पारस या मिट्टी..

by Sunehari on December 18, 2013, 09:37:05 PM
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Thi  zindgi me mai jb akeeli,,

tune mujhe apna keh diya...

kuch adhura sa tha

paimana(पैमाना) mera,,

tune aa kar use pura bhar diya...

 

 

Thi kbhi n mujhe mitti(मिट्टी) ko Sona

 bna ne ki chahat(चाहत),, maine to

hmesha  khud ko  bs yu hi liya,,

par Paras (पारस)keh tune hi mujhe

wo  hoslaa (हौसला)  bhi de diya...

 

 

Jeene lagi thi mai teri zindgi me

tere sang,,tune bhi to pura sath diya,,

pr shayad meri  hi najar lag gayi hme aur

bs ek galti ne sb kuch  tabah sa kr diya...

 

 

dil kehta tha nahi hota apno pr

galtiyo ka asar,,pr aaj mere hi

akks(अक्स)ne mujhse ye keh diya..

 

 

Paras   thi  mai  tere  liye,,

tune hi mujhe  mitti  kr  diya..

tujhse  door (दूर)  kiya mujhe

khuda ne,,  aur  tune mujhe

mujhse  hi  door (दूर) kr  diya...

 

Tune mujhe mujhse hi dur kr diya..
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«Reply #1 on: December 18, 2013, 09:41:22 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 18, 2013, 09:42:29 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 18, 2013, 10:07:14 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 18, 2013, 11:21:36 PM »
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Thi  zindgi me mai jb akeeli,,

tune mujhe apna keh diya...

kuch adhura sa tha

paimana(पैमाना) mera,,

tune aa kar use pura bhar diya...

 

 

Thi kbhi n mujhe mitti(मिट्टी) ko Sona

 bna ne ki chahat(चाहत),, maine to

hmesha  khud ko  bs yu hi liya,,

par Paras (पारस)keh tune hi mujhe

wo  hoslaa (हौसला)  bhi de diya...

 

 

Jeene lagi thi mai teri zindgi me

tere sang,,tune bhi to pura sath diya,,

pr shayad meri  hi najar lag gayi hme aur

bs ek galti ne sb kuch  tabah sa kr diya...

 

 

dil kehta tha nahi hota apno pr

galtiyo ka asar,,pr aaj mere hi

akks(अक्स)ne mujhse ye keh diya..

 

 

Paras   thi  mai  tere  liye,,

tune hi mujhe  mitti  kr  diya..

tujhse  door (दूर)  kiya mujhe

khuda ne,,  aur  tune mujhe

mujhse  hi  door (दूर) kr  diya...

 

Tune mujhe mujhse hi dur kr diya..


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«Reply #6 on: December 19, 2013, 02:55:59 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: December 19, 2013, 06:52:46 AM »
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