Afsana

by Sonu on May 22, 2006, 07:31:31 AM
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ajju_sweet
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«Reply #15 on: September 03, 2006, 06:49:12 PM »
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zakham lakhoo khayee tumne
fakaq  hai tumay unpar aitaybar hai
jisnay tumhey lakhooo zakhamy diye hai
khuda karay vo khud marham laganay aayeee
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Sonu
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«Reply #16 on: September 04, 2006, 05:08:53 AM »
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ajju ji bahut khoob... wonderful.... yeo hi likhtey rahow..



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zakham lakhoo khayee tumne
fakaq  hai tumay unpar aitaybar hai
jisnay tumhey lakhooo zakhamy diye hai
khuda karay vo khud marham laganay aayeee
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Sonu
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«Reply #17 on: October 09, 2006, 07:31:21 AM »
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Aye Musafir hum bhi chale thae kabhi un raho par,
 sajae thae humne bhi ankho ke saajh par kuch sapne.
Lut gaye hum unhi se joh thaey kabhi mere apne…
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Sonu
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«Reply #18 on: October 19, 2006, 03:55:33 AM »
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Kal Fursat Na Mili toh kya hoga,
Itni Mohabbat Na Mili toh kya hoga,
Roz Kehte ho Kal Milenge… Kal Milenge,
Kal Aankhen Na Khuli toh kya hoga
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Sonu
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«Reply #19 on: November 08, 2006, 03:40:07 AM »
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kuch udaas kuch khamosh
kuch bebas see lakeerien merey haath ki?
Dhoondti Rehti hoon aksar in Lakeeron main
Aik lakeer tere naam ki
Kuch maloom bhi hey
Kuch dil bhi janta hey
Ke in lakeeron main koi lakeer Nahi tere naam ki
Phir bhi naa jane kion dhondti Rehti hoon
Aksar ek lakeer tere naam ki
Aik lakeer
terey naam ki..
[not mine]
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Sonu
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«Reply #20 on: November 09, 2006, 06:32:28 AM »
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shukriyaaa Majid bahi.... bahut khoob... keya bat hai bahut ach alikha hai....

na janey keysey dhundti hai meyri nazer
khamush hia labh  mager bolti hai nazer
vefa ki umeed kes sey rakhu
pal mey to badel jati hai nazer
apney paraye lagtey hai kabhi
or kabhi paraye apney
nahi janti, kesey khujti hai meyri nazer
es dhara key rangeen rishto  sey beykhaber
keyval shuney(anth, ahkhri mudh) ko niharati hai meyri nazer...

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wah sis

HAATHON KI LAKEERO MAIN NA DHUDO HUME...
HUM WAQT KE SAATH MIT JAAYENGE....
AGAR DHUNDNA HAI TO APNI YAADO MAIN DHUNDO HUME
JO HAR WAQT BINA IJAJAT AAP KO SAYAENGIO...
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Sonu
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«Reply #21 on: November 09, 2006, 07:24:33 AM »
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your most welcome Majid bahi... bahut khoob..

kal baharo ney bhi mujh sey meyra petha pucha tha...
mey khijaow key taricho mey nazer ahti hoon...
kuch zamney ney bhi khushiyaa sey judha rakha hai
mey vo hi dard-eh zahar ab bhi peyeh jati hoon..
ab to khavaish yea tamnaa ka koi dur nahi
mey ujaloo sey sach puchoo to dar jati hoon...

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thanks sis

KARTI HAI HAR PAL TERA INTEZAAR MERI NAZAR...

KHAMOSH HAI FIR BHI KARTI HAI LAKHON SAWAL MERI NAZAR...

DOOR HAI TU MUJHSE FIR BHI NA JAANE KYUN?

KARTI HAI TUJHE TALAASH YE MERI NAZAR....
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tanhadil
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«Reply #22 on: November 09, 2006, 08:22:14 AM »
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 nice one janab gr8

Muddate gujar gayi,jamane se na didar hua
Sochte hai ham tanhai me hame kyu pyar hua

Tej hawao ka sard jhoka jab yad teri dilata hai
Re par likha har shabd ubhar aata hai
Karah uthta hai dil ke dard se har kouna
Aur ham samjh nahi pate ye kya hua

Muddate gujar gayi,jamane se na didar hua
Sochte hai ham tanhai me hame kyu pyar hua

Na jane kya kashish thi un aankho me
Har lamha khoye rahte the khyalo me
Na chahkar bhi dil fariyad karta hai
Ab to aa jao jo hua bahut hua  bahut hua

Muddate gujar gayi,jamane se na didar hua
Sochte hai ham tanhai me hame kyu pyar hua

Kaise bataye kaise jiye kuch kah nahi sakte
Aapke bina ham jinda rah nahi sakte
Mumkin nahi tanha jina mar jayenge
Jo ab bhi aapka meri jindagi me aana na hua

Muddate gujar gayi,jamane se na didar hua
Sochte hai ham tanhai me hame kyu pyar hua

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Sonu
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«Reply #23 on: November 09, 2006, 09:53:57 PM »
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majid   bahi shukriya..... bahut khoob...

