dil ke dard ko kagaz pe utarun kaise

by samir_bc on December 08, 2009, 08:39:14 PM
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #45 on: December 16, 2009, 06:40:56 AM »
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Thanks Madhu-di....U R My true well wisher.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Quote from: madhuwesh on December 16, 2009, 05:59:15 AM
Great lines Samir ji,Koyal ji,Rishi ji.bahut khoob Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #46 on: December 16, 2009, 06:54:55 AM »
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hi friend my name is prasad what is ur name plz add i am new join in this contact
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«Reply #47 on: December 16, 2009, 07:24:23 AM »
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Bigdi Jo Hai Zindegi Usse Sawaru Kaise
Murjah Gae Hai Zindegi Ke Fhul Unhe Me Nikharu Kaise
Karunga Bayan Me Teri Dastan Toh Roh Padega Kalam Bhi
Iss Dil Ke Dard Ko Kagaz Pe Utarun Kaise
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«Reply #48 on: December 16, 2009, 11:58:12 AM »
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Quote from: Shayaries_King on December 16, 2009, 07:24:23 AM
Bigdi Jo Hai Zindegi Usse Sawaru Kaise
Murjah Gae Hai Zindegi Ke Fhul Unhe Me Nikharu Kaise
Karunga Bayan Me Teri Dastan Toh Roh Padega Kalam Bhi
Iss Dil Ke Dard Ko Kagaz Pe Utarun Kaise



nice line sk ji......thanks for sharing.
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«Reply #49 on: December 16, 2009, 12:58:25 PM »
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koyal jee,Rishi jee,SK jee sabhi ne bahoot achha likha he.

Quote from: samir_bc on December 16, 2009, 05:43:31 AM


dil se shukriya rishi ji... ap bhi acha likhte hain.. bus thoda flow ka dhyan rakha karen.. shabd kosh apka bhi bhara hua hai.



kalam bhi ro rahi thi khud alfaz dhul rahe the
jab hum dard-e-dastan ko apni likh rahe the

phir koshish bahot ki maine ki keh dun jubani
baha jo dard-e-dariya to khud hont sil rahe the

sath jinke hum aksar chala karte the
aj ajnabi ki tarah unse mil rahe the


samir"dilse"

Waaaaaaaaaaah. Kya baat hai. Bahoot achche. Daad kabul kijiye aur likhtey rahiye.
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«Reply #50 on: December 16, 2009, 01:46:41 PM »
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Thanks Ashaji....U R Welcome...
Aap bhi likhiye na....

Quote from: Asha2089 on December 16, 2009, 12:58:25 PM
koyal jee,Rishi jee,SK jee sabhi ne bahoot achha likha he.

Waaaaaaaaaaah. Kya baat hai. Bahoot achche. Daad kabul kijiye aur likhtey rahiye.
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«Reply #51 on: December 17, 2009, 05:24:25 AM »
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thanks asha ji.............. aap bhi kuch likhiye.
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«Reply #52 on: December 17, 2009, 05:38:17 AM »
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Quote from: Shayaries_King on December 16, 2009, 07:24:23 AM
Bigdi Jo Hai Zindegi Usse Sawaru Kaise
Murjah Gae Hai Zindegi Ke Fhul Unhe Me Nikharu Kaise
Karunga Bayan Me Teri Dastan Toh Roh Padega Kalam Bhi
Iss Dil Ke Dard Ko Kagaz Pe Utarun Kaise
Nice line SK Ji
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«Reply #53 on: December 17, 2009, 12:51:46 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 15, 2009, 04:00:48 PM
Thanks Rishi-bhai.....AApne bhi bahoot achha likha hai.... Applause Applause Applause
Aapne poochha isliye apni samajh se batla rahi hu....sahi ya galat ki vyakhya nahi hai.....
Pehli line ko jara soch kar dekhiye.....

"SYAHI KI KALAM".....YA "Kalam ki syahi"



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Koyal JI Aur Salah Dene Ke liye Shukriya Hum Majjhe Huve Shayar To Nahi Hai Per Aap Jaise Acche Shayaro Ko Sath Rha to hum shayar ban jayenge
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«Reply #54 on: December 17, 2009, 12:53:36 PM »
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Quote from: samir_bc on December 16, 2009, 05:43:31 AM


dil se shukriya rishi ji... ap bhi acha likhte hain.. bus thoda flow ka dhyan rakha karen.. shabd kosh apka bhi bhara hua hai.



kalam bhi ro rahi thi khud alfaz dhul rahe the
jab hum dard-e-dastan ko apni likh rahe the

phir koshish bahot ki maine ki keh dun jubani
baha jo dard-e-dariya to khud hont sil rahe the

sath jinke hum aksar chala karte the
aj ajnabi ki tarah unse mil rahe the


samir"dilse"


Ha Sameer Ji Thode Wording Mein Thodi Mushiqal Aa