ऐ मेरी जान

by Bhupinder Kaur on March 23, 2013, 11:40:15 PM
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ऐ मेरी जान
मुझसे जी जान से नफरत कर
हस्ती भी न रहें मेरी
कुछ ऐसे हमपर वार कर
दे बदुआ हमें  दिलसे
और अपना दर्द भी
हमारे नाम कर
मौत को हिचकिचाना ना पड़े
कुछ ऐसा हमपर एह्सान कर....
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2013, 11:45:58 PM »
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ऐ मेरी जान
मुझसे जी जान से नफरत कर
हस्ती भी न रहें मेरी
कुछ ऐसे हमपर वार कर
दे बदुआ हमें  दिलसे
और अपना दर्द भी
हमारे नाम कर
मौत को हिचकिचाना ना पड़े
कुछ ऐसा हमपर एह्सान कर....

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it was heart throbing bhupinder.... Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2013, 01:07:57 PM »
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Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on March 23, 2013, 11:40:15 PM
ऐ मेरी जान
मुझसे जी जान से नफरत कर
हस्ती भी न रहें मेरी
कुछ ऐसे हमपर वार कर
दे बदुआ हमें  दिलसे
और अपना दर्द भी
हमारे नाम कर
मौत को हिचकिचाना ना पड़े
कुछ ऐसा हमपर एह्सान कर....

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«Reply #9 on: March 24, 2013, 05:59:06 PM »
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bohut bohut dard bhari lines but realy good ,,,, very imresive keep writing dear
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