhe,..
Ke Ab Dard Bhi Pooraana Lagta Hai,..

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«Reply #61 on: June 13, 2006, 06:21:33 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Harash Bhai,..
Bahoot Badiya Likhte Hain App,...

Dekha Jis Sheher Mein Maine Use,..
Wo Sheher Ab Maikhaana Lagta Hai,..
Nigaahein Milakar Peela Di Usne Sharaab,..
Uska Har Andaaz Kateelaana Lagta Hai,..

Sach Kehte Hain Husn Walon Ko Kadar Nahi Mohabbat Ki,..
Jo Chahata Hain Unhe Dil-o-Jaan Se Unhe Wo Deewaana Lagta Hai,...
Hum Hain Ghamon Ke Maare Yahan "Jaanasheen"
Milte Hain Zakham Naye Phir Bhi Pooraana Lagta Hai,..

Kyun Gila Kare Ab Hum Gairon Ka "Jaanasheen"
Banaya Jo Rishta Maine Ab Wo Bhi Begaana Lagta Hai,..
Khaai Hai Chotein Dil Par Maine Kuch Is Taraah,..
Hum Kehte Hain Jab Haqeeqat Apni Mohabbat Ki To Sab Ko Fasaana Lagta Hai,..

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«Reply #62 on: June 13, 2006, 03:01:40 PM »
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kya likhoon jaansasheen ab main yahaan...badi khoobsoorati se tumne apni baat kahi...bahoot sunder....



Shikwa-Gila Jo kutchh bhi ai 'harash'
sach main baigana lagta hai

chotein jo chhipi hain tan-man main
yakeenan ik fasaana lagta hai

haste the jo chehre har waqt jana
aksar yuin udaas ab rehene lagein

chhupa ker dard-e-gum ai haseen
ab lut gaya khazana lagta hai.
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«Reply #63 on: June 14, 2006, 12:32:09 PM »
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kya likhoon jaansasheen ab main yahaan...badi khoobsoorati se tumne apni baat kahi...bahoot sunder....



Shikwa-Gila Jo kutchh bhi ai 'harash'
sach main baigana lagta hai

chotein jo chhipi hain tan-man main
yakeenan ik fasaana lagta hai

haste the jo chehre har waqt jana
aksar yuin udaas ab rehene lagein

chhupa ker dard-e-gum ai haseen
ab lut gaya khazana lagta hai.


Waah Bhai Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai,...
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«Reply #64 on: June 14, 2006, 12:41:24 PM »
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Shikwa Kya Karoon Tujhe,..
Tu Bhi Begaana Lagta Hai,..
Jise Dil Se Lagaa Kar Rakha Tha,..
Ab Wo Bhi Anjaana Lagta Hai,..

Kya Kismat Ka Khel Hai Dekh "Jaanasheen" Tu,..
Kehte Hain Jab Haqeeqat Hum To Wo Bhi Fasaana Lagta Hai,..
Jahaan Sajaaya Tha Gulshan Maine Tere Khwaabon Ka,..
Tere Naa Aane Se Ab Wahan Bhi Veeraana Lagta Hai,..

Khoya To Maine Tumhe To Bas Kuch Pal Ke Liye,..
Yaad Karoon Wo Lamha To Zamaana Lagta Hai,..
Mausam Ki Baat Kya Karein Hum Gham Ke Maare,..
Hume To Gham Hi Suhaana Lagta Hai,..

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«Reply #65 on: June 14, 2006, 02:53:50 PM »
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aisa kyuin likhti ho janasheen/...apna hone se pehle hi baigana....lolssss Usual Smile

main woh ashq kabhi jo beh na saka
fir paiband  ki, baigana lagta hai.

be-wafaayee ki misaalein hain yahaan bahoot
par shikwa bhi tera, suhana lagta hai.

bewafayee thi ki par koi wazeh na thi
fir bhi itraana tera , suhaana lagta hai.



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Shikwa Kya Karoon Tujhe,..
Tu Bhi Begaana Lagta Hai,..
Jise Dil Se Lagaa Kar Rakha Tha,..
Ab Wo Bhi Anjaana Lagta Hai,..

Kya Kismat Ka Khel Hai Dekh "Jaanasheen" Tu,..
Kehte Hain Jab Haqeeqat Hum To Wo Bhi Fasaana Lagta Hai,..
Jahaan Sajaaya Tha Gulshan Maine Tere Khwaabon Ka,..
Tere Naa Aane Se Ab Wahan Bhi Veeraana Lagta Hai,..

Khoya To Maine Tumhe To Bas Kuch Pal Ke Liye,..
Yaad Karoon Wo Lamha To Zamaana Lagta Hai,..
Mausam Ki Baat Kya Karein Hum Gham Ke Maare,..
Hume To Gham Hi Suhaana Lagta Hai,..

