Beeti Raat (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on March 02, 2006, 06:32:24 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 19, 2006, 03:20:58 PM »
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Shukriya Shika Ji,..

Bewafaa Keh Kar Hume Wo Jaa Rahein Hain.,.
Unhe Kya Kabar Hai ke Humne Kis Kadar Wafa Nibhaayi,..

__________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #16 on: May 20, 2006, 08:27:49 AM »
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KYA KHOOB KAHA HAI JANASHEEN JI.....WAH WAH
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«Reply #17 on: May 20, 2006, 08:48:27 AM »
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JATIN1101 wrote:
arey bahut bahut sukriya shikha... takaluuf ki kya jarurat thi.. lekin ek baat to hai, aap likhti bahut achha hai, bilcul aisey jaisey kisi ney aasan shabdon main dil ki baat keh di ho... keep it going as always

kyon ghirey rehto ho yaadon main sada,
kyon humsey nahin kartey ho koi baat,
hum gamo ko khusiyon main badal dengey,
bus lazmi hai iskey wastey fakat ek mulakat...



 THANKS JATIN.... FOR THE WONDERFUL OFFER....  

EK MULAKAT BHI HOGI, AUR PHIR BAAT BHI HOGI,
SADA GHIRI REHTI HAI TANHAIYO SEY,
KABHI TO KHUSHNUMA YEH RAAT BHI HOGI...
AAJ RONEY DO GHADI BHAR MUJHEY APNEY LIYE,
KAL TUMHAREY LIYE HANSI KI SAUGAAT BHI HOGI...


 Shocked  :lol: madame, pls. offer per jara aur dhayan dey... :lol: waisey reply is very good. achhi shayari hai, bahut hi achhi. :wink:
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«Reply #18 on: May 20, 2006, 08:50:41 AM »
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Shukriya Shika Ji,..

Bewafaa Keh Kar Hume Wo Jaa Rahein Hain.,.
Unhe Kya Kabar Hai ke Humne Kis Kadar Wafa Nibhaayi,..


BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA HAI JAANASHEEN BHAI. KHOOB KAHA HAI.
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«Reply #19 on: May 20, 2006, 02:38:08 PM »
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KYA KHOOB KAHA HAI JANASHEEN JI.....WAH WAH
Shukriya Sheekha Ji,..
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«Reply #20 on: May 20, 2006, 02:40:03 PM »
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Shukriya Shika Ji,..

Bewafaa Keh Kar Hume Wo Jaa Rahein Hain.,.
Unhe Kya Kabar Hai ke Humne Kis Kadar Wafa Nibhaayi,..


BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA HAI JAANASHEEN BHAI. KHOOB KAHA HAI.
Shukriya Jatin Bhai apne Bhi bahoot Acha likha hai,..
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«Reply #21 on: July 06, 2006, 06:29:12 AM »
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Bahut khoob shikha and all Usual Smile

Mera Ek Ikraar Tere Har Inkar Se Achha Hoga,
Mera Ek Din Teri Har Raatse Achha Hoga,
Tu Doli Se Jhank Kar Dekh Lena ZaliM,
Mera Janaza Teri Barat Se Achha Hoga...
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«Reply #22 on: July 06, 2006, 09:57:05 AM »
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Thanks Angel......



Raaton sey darr lagta hai
Andhero sey jee ghabrata hai
Hum saans rok key baithey hai
phir bhi dil dhadak jaata hai....

Koi naa aaye aaj ki raat,
hum yeh dua kartey hai..
Beeti raat si koi aur raat na ho,
dil sukhey pattey sa kapkapata hai...

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«Reply #23 on: July 06, 2006, 12:45:59 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Shikha and Angel...
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«Reply #24 on: July 07, 2006, 06:37:21 AM »
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Shukriya Azeem bro....



