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«Reply #60 on: June 12, 2005, 05:18:15 PM »
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"Kehti hai ye dunia ki tu bewafa hai ho gaya,
Chod kar mujhe dunia ki bheend meintu kho gaya,

Par ye dil janta hai ki tu bewafa toh nahi hai,
Tu dur hai mujhse phir bhi juda toh nahi hai..."


wah yeh lines to bohot achi hai creator ji!!

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«Reply #61 on: June 12, 2005, 05:44:39 PM »
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khafaa hu tujhse bewafaa mein nahi
duur hu tujhse juda mein nahi..
seene mein dil teri yaad mein ab bhi dhadak raha hai
saasein chal rahi hai
par zinda mein nahi..
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«Reply #62 on: June 12, 2005, 06:03:40 PM »
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wah yeh lines to bohot achi hai creator ji!!

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Thanx a lot Meena ji,

Unka kehna hai ki humne unhe badnaam kar diya,
Unke naam ke sang bewafa ka naam kar diya,
Kaise samjhaye unhe khuda ki taraj puja kiye unhe,
Unhone hi toh mere iss bandagi ko nakaam kar diya.
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«Reply #63 on: June 12, 2005, 06:06:21 PM »
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khafaa hu tujhse bewafaa mein nahi
duur hu tujhse juda mein nahi..
seene mein dil teri yaad mein ab bhi dhadak raha hai
saasein chal rahi hai
par zinda mein nahi..


Gud one Amrita ji.........

Jindagi kehti hai mujhse ki tu khafa kyu hai,
Milta hai sabse hans ke par juda kyu hai,
Kaise kahe ki mar gaye hum ishq mein kisi ke,
Samajh hi nahi pate ki hum jinda kyu hai.....
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«Reply #64 on: June 12, 2005, 08:08:27 PM »
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wahhh gud one amrita and creator!!!!!

apne man ko dafna kar aye hai abhi abhi,
zinda hai phir bhi yeh gumah hota hai kabhi kabhi!!
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«Reply #65 on: June 13, 2005, 12:05:05 PM »
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khafaa hu tujhse bewafaa mein nahi
duur hu tujhse juda mein nahi..
seene mein dil teri yaad mein ab bhi dhadak raha hai
saasein chal rahi hai
par zinda mein nahi..


Gud one Amrita ji.........

Jindagi kehti hai mujhse ki tu khafa kyu hai,
Milta hai sabse hans ke par juda kyu hai,
Kaise kahe ki mar gaye hum ishq mein kisi ke,
Samajh hi nahi pate ki hum jinda kyu hai.....[/quote


good one creator!!
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«Reply #66 on: June 13, 2005, 07:12:14 PM »
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wahhh gud one amrita and creator!!!!!

apne man ko dafna kar aye hai abhi abhi,
zinda hai phir bhi yeh gumah hota hai kabhi kabhi!!


Thanx a lot Meena ji........and Amrita ji.......
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«Reply #67 on: June 13, 2005, 07:16:17 PM »
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Har shaks aaj humpar meharbaan ho gaya,
Dost muskuraye aise ki ek ehsaan ho gaya,
Jab se choda hai mujhko mere humsafar ne yaaron,
Lagta hai yahan har aashik hi badnaam ho gaya...
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«Reply #68 on: June 14, 2005, 02:11:05 PM »
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bahut khoob........har aashiq badnaam hogaya!!

har aashiq badnaam hota hai
fir bhi labo pe apne pyaar ka naam hota hai
hum yeh baat keh kar ruksat liye jaate hain
tumhari di vi badnaami ko apne sir ka taj banate hain
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«Reply #69 on: June 15, 2005, 03:10:38 AM »
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tumhari di vi badnaami ko apne sir ka taj banate hain

Aap ki har bata ko hum tu sar ankhoon pe uthate hain
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«Reply #70 on: June 15, 2005, 07:36:00 PM »
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Thanx a lot Amrita ji........

Aaj phir se mai bewafa ke sheher mein aaya hu,
Dil toh lut chuka hai jan o jigar mai laya hu,
Poochna hai uss jalim se ki mujhe jinda hi kyu choda,
Kat ke uske kadmon mein rakhne apna sir laya hu........
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«Reply #71 on: June 17, 2005, 02:14:33 PM »
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Thanx a lot Amrita ji........

Aaj phir se mai bewafa ke sheher mein aaya hu,
Dil toh lut chuka hai jan o jigar mai laya hu,
Poochna hai uss jalim se ki mujhe jinda hi kyu choda,
Kat ke uske kadmon mein rakhne apna sir laya hu........


bahut khoob thy...!!
amrita ke aagey ji mat lagaya karo
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«Reply #72 on: June 17, 2005, 05:10:03 PM »
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wonderfullll  thy,,,,,,,,,................bahot  khoob...........
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«Reply #73 on: June 17, 2005, 07:42:11 PM »
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Thanx a lot Amrita ji n Waheed Bhai.....
Amrita ji....

Hum Tum mein ab bhi duri bahut hai humdum,
Tumko aap kehna jaruri bahut hai humdum,
Kai dost khoye humne apni bebaki mein yahan,
Tumhe na khone ki aajmaish puri hai humdum...
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«Reply #74 on: June 17, 2005, 08:20:51 PM »
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Thanx a lot Amrita ji n Waheed Bhai.....
Amrita ji....

Hum Tum mein ab bhi duri bahut hai humdum,
Tumko aap kehna jaruri bahut hai humdum,
Kai dost khoye humne apni bebaki mein yahan,
Tumhe na khone ki aajmaish puri hai humdum...


 
hum agar tumhare hotey,
tab tum humein khotey..

durita toh tum tab khotey
jab hum aap se tum hotey
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