Dil armano se houseful hai ,
poore honge ya nahi yeh doutfull hai ,
is duniya me har cheez wonderfull hai ,
per zindgi aap jaise logo se hi beauty full hai

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wah sis

UJALAO SE KUM ANDHERO SO JYAADA NISBAT RAKHTE HAI...
JAB HOTE HAI TANHA RAATO MAIN TAB TERI YAADO KE CHARAG JALATE HAI....
JAANTE HAI HUM NAAKAME MOHABBAT H AI...
BUS ISLIYE SAB SE MUH CHHUPATE HAI...
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Sonu
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«Reply #24 on: November 09, 2006, 09:57:04 PM »
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Tanhadil ji bahut khoob.... bahut acha likha hai apney...


Khud ki mohhabat fanah kon karenga ,
sab nek banenge to gunah kon karenga ,
aye khuda mere bewafa dost ko salamat rakhana ,
warna meri maut ki dua kon karenga
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Sonu
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«Reply #25 on: November 11, 2006, 06:31:28 AM »
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MAJID BAHI.... BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI APNEY....

KOI TO HOTA....
mai jis k dil ki kitaab benti
mai jis ki chahet ka khawab benti
mai hijr k mosem ki lembi raaton mein
  yaad ben ker azaab benti
KOI TO HOTA.....
jo meri khawahish mein uthh ker raaton ko khoob rota
dukhon ki chader lapeit ker hajoom_e_dunya se door hota
mai rooth jati manata mujh ko
k chahe mera kasoor hota
KOI TO HOTA....
mai jis k itna kareeb hoti
na paas koi rakeeb hota
mai itna uus ka habeeb hoti
ye silsila bhi ajeeb hota
KOI TO HOTA........
KOI TO.....KOI TO HOTA.

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ROZ MARTE DEKHA HAI APNI UMEEDO KO....
FIR BHI AAZMANA CHAA NASEEBO KO....
AAP KI ZINDAGI KO KYA KHOOBSURAT BANAYENGE...
JAB KE ROZ KHUD KO THOKRE KHATE DEKHA LOGO SE....
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Sonu
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«Reply #26 on: November 14, 2006, 06:35:29 AM »
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shukriyaa Majid bahi... keya bat hai Majid bahi bahut khoob... javab nahi apka....

Dekhatey hai aaj us rah ki virania ,
yaro ke sang kati jahan kitni tanhaiya ,
guzara who daur bichad gaye dost ,
sath reh gayi to bas un lamho ki kahaniya

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wah sis........

MERE PAAS TERI YAADON KE SIVA KUCH NAHI...
MERI TANHA RAATO MAIN TERE KHWABO KE SIVA KUCH BHI NAHI...
FIR NAHI KOI ZINDAGI SE SHIQWE GILE....
UJABKE DIL MAIN BHARA AAHON KE SIVA KUCH BHI NAHI..
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Sonu
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«Reply #27 on: November 15, 2006, 04:34:13 AM »
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Majid bahi majak ahcha kertey hu dil ki chut kahey huye or kheytey hu sis tumsey sey sikha hai Usual Smile mmmm


muskurana hum bhul gaye hia
yadoo key jharokey mey hum ab to jeysye khu hi gaye hai...
tanhayoo mey utna hi dil beychan   humko kertahia
her guzra lamhaa ab to sapna saa legta hia ....

 
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ha sis sab kuch aapse hi to sikha hua hai....
good one sis..............



YUN HAR GUZRE LUMHE KI BAAT NA KAR....
BITI BAATEIN SOCHA KAR DIL BEQARAAR NA KAR...
HAAR JAAYEGA EK DEEN GUM BHI TUJHSE....
BUS TUM HAR WAQT MUSKURAYA KAR....
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Sonu
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«Reply #28 on: November 15, 2006, 11:11:27 PM »
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Majid bahi chalu achi baat hia... apney yea ahker yahi sab sikha hai key koi achi baat bhi sikhi hai kesi sey... Majid bahi achi baat hia key dard apkey pass aney sey bhi darta hai or usey darna bhi cahyea hia..

shukriya Majid bahi...

koi bat nahi bahut acha likha hia apney...

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no sis mazak nahi hai sach hai
maine yaha aap sab se hi sikha hai yahan par....
aur rahi baat chot ki to dard to mujhse door bhagta hai hehehe ye dard ward baqwas hai heheh kher...

good one sis......


jane kyoun usey yakheen nahi
merey dil kehtha hey ki woh hey wahi
jisey maine chahtha hu had sey kahi
woh samaj thi ki mere pyar pyar nahi
merey siney maine bhi dil hey pathar nahi


waise ise dubaara post kiya hai....
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angel4u
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«Reply #29 on: November 30, 2006, 08:09:04 PM »
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Nice one sonu ji, and majid JI
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