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«Reply #66 on: June 15, 2006, 01:35:40 PM »
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aisa kyuin likhti ho janasheen/...apna hone se pehle hi baigana....lolssss Usual Smile

main woh ashq kabhi jo beh na saka
fir paiband  ki, baigana lagta hai.

be-wafaayee ki misaalein hain yahaan bahoot
par shikwa bhi tera, suhana lagta hai.

bewafayee thi ki par koi wazeh na thi
fir bhi itraana tera , suhaana lagta hai.



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Shikwa Kya Karoon Tujhe,..
Tu Bhi Begaana Lagta Hai,..
Jise Dil Se Lagaa Kar Rakha Tha,..
Ab Wo Bhi Anjaana Lagta Hai,..

Kya Kismat Ka Khel Hai Dekh "Jaanasheen" Tu,..
Kehte Hain Jab Haqeeqat Hum To Wo Bhi Fasaana Lagta Hai,..
Jahaan Sajaaya Tha Gulshan Maine Tere Khwaabon Ka,..
Tere Naa Aane Se Ab Wahan Bhi Veeraana Lagta Hai,..

Khoya To Maine Tumhe To Bas Kuch Pal Ke Liye,..
Yaad Karoon Wo Lamha To Zamaana Lagta Hai,..
Mausam Ki Baat Kya Karein Hum Gham Ke Maare,..
Hume To Gham Hi Suhaana Lagta Hai,..

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Rishta Jab Hum Kisi Se Banaate Hain,..
To Hume Maut Aane Se Hi Wo Tord Dete Hain,..
Bhala Hum Tumhe Begaana Kaise Maan Le Bhai,..
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«Reply #67 on: June 15, 2006, 01:40:04 PM »
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Kya Begaane Kya Apne "Jaanasheen"
Har Shaks Ab Mujhe Anjaana Lagta Hai,...

Jahan Sajaai Maine Mehfilein Kabhi Uske Liye,..
Ab Wo Mukhaam Veeraana Lagta Hai,..

Ashq Behte Hain Aankhon Se Mere Har Pal,..
Phir Bhi Jaane Kyun Ye Gham Poorana Lagta Hai,..

Khaakar Bhi Chot Dil Mera Samajhta Nahi Baat Ko,..
Mujhe Ye Dil To Gham Ka Maara Ya Deewaana Lagta Hai,..

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«Reply #68 on: June 15, 2006, 01:54:30 PM »
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waah janaab waah...
chun chun ke kahi aapne gazal apni zubaani
kutchh hamse suno hamaari Gazal hamaari zubaani.
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chain se beete the kutchh pal aapke sung
Anjaana keh, ab mera wazood baigana lagta hai.

ajmana kyuin chahte ho mere zarf ko
hum diya ban jale per fasana lagta hai.

Rooh kitnni chhatpataayi zism ki is kaid main
humko fir zindagi ka bhoz uthhana lagta hai.

Kaash!! humko bin tapaaye hi parakh paate aap
'harash' pighal ker beh jata, per tumeh baigana lagta hai.


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Kya Begaane Kya Apne "Jaanasheen"
Har Shaks Ab Mujhe Anjaana Lagta Hai,...

Jahan Sajaai Maine Mehfilein Kabhi Uske Liye,..
Ab Wo Mukhaam Veeraana Lagta Hai,..

Ashq Behte Hain Aankhon Se Mere Har Pal,..
Phir Bhi Jaane Kyun Ye Gham Poorana Lagta Hai,..

Khaakar Bhi Chot Dil Mera Samajhta Nahi Baat Ko,..
Mujhe Ye Dil To Gham Ka Maara Ya Deewaana Lagta Hai,..

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«Reply #69 on: June 15, 2006, 02:22:59 PM »
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Waah Bhai Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Tumne,...
Sach Ye Tumhari Gazal Dil Ko Choo Gaayi,..

Na Mila Humse Jab Koi Silaa Yahan To Hume Begaana Kehdiya,..
Jiski Kasmein Leti Thi Duniya Kabhi Us Mohabbat Ko Fasaana Keh Diya,..

Hum To Mar Mar Kar Khushiaan Lootaa Te The Unhe "Jaanasheen"
Waqt Kaisa Aaya Dekho Humpar Hamari Bechaini Ko Deewaana Keh Diya,..

Khudaa Unhe Salamat Rakhna Tu Jo Hum Zakham Dekar Muskuraa Rahe Hain,..
Jo Dil Se Lagaa Kar Rakha Tha Hume Aaj Usi Ne Hume Anjaana Keh Diya,..

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«Reply #70 on: June 15, 2006, 02:47:14 PM »
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shukriya janasheen ji....lagta hai janasheen....tadap ab shola ban kahin baras na pade tumhaare Zehen se....kya hum bhi ye soch lein ki humaari tarkash  se nikla her
teer bin waar kiye nishane se waapis laut raha hai Usual Smile .....

Main kise apna kahoon, kisko baigana aajkal,
door mujhse tum lagte ho tabhi fasaana keh diya.

yaad hai khoob tumhaari khushi lootaane ka andaaz
perwaane toh hum the, per khud ko hi deewaana keh diya?

tum jab se gile-shikwon ki baadh main aa gaye sanam
anjaan samajh ke apne ko hamara thikaana poorana keh diya.

