Kaash...Tum Fankaar bann Jao...

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«Reply #30 on: June 15, 2006, 08:28:36 PM »
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kya khoob...nazm point ki janasheen ji.......
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«Reply #31 on: June 15, 2006, 08:33:03 PM »
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kya khoob...nazm point ki janasheen ji.......


Shukriya Bhai,...
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«Reply #32 on: June 17, 2006, 09:50:38 PM »
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thanx nirbhay ji janasheen ji shikha ji aryaan ji! :D sabne bohot hi achha likha hai..
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«Reply #33 on: June 18, 2006, 01:34:43 PM »
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Nice work all of u.....Nirbhay, Azeem bhai, Ranjana, Harsh, Aryan.....




E kaash hum unko bhool jaatey ek baar,
kaash hum bhi kuch dost naye bana letey...
Tanhaii mey udaas naa hotey hum,
Akele baith key naa rotey hum....
Kaash hath thaam letey hum bhi kisi aur kaa,
Kaash hum bhi kisi key talabgaar ho jaatey....

Phir roz naa yaad kartey unko hum bhi,
Apni muhabbat ko naa barbaad  kartey hum bhi....
Mu'd kar dekhtey naa unkey aaney ki raah,
Dil sey nikal phektey hum uski iqtizaa'...
Kaash keh paatey hum unsey apni dil ki dastaa...
Kaash hum bhi kuch aisey hi fankaar ho jaatey.....

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«Reply #34 on: June 18, 2006, 01:45:22 PM »
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Nice work all of you.....Nirbhay, Azeem bhai, Ranjana, Harsh, Aryan.....




E kaash hum unko bhool jaatey ek baar,
kaash hum bhi kuch dost naye bana letey...
Tanhaii mey udaas naa hotey hum,
Akele baith key naa rotey hum....
Kaash hath thaam letey hum bhi kisi aur kaa,
Kaash hum bhi kisi key talabgaar ho jaatey....

Phir roz naa yaad kartey unko hum bhi,
Apni muhabbat ko naa barbaad  kartey hum bhi....
Mu'd kar dekhtey naa unkey aaney ki raah,
Dil sey nikal phektey hum uski iqtizaa'...
Kaash keh paatey hum unsey apni dil ki dastaa...
Kaash hum bhi kuch aisey hi fankaar ho jaatey.....

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Kaash ke tum bhi Mere Dil ka haal samajh paati.....
Yaad karti mujhe pal pal or Yaad me Fankaar ho jaati......

Raat hote jab me tumhe kuch kehta.....
Toh kaash tum bhi aadhi jagi aankhon se kuch Dil ki baat keh jaati......

Kaash ke ho jaati tum bhi Fana tum bhi ek Fankaar ho jaati......

Par kismat ko toh kuch tumhe yeh baat gawara na thi......
Shayien thi meri kuch ateet ki jarur par awaara toh na thi......

Kaash ke Sunke tumhara Dil-e-Bayaaan aankhein meri Namm ho jaati......
Na banti meri mehbooba bas ek Fankaar ho jaati.........!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #35 on: June 18, 2006, 01:45:43 PM »
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How lovely shikha ..bahoot sunder likha hai...Shikha ji ye sab muqadder ki baat..kaba kis ko kon sa jahaan naseebho...mohabbat toh bin dekhe bhi ..ho jaati hai/...lafz parh ker bhi ho jaati hai...our kab kis se ho jaaye..kutchh pata nahi...

Takleef our araam muqadder ki baat hai
kya kisko mile kaam muqadder ki baat hai.

mehfil main log aate hai aya hi karenge
kis-kis ko mile jaam muqader ki baat hai.

Hon laakh log dost mager humsafer nahi
kitne chalenge saath muqadder ki baat hai.

Koshish sabhi kerte hain per bhagwaan ki ichha
kitna ho kiska naam muqadder ki baat hai.

dariya ka kinaara ho fida saath main hasien
aisi ho koi shaam muqadder ki baat hai.