Kyon woh sard shyah raat yaad aati hai,
Kyon phir sey dil ko bechain kar jaati hai...
Har taraf pasra hua hai gehra sannata sa,
Koi cheekh mere kaano mey goonj jaati hai...
Dard sey bhari kisi ki siskan ghuti ghuti,
Har kisi aahat sey rooh kaamp jaati hai...
Phir sey rounda jai naa kahin mujhko,
Raat kyon yeh baar baar chali aati hai...
Jeeney ki aas ab bhi baaki hai ismey,
Ek bulbul pinjarey mey phadphadati hai...


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«Reply #25 on: July 07, 2006, 12:47:41 PM »
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Shukriya Azeem bro....



Kyon woh sard shyah raat yaad aati hai,
Kyon phir sey dil ko bechain kar jaati hai...
Har taraf pasra hua hai gehra sannata sa,
Koi cheekh mere kaano mey goonj jaati hai...
Dard sey bhari kisi ki siskan ghuti ghuti,
Har kisi aahat sey rooh kaamp jaati hai...
Phir sey rounda jai naa kahin mujhko,
Raat kyon yeh baar baar chali aati hai...
Jeeney ki aas ab bhi baaki hai ismey,
Ek bulbul pinjarey mey phadphadati hai...


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Bahoot Khoob Shikha Sis,..

Bhoola Nahi Main Gham Wo Raat Ka,...
Jab Sara Zamaana Madhosh Tha Neend Mein,..
Jagta Raha Tere Liye Main Bechaini Se Us Raat Ko,..

__________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #26 on: August 09, 2006, 01:06:01 PM »
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Shukriya Azeem bro....



Kyon woh sard shyah raat yaad aati hai,
Kyon phir sey dil ko bechain kar jaati hai...
Har taraf pasra hua hai gehra sannata sa,
Koi cheekh mere kaano mey goonj jaati hai...
Dard sey bhari kisi ki siskan ghuti ghuti,
Har kisi aahat sey rooh kaamp jaati hai...
Phir sey rounda jai naa kahin mujhko,
Raat kyon yeh baar baar chali aati hai...
Jeeney ki aas ab bhi baaki hai ismey,
Ek bulbul pinjarey mey phadphadati hai...


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Bahoot Khoob Shikha Sis,..

Bhoola Nahi Main Gham Wo Raat Ka,...
Jab Sara Zamaana Madhosh Tha Neend Mein,..
Jagta Raha Tere Liye Main Bechaini Se Us Raat Ko,..

__________________________________-Jaanasheen-





Very nice Azeem..... =D> =D> =D>

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«Reply #27 on: August 09, 2006, 02:07:58 PM »
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Shukriya Shika Sis,..

Udd Jaati Hai Neend Aankhon Se meri Jab Main Sochta Hoon Guzre Pal Ko,.
Ke Kabhi Main Raatein Beetaya karta Tha Us bewafaa Ki Baahon Mein Aaj Wo Meri Neend Le Gayi,..

_____________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #28 on: November 04, 2008, 11:47:00 AM »
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Zindagi kyon mujhey us raah par le jaa rahi hai,
jis raah par beeti raat ki khushboo aati hai,
yeh do-raha kyon mujhey apney sang kaat raha hai,
mera dil kahin toh meri jaan kahin jaati hai......
Thanks  a lot shail_shayar ji.... and this is for u:

Umeed-e-wafa ko yu seeney sey lagaye rakha,
Chirag-e'-pyar ko humney ta-umar jalaye rakha,
mehsoos to hui unhey humari aakhon main nami,
hastey hue hamney magar nazron ko jukaye rakha.
kya baat hai..... very nice vicky akela ji and shukriya.....

usney muh pher liya dekh kar mera aana jaana apni galiyon mein.....
nazren chura li aisey, ki daag lage na kahin sehre ki kaliyon mein
Thanks Jatin and Sweety Pie...

Jatin Buddy this is for u:

Tanhai aadat hai hamari, yeh yaaden saathi hai..
jab tum nahin hoty ho paas, tab yehi to aati hai..
tum to aatey ho do ghadi ko, aur chaley jatey ho,
dil rota hai jab mera, yeh hi usey behlaati hai...


