जिसे हम बेवफा समझते थे,वे वफादार निकले

by Ram Krishan Rastogi on August 21, 2014, 04:44:41 PM
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जिसे हम बेवफा समझते थे ,वे वफादार निकले
जब हमने अंदर झाका तो खुद गुनाहगार निकले

जब कभी किसी बेवफा का महफिल में जिक्र होता है
उसकी जुदाई का महफिल में मिलन का भ्रम होता है

जिसे हम बड़े दागदार समझते थे वे बेदाग निकले
जब अपना दामन देखा उसमे हजारो  दाग निकले

जिन्हें हम धर्म और मजहब का बड़ा ठेकेदार समझते थे
वे ही इन्सान को धर्म मजहब के नाम पर बाटते निकले

जिन्हें हम दुश्मन समझते थे,वे दोस्त निकले
जिन्हें दोस्त समझते थे,वे बड़े चापलूस निकले

तुम नही हो मेरे साथ,तेरा गम तो मेरे साथ होता
तेरे शबाब में इतना नशा है,मैकदे का बहम होता



 

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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2014, 05:39:04 PM »
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बहुत खूब......

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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2014, 07:16:17 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2014, 08:54:03 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2014, 09:57:08 PM »
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सभी शायरों का दिल से शुक्रया -आर के रस्तोगी
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2014, 04:49:53 AM »
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Bahut umdah Rastogi Sahib, dheron daad. I have friendly suggestion that the word baa.wafaadaar I think is not correct & it should be corrected to wafaadaar instead.
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2014, 11:40:02 AM »
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shri Surindarn sahib ji, Thanks for your suggestions.I have corrected it.My mother tongue is Hindi but my interest is in Urdu.-Ram Krishan Rastogi
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ख्श्बू हूँ मै तुम्हारी,तुम मेरे चमन हो 
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