Beeti Raat (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on March 02, 2006, 12:02:24 PM
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Zindagi kyon mujhey us raah par le jaa rahi hai,
jis raah par beeti raat ki khushboo aati hai,
yeh do-raha kyon mujhey apney sang kaat raha hai,
mera dil kahin toh meri jaan kahin jaati hai......
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2006, 08:37:18 AM »
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Achhi shayari likhi hai aapne, dil ko hamare chhu gayi. Kuch hum bhi arz karna chahte hai, shayad aapko pasand aaye.

Uske aane ke pehle akele thhe hum,
Uske jane ke baad bhi akele reh gaye hum,
Kaash woh hamari zindagi mein na aate,
Hamari mahabbat ko bewafai bhara tofa na de jaate!!!

Uski bewafai ke sahare toh jee bhi lenge,
Lekin is pagal dil ko samzayenge kese,
Yeh toh ab bhi usiko chahta hai,
ab bhi usise wafa ki ummid kiye ja raha hai.
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2006, 03:39:22 PM »
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Thanks  a lot shail_shayar ji.... and this is for u:

Umeed-e-wafa ko yu seeney sey lagaye rakha,
Chirag-e'-pyar ko humney ta-umar jalaye rakha,
mehsoos to hui unhey humari aakhon main nami,
hastey hue hamney magar nazron ko jukaye rakha.
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2006, 06:22:57 PM »
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good shikha and shali very nice  and welcme to YOINDIA.
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«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2006, 02:48:56 PM »
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wah! shikha ji.........

USNE SHADI KA JODA PAHAN KAR SIRF CHOOMA THA MERE KAFAN KO,
BAS USI DIN SE JANNAT KI HOOREN MUJHE DULAH BANAYE HUE HAIN..........
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«Reply #5 on: March 27, 2006, 08:19:54 PM »
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kya baat hai..... very nice vicky akela ji and shukriya.....

usney muh pher liya dekh kar mera aana jaana apni galiyon mein.....
nazren chura li aisey, ki daag lage na kahin sehre ki kaliyon mein
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«Reply #6 on: March 27, 2006, 08:22:32 PM »
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too gud both of u...Shika n Shail
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«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2006, 04:22:51 PM »
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bahut khoob


sab tez hai

ek se badhkar ek
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2006, 11:25:48 AM »
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khoob likha shikha..... bahut hi achha...

baat naa karo beeti raat ki, ab to nayi subah aaney do...
kal raat to bahut tanhai thi, aaj to julfon ki panah paney do.
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2006, 05:51:54 PM »
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really good shika n the rest of u!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2006, 05:56:21 PM »
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Thanks Jatin and Sweety Pie...

Jatin Buddy this is for u:

Tanhai aadat hai hamari, yeh yaaden saathi hai..
jab tum nahin hoty ho paas, tab yehi to aati hai..
tum to aatey ho do ghadi ko, aur chaley jatey ho,
dil rota hai jab mera, yeh hi usey behlaati hai...
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«Reply #11 on: April 20, 2006, 10:40:33 AM »
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arey bahut bahut sukriya shikha... takaluuf ki kya jarurat thi.. lekin ek baat to hai, aap likhti bahut achha hai, bilcul aisey jaisey kisi ney aasan shabdon main dil ki baat keh di ho... keep it going as always :D

kyon ghirey rehto ho yaadon main sada,  sad5
kyon humsey nahin kartey ho koi baat,  :?:
hum gamo ko khusiyon main badal dengey, :idea:
bus lazmi hai iskey wastey fakat ek mulakat... :D
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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2006, 01:26:57 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Doston,..

Hoti Hai Aaj Bhi Mujhe Is Baat Se Hairaani,..
Jisne Mujhe Basaya Tha Dil Mein,..
Wo Laga Hai Mitaane Pyaar Ki Nishaani,..
Jaane Kya Khata Hui Mujhse Ye Maine Na Jaani,..
Us Se Dil Laga Baitha Jisne Mohabbat Ko Na Jani,..

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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2006, 11:10:15 AM »
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Quote from: "JATIN1101"
arey bahut bahut sukriya shikha... takaluuf ki kya jarurat thi.. lekin ek baat to hai, aap likhti bahut achha hai, bilcul aisey jaisey kisi ney aasan shabdon main dil ki baat keh di ho... keep it going as always  

kyon ghirey rehto ho yaadon main sada,  
kyon humsey nahin kartey ho koi baat,  
hum gamo ko khusiyon main badal dengey,  
bus lazmi hai iskey wastey fakat ek mulakat...


 Puzzled ! THANKS JATIN.... FOR THE WONDERFUL OFFER.... Usual Smile

EK MULAKAT BHI HOGI, AUR PHIR BAAT BHI HOGI,
SADA GHIRI REHTI HAI TANHAIYO SEY,
KABHI TO KHUSHNUMA YEH RAAT BHI HOGI...
AAJ RONEY DO GHADI BHAR MUJHEY APNEY LIYE,
KAL TUMHAREY LIYE HANSI KI SAUGAAT BHI HOGI...
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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2006, 11:21:00 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Doston,..

Hoti Hai Aaj Bhi Mujhe Is Baat Se Hairaani,..
Jisne Mujhe Basaya Tha Dil Mein,..
Wo Laga Hai Mitaane Pyaar Ki Nishaani,..
Jaane Kya Khata Hui Mujhse Ye Maine Na Jaani,..
Us Se Dil Laga Baitha Jisne Mohabbat Ko Na Jani,..


VERY TOUCHING.....

kyon dil todtey hai log, kyon mita dete hai pyar ki nishaaniya..
kyon rulatey hai kisi ko, kyon detey hai kisi ko ruswaiyaa...
yeh such hai duniya main, har cheez ka ek waqt hota hai,
mit jaata hai har zakhm ek din, har ghav bhi bhar jaata hai..
lekin nahin mit ti is dil sey pehley pyar ki purchaiiyaa....
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