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Nice work all of you.....Nirbhay, Azeem bhai, Ranjana, Harsh, Aryan.....




E kaash hum unko bhool jaatey ek baar,
kaash hum bhi kuch dost naye bana letey...
Tanhaii mey udaas naa hotey hum,
Akele baith key naa rotey hum....
Kaash hath thaam letey hum bhi kisi aur kaa,
Kaash hum bhi kisi key talabgaar ho jaatey....

Phir roz naa yaad kartey unko hum bhi,
Apni muhabbat ko naa barbaad  kartey hum bhi....
Mu'd kar dekhtey naa unkey aaney ki raah,
Dil sey nikal phektey hum uski iqtizaa'...
Kaash keh paatey hum unsey apni dil ki dastaa...
Kaash hum bhi kuch aisey hi fankaar ho jaatey.....

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«Reply #36 on: June 18, 2006, 01:46:58 PM »
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bahoot sunder badnaam shayar ji...
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«Reply #37 on: June 18, 2006, 01:48:38 PM »
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bahoot sunder badnaam shayar ji...


Thnx a lot Harsh ji......Gud one u too Usual Smile
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«Reply #38 on: June 18, 2006, 02:06:34 PM »
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Very Nicely written Gaurav and Harash ji.....

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«Reply #39 on: June 18, 2006, 02:13:12 PM »
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Thnx a lot Shikha..... :wink:
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«Reply #40 on: June 18, 2006, 02:55:48 PM »
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Dhokhaa khanaa is mehfil main aane ki pehli seedi hai ai dost....jab insaan mohabbat main hota hi toh koi bhi sersrahat jo disturb kare pasand nahi aati....bahoot khoob likha aapne ranjana ji....


Kaash! aaj raat ki seher kabhi bhi aaye na,
khwaab dekhte rahein koi hame jagaye na.

aaj dil ki sunte jaayein dil ki kerte jaayein hum,
kya galat hai kya sahi koi hume bataaye na.

arzu ye hai junoo main aaj behte jaayein hum,
doob jaayein hum toh ab hume bachaaye na.

chund lamhon mein simat ker aa gayee hai zindagi,
kaash! aisa ho ki ye waqt jaane paaye na.

aaj jana kyuin khushi mein bheeg jaati hai palak,
Gum khushi ka farak ab koi hame bataaye na.


bahut khub Harash ji....................last 2 lines toh kamal ki hain ,aur ek sach hai yeh lines..............


hamne aaj apni palko mein ek ashaq chipaa liya
jaise kisi seep ne apne andar  moti  bitha liya

ab kya bataye ki kin kin hadaso se gajare hain  hum
aaj unki baato ne  mere  dil ko dard ki rahagujar se mila diya

jayda der na chal saka mere haseen khawabo ka silsila
unke khayalo.n ne jab aa ke hamari neendo ko uda diya

main tanha hui thee us waqt jab woh mujhse bichar gaye
meri nazaro ne us lamhe ke dard ko apni aankho mein chipa liya

aaya jo kabhi unke samane mehfil mein mera zikar
toh unhone hans ke, hamse apne pyaar ka rishta chipa liya
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«Reply #41 on: June 18, 2006, 03:01:23 PM »
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bahoot khub likha Gaurav, shikha ji and Harash ji.......

Azeem bhai shukyira itni khubsurat nazm share karne ke liye............. Usual Smile
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«Reply #42 on: June 18, 2006, 03:02:02 PM »
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bahoot khoob Harsh and Ranju!!!
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«Reply #43 on: June 18, 2006, 04:08:02 PM »
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thanx nirbhay ji janasheen ji shikha ji aryaan ji! :D sabne bohot hi achha likha hai..


Shukriya Sanya Ji,..
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«Reply #44 on: June 18, 2006, 04:09:13 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Harash Bhai Gaurav Bhai Shikha Sis And Ranjana Sis,..

Lage Raho,..
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