 Puzzled ! THANKS JATIN.... FOR THE WONDERFUL OFFER.... Usual Smile

EK MULAKAT BHI HOGI, AUR PHIR BAAT BHI HOGI,
SADA GHIRI REHTI HAI TANHAIYO SEY,
KABHI TO KHUSHNUMA YEH RAAT BHI HOGI...
AAJ RONEY DO GHADI BHAR MUJHEY APNEY LIYE,
KAL TUMHAREY LIYE HANSI KI SAUGAAT BHI HOGI...


VERY TOUCHING.....

kyon dil todtey hai log, kyon mita dete hai pyar ki nishaaniya..
kyon rulatey hai kisi ko, kyon detey hai kisi ko ruswaiyaa...
yeh such hai duniya main, har cheez ka ek waqt hota hai,
mit jaata hai har zakhm ek din, har ghav bhi bhar jaata hai..
lekin nahin mit ti is dil sey pehley pyar ki purchaiiyaa....

Waah..Kya baat Hai !! Barso Puraane Panne Ultaae aaj aapk KalaamoN k..Deewan e Sikha
Sikhaa Jee,,Bura Mat Lagaana Mere Is andaaz Se Ki aap bhi Mere Hit List Ya Target Pe Ho..woh Yoindian Shayar Jis k Kalaam Ko Padhnaa Hi Mera Maqsad e Hayaat Hai Is web Par..Baqi aaltu Faltu Logo kalaam ko Nahi Padhta..

Aap To Jub Se aaye Is web Par Kamaal Tabhi se shurua Kar diya Hai..
shayri e dard e bewafaai..JItne bhi asha'ar Padhe sub k sab waqaee badhiya Lage Mujhe..Urdu bhi aapka Masha allah Kaafi Badhiya Hai..

Aur Maaf Karna Main Bolne Mein Thoda Tez Hun..

Sikha Jee Jaise jaise waqt Milta Jayega aap k sab Kalaam padhta Jaugaa Insh allaah.

Bdhiya Sikha Jee..allah aapko Har Ne'amat Se Nawaaze.aamin.Insha allah Meri DuaoN Me aap Bhi Shamil e Fehrisht Ho.


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«Reply #29 on: November 04, 2008, 01:00:16 PM »
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Waah..Kya baat Hai !! Barso Puraane Panne Ultaae aaj aapk KalaamoN k..Deewan e Sikha
Sikhaa Jee,,Bura Mat Lagaana Mere Is andaaz Se Ki aap bhi Mere Hit List Ya Target Pe Ho..woh Yoindian Shayar Jis k Kalaam Ko Padhnaa Hi Mera Maqsad e Hayaat Hai Is web Par..Baqi aaltu Faltu Logo kalaam ko Nahi Padhta..

Aap To Jub Se aaye Is web Par Kamaal Tabhi se shurua Kar diya Hai..
shayri e dard e bewafaai..JItne bhi asha'ar Padhe sub k sab waqaee badhiya Lage Mujhe..Urdu bhi aapka Masha allah Kaafi Badhiya Hai..

Aur Maaf Karna Main Bolne Mein Thoda Tez Hun..

Sikha Jee Jaise jaise waqt Milta Jayega aap k sab Kalaam padhta Jaugaa Insh allaah.

Bdhiya Sikha Jee..allah aapko Har Ne'amat Se Nawaaze.aamin.Insha allah Meri DuaoN Me aap Bhi Shamil e Fehrisht Ho.




Aapki duaaon ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Muhammed ji..

Sach mein, bahut puraane panne palat diye aapne. Main khud nahin pehchaan paayi ki yeh kabhi maine hi likha tha.. Usual Smile
Kai jagah khud ke likhe mein bahut khaamiyaan bhi nazar aayi, aur hansi bhi aayi.. lekin, phir bhi yeh sab dobaara padh kar achha bhi laga...

Muhammed ji.. Is izzat afzaai ke liye, Tah-e-dil se shukriya.. Ab toh is izzat afzaai ki aadat bhi nahin rahi.. Usual Smile Thanks a ton..
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