<>* Wahi dil ki kasak hun main*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 24, 2013, 07:01:47 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 25, 2013, 01:04:36 PM »
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waah waah waah kasak jee bahut bahut khoob likha hai..kya baat kya baat kya baat..Dhero dhero daad..happy9

Ek chhota sa nazarana hamari taraf se bhi pesh hai..



Tera hi aqsh hun,tujhme hi basa hun main,,
Teri madhosh raato.N kaa nasha hun main..

Apni zindagi ka koi panna palat ke dekh le,,
Tere har pal, har lamhe me guzra hun main..

Falak se puchh le ya zameen se kar le sawal,,
Janegi tere ishq me kis kadar jala hun main..

Tanha hun main yaha, tanha hai tuu waha,,
Aa jaa kareeb, bahe failaye khada hun main..

Jiss din meri kasak tere dil me utar jaayegi,,
Samajh jayegi tu uss din kyaa bala hun main..!!! Ñ


Niraash kiya ho ya bura laga ho to maafi chahunga maate..Winking

mind blowing reply arjun....... maza aagaya padhkar... dil khush khush ho gaya aur likhna safal... jab tak aisa reply na aaye aapki post par tab tak likhne ka maza nahi aata....
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«Reply #16 on: August 25, 2013, 01:05:26 PM »
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kasak ji .... sundar aur samvedansheel vichaar hain apki rachna mein .... Applause Applause Applause

bht bht shukriya zarra ji .. meri koshish ko samjha aapne aur saraha ...
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«Reply #17 on: August 25, 2013, 03:42:08 PM »
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waah! kya kahne!
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«Reply #18 on: August 25, 2013, 05:14:54 PM »
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bht bht vadhiya ji.....abhi thoda samay ka problem....nhi to reply deta achhe se deta.....dheron daad lena aur duaon mein yad rakhna
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«Reply #19 on: August 26, 2013, 02:06:05 PM »
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bahut khoob kasak ji
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«Reply #20 on: August 26, 2013, 03:56:35 PM »
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waah waah badaaa dilkash kalaam
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«Reply #21 on: August 26, 2013, 04:11:49 PM »
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its all becoz of ur gazal MT.... tum nahi likhte to ye na ban paata mujhse........ thnx alot for writing tat gazal dear

mera isme koi haath nahi hai.. ye tumhara badappan hai kasu.. par mujhe thoda sa credit dene ka shukriya.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: August 26, 2013, 07:05:46 PM »
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<>* Wahi dil ki kasak hun main*<>


khamoshi me gunjti tere dil ki dhadkan hun main
saasein jo harpal gungunayae wo sargam hun main


jaantaa hoon pyaari, tumhaari yeh mohabbat hi to hai jo in dhadkano ki tezi ko badhaaye rakhtaa hai, jeene ke liye majboor kartaa hai, har geet, har ghazal tum bin adhuri hi lagti hai


kabhi machalti kabhi tadapti rehti hai jo dheere se
dil me dabi o sehmi si wo khwaish ankahi hun main


sach mein .. jiski koi bhi khwaaish poori naa ho rahi ho use bas tum chhoo lo to har khwaab, har khwaaish poori ho jaaye, kuch alag hi baat hai tum mein, jaadu saa asar hai tumhaare hone se


baadlon ki oat se jhaankti hai jo chupke se bar bar
wo andhere ko cheerti roshni ki pehli kiran hun main


haan aur wahi kiran thi tum jisne mere jeewan mein roshni ko waapas laane mein madat ki, us waqt jab main gum thaa andheron mein, kho gayaa thaa, meri pehchaan ko tum hi waapas laaye the , thanks to you Usual Smile

tanhaa raaton me dhulak gaya jo ek ashk teri palkon se
use khud me samati kisi andekhi hatheli ki chuan hun main


mere aansuon ko muskaan mein badalne mein jo madat tumne ki hai shaayad koi aur nahi kar saktaa thaa, mujhe ghum ke har andhere se duur le jaake hazaar chiraag jalaa diye tumne, aur aaj bhi un chiraagon se meri duniyaa roshan hai

na samjh sake jo uthhti aur bikharti iss dard ki lehar ko
wahi maasoom se dil ki mallika..wahi dil ki kasak hun main…!!!


haan isme to koi shaq nahi ki mere dil ki mallika ho, is 'Hriday' ki Kasak ho tum, koshish bahut ki samajhne ki tumhe bhi, shaayad kuch hadd tak samajh bhi paayaa hoon, shaayad yahi wajah hai ki kuch alag saa bandhan jud gayaa hum dono mein, ek bandhan jo atoot hai, ek aisaa bandhan jisne hum dono ke har ehsaas ko jode rakhaa hai... hai naa?  



Hmmmmm.... sabse pehle to main deri ke liye sorry bol detaa hoon, weekend pe reply nahi kar paayaa kyun ki ghar pe net nahi hai aajkal.... ab aati hai iski taarif ki baari... kyaa karun, kaise karun, aap hi bataa do.. kyun ki mere bas ki baat nahi hai iski taarif karnaa... mere paas shabd hi nahi hain... aur iski taarif ko shabdon mein baandhnaa mushkil hi nahi naamumkin hai...isliye bas ...

 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

ab aati hai jawaab ki baari.. aapkaa likhaa kuch ho aur uspar Hriday kaa jawaab naa ho.. aisaa ho saktaa hai kyaa... ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...!!!


tum  kyaa  ho is baat se khud hi anjaan ho tum
kisi  ki  mohabbat  ho, kisi  ki pehchaan ho tum

bachche  ke  haath  se khilauna toot jaaye agar
uske chehre pe lautaane waali muskaan ho tum

jis  kaa  har  sapnaa  tootaa  ho aaine ki tarhaa
uske liye to pooraa hone waale armaan ho tum

kisi  ke  paas  daulat, kisi  ke  paas  shohrat hai
is  gareeb  ke  liye  to ab saaraa jahaan ho tum

kabhi padhaa nahi, na hi jaanaa un kitaabon ko
tum  hi  meri  bible  ho aur meri quraan ho tum

saanson me basti ho, ragon ki rawaani mein ho
jaanti ho  tum  bhi, mere  liye meri jaan ho tum


*****HRIDAY*****

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«Reply #23 on: August 26, 2013, 07:16:55 PM »
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Bahut khoob dheron daad... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: August 26, 2013, 09:49:14 PM »
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Hmmmmm.... sabse pehle to main deri ke liye sorry bol detaa hoon, weekend pe reply nahi kar paayaa kyun ki ghar pe net nahi hai aajkal.... ab aati hai iski taarif ki baari... kyaa karun, kaise karun, aap hi bataa do.. kyun ki mere bas ki baat nahi hai iski taarif karnaa... mere paas shabd hi nahi hain... aur iski taarif ko shabdon mein baandhnaa mushkil hi nahi naamumkin hai...isliye bas ...

 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

aab aati hai jawaab ki baari.. aapkaa likhaa kuch ho aur uspar Hriday kaa jawaab naa ho.. aisaa ho saktaa hai kyaa... ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...!!!


tum  kyaa  ho is baat se khud hi anjaan ho tum
kisi  ki  mohabbat  ho, kisi  ki pehchaan ho tum

bachche  ke  haath  se khilauna toot jaaye agar
uske chehre pe lautaane waali muskaan ho tum

jis  kaa  har  sapnaa  tootaa  ho aaine ki tarhaa
uske liye to pooraa hone waale armaan ho tum

kisi  ke  paas  daulat, kisi  ke  paas  shohrat hai
is  gareeb  ke  liye  to ab saaraa jahaan ho tum

kabhi padhaa nahi, na hi jaanaa un kitaabon ko
tum  hi  meri  bible  ho aur meri quraan ho tum

saanson me basti ho, ragon ki rawaani mein ho
jaanti ho  tum  bhi, mere  liye meri jaan ho tum


*****HRIDAY*****



rula diya tumne  tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed.... last 3 yrs ka ek ek din ghoom gaya aankhon ke aage kp  happy3 happy3 ....... sach me kuch rishte itne anmol ho jate hain k bina kisi bandhan kisi contact ke bhi sari zindagi nibhaye jate hain  love4 love4...... hume aapas me baat kiye takreeban 2 saal hone aaye... lekin aaj bhi hamare bich ki bonding wo trust wo faith wo apnapan 1% bhi kum na hua.....  Winking Winking Winking

sirf poetries se shuru hokar poetries pe khatm hota ye rishta kab itna gehra hua pata hi na chala.....  love4 love4

u will always b my dearrest and sweetest kp  icon_flower.... God bless u  icon_flower


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«Reply #25 on: August 26, 2013, 09:55:48 PM »
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Usual Smile Smile now !!!


rula diya tumne  tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed.... last 3 yrs ka ek ek din ghoom gaya aankhon ke aage kp  happy3 happy3 ....... sach me kuch rishte itne anmol ho jate hain k bina kisi bandhan kisi contact ke bhi sari zindagi nibhaye jate hain  love4 love4...... hume aapas me baat kiye takreeban 2 saal hone aaye... lekin aaj bhi hamare bich ki bonding wo trust wo faith wo apnapan 1% bhi kum na hua.....  Winking Winking Winking

sirf poetries se shuru hokar poetries pe khatm hota ye rishta kab itna gehra hua pata hi na chala.....  love4 love4

u will always b my dearrest and sweetest kp  icon_flower.... God bless u  icon_flower


tumhari poetry ki tareef nahi karungi.... as always mere liye likhi hai to bestest honi hi hai  Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut....
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«Reply #26 on: August 26, 2013, 09:58:24 PM »
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yaad karo meri bhayanak hasi kp......
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«Reply #27 on: August 26, 2013, 09:59:14 PM »
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«Reply #28 on: August 30, 2013, 12:13:49 AM »
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HMMM.........NO WORDS...JUST BEAUTIFULL.....AS USAL.BEST POETRY FROM BEST ONE....
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«Reply #29 on: August 30, 2013, 02:34:37 AM »
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HMMM.........NO WORDS...JUST BEAUTIFULL.....AS USAL.BEST POETRY FROM BEST ONE....

......................... i m speechlesss..................

after such a long time rajaji..... where were u ...... missed u a lot and lot and lot....... ab mat kho jana plzzzzzzzz
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