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Waah Bhai Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Tumne,...
Sach Ye Tumhari Gazal Dil Ko Choo Gaayi,..

Na Mila Humse Jab Koi Silaa Yahan To Hume Begaana Kehdiya,..
Jiski Kasmein Leti Thi Duniya Kabhi Us Mohabbat Ko Fasaana Keh Diya,..

Hum To Mar Mar Kar Khushiaan Lootaa Te The Unhe "Jaanasheen"
Waqt Kaisa Aaya Dekho Humpar Hamari Bechaini Ko Deewaana Keh Diya,..

Khudaa Unhe Salamat Rakhna Tu Jo Hum Zakham Dekar Muskuraa Rahe Hain,..
Jo Dil Se Lagaa Kar Rakha Tha Hume Aaj Usi Ne Hume Anjaana Keh Diya,..

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«Reply #71 on: June 15, 2006, 02:57:42 PM »
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shukriya janasheen ji....lagta hai janasheen....tadap ab shola ban kahin baras na pade tumhaare Zehen se....kya hum bhi ye soch lein ki humaari tarkash  se nikla her
teer bin waar kiye nishane se waapis laut raha hai Usual Smile .....

Main kise apna kahoon, kisko baigana aajkal,
door mujhse tum lagte ho tabhi fasaana keh diya.

yaad hai khoob tumhaari khushi lootaane ka andaaz
perwaane toh hum the, per khud ko hi deewaana keh diya?

tum jab se gile-shikwon ki baadh main aa gaye sanam
anjaan samajh ke apne ko hamara thikaana poorana keh diya.

Quote from: "Jaanasheen"
Waah Bhai Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Tumne,...
Sach Ye Tumhari Gazal Dil Ko Choo Gaayi,..

Na Mila Humse Jab Koi Silaa Yahan To Hume Begaana Kehdiya,..
Jiski Kasmein Leti Thi Duniya Kabhi Us Mohabbat Ko Fasaana Keh Diya,..

Hum To Mar Mar Kar Khushiaan Lootaa Te The Unhe "Jaanasheen"
Waqt Kaisa Aaya Dekho Humpar Hamari Bechaini Ko Deewaana Keh Diya,..

Khudaa Unhe Salamat Rakhna Tu Jo Hum Zakham Dekar Muskuraa Rahe Hain,..
Jo Dil Se Lagaa Kar Rakha Tha Hume Aaj Usi Ne Hume Anjaana Keh Diya,..

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Nice One Harash Bhai,..

Apka Likha Hua To Teeron Se Bhi Zyada Tez Dil Mein Utar Jaata Hai,.
Bahoot Keep It up Bhai,..
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«Reply #72 on: June 15, 2006, 03:05:21 PM »
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dhanyawaad janasheen ji....God bless you always...
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«Reply #73 on: June 18, 2006, 09:58:24 AM »
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Jo Dekhe Chehra Unka Jo Mere Aankhon Mein Hai
Wo Sab Haseen Chehron Ko Bhoola De,..

Agar Wo Thoonk Dein Samader Mein,..
Namkeen Paani Ko Bhi Meetha Banaa De,..

Aisa Hai Unka Husn Main Kya Bataaon Tumhe,..
Unki Awaaz Se Kabar Pe Sone Walon Ko Bhi Jagaa De,..

Taareefein To Bahoot Niklengi Unki Shaan Mein,..
Unka Geet Sunakar Kisi Rote Ko Bhi Hasaa De,..

Aisi Hai Meri Mehbooba Jise Sab Hoor Kehte Hain,..
Jab Hum Katal Honge Unke Haathon Se,..
Duniya Kahegi Ke Uske Saath Hume Bhi Mitaa De,..

Aisi Hai Meri Mehbooba Jiski Tareef Farishte Bhi Karte Hain,..
Jiska Chehra Dekhte Hi sab Apne Gham Bhoola De,..

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wah kaya baat hai Jsheen, bahoot hi acha likha hai apne........
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«Reply #74 on: June 19, 2006, 01:44:26 AM »
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SUBHA HOTI  HA TO AINEY  MEIN KHARI HO JATI HEIN
DHAROO MAKE UP KER K JANEY KYA CHUPATI HEIN
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KERTI HEIN
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KAHNEY KO BORQA PAHNEY HEIN YEH LAKIN KOI KYA JANEY
ANKHOO  ANKHOO MEIN NA JANEY KYA KYA BATEIN KERTI HEIN  
MOJH PAY YEH AHSAN KEROO EK BAT  KOI MOJHEY BATAOO
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MEIN AYSI NAHI MEIN WASI NAHI  MOJHEY AYSA MUT SAMJHOO
YEH TO HER KOI JANTA HA YEH BATEIN SAB FARZI HEIN
DOSTI KERNEY WALA JANEY US K SATH KYA BITI  HA
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