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अश्कों की स्याही से लिखी हो जब किस्मत अपनी।
तो खुशियों के हर रंग फीके पड़ जाते हैं।।

लगीं हो महफ़िले भी गर आँखों के आगे।
कदम खुद-ब-खुद तन्हाइयों की ओर बढ़ जाते हैं।।

~pank~
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2015, 06:58:44 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2015, 09:18:40 AM »
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अश्कों की स्याही से लिखी हो जब किस्मत अपनी।
तो खुशियों के हर रंग फीके पड़ जाते हैं।।

लगीं हो महफ़िले भी गर आँखों के आगे।
कदम खुद-ब-खुद तन्हाइयों की ओर बढ़ जाते हैं।।

~pank~

वाह वाह... बहुत अच्छी पंक्तियाँ।
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2015, 11:53:08 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
           wah bahut khub Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2015, 07:53:04 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2015, 01:57:43 PM »
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अश्कों की स्याही से लिखी हो जब किस्मत अपनी।
तो खुशियों के हर रंग फीके पड़ जाते हैं।।

लगीं हो महफ़िले भी गर आँखों के आगे।
कदम खुद-ब-खुद तन्हाइयों की ओर बढ़ जाते हैं।।

~pank~

wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2015, 04:06:19 AM »
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wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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