Tu bhi dekh le!

by salma786 on April 18, 2009, 11:21:44 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 28, 2009, 11:19:06 AM »
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Aa dekh tadap kar teri yadon ke jee kar,
Koi pal pal khud ko maarta kaise hai,

Tu to khushi se jee raha hai kisi or ki bahoon me,
Koi andhero me gumnaam zindegi bitata kaise hai,

Hasrato ka chiraag jalaya tha jo sath milkar,
Aa dekh uski law ko bujhne se koi bachata kaise hai,

Jin raaho ko kabhi phoolo se sajakar rakha tha humne,
Aa dekh koi kanto pe khoon bahakar chalta kaise hai!
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«Reply #16 on: May 25, 2009, 08:41:51 AM »
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Shukriya Kaash ji!
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«Reply #17 on: May 25, 2009, 01:21:52 PM »
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kaisi hain salma jee,
apki batein padhi, apne dard ko ek jeevant roop de dala hai,
sach kahoon to, iss zindagi mein isse adhik dard ho hi nahi sakta

kyonki mirza sahab ne bhi apni ek shayari mein kaha tha ki "dard ka had se gujarna hai dawa ho jana" unhone to sirf kaha tha, kuch to use feel karte hain.

apna khyal rakhiyega.....
bye
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«Reply #18 on: May 25, 2009, 01:24:17 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on April 28, 2009, 11:19:06 AM
Aa dekh tadap kar teri yadon ke jee kar,
Koi pal pal khud ko maarta kaise hai,

Tu to khushi se jee raha hai kisi or ki bahoon me,
Koi andhero me gumnaam zindegi bitata kaise hai,

Hasrato ka chiraag jalaya tha jo sath milkar,
Aa dekh uski law ko bujhne se koi bachata kaise hai,

Jin raaho ko kabhi phoolo se sajakar rakha tha humne,
Aa dekh koi kanto pe khoon bahakar chalta kaise hai!

Bahut khoob Salma dear.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: May 26, 2009, 03:37:00 AM »
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Quote from: qayda on May 25, 2009, 01:21:52 PM
kaisi hain salma jee,
apki batein padhi, apne dard ko ek jeevant roop de dala hai,
sach kahoon to, iss zindagi mein isse adhik dard ho hi nahi sakta

kyonki mirza sahab ne bhi apni ek shayari mein kaha tha ki "dard ka had se gujarna hai dawa ho jana" unhone to sirf kaha tha, kuch to use feel karte hain.

apna khyal rakhiyega.....
bye

Shukriya Qayda ji...bas apki dua hai!
or ek hi ashar sab kuch keh gaya... thanks for sharing Thumbs UP
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«Reply #20 on: May 26, 2009, 03:37:59 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 25, 2009, 01:24:17 PM
Bahut khoob Salma dear.. Applause Applause

Thanks Roja dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: May 26, 2009, 12:48:20 PM »
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Very very nice Salma Ji
Badi asardar rachna hai
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #22 on: May 27, 2009, 11:23:54 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 26, 2009, 12:48:20 PM
Very very nice Salma Ji
Badi asardar rachna hai
SARVESH RASTOGI

Shukriya Sarvesh ji !
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«Reply #23 on: May 27, 2009, 11:30:53 AM »
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Hay Kyua Khoob Likha Hai Salma, Bohat Achjche Yaar, Yunhi LIkhte Rehna,.
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«Reply #24 on: May 28, 2009, 03:46:52 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on May 27, 2009, 11:30:53 AM
Hay Kyua Khoob Likha Hai Salma, Bohat Achjche Yaar, Yunhi LIkhte Rehna,.

Shukriya Azeem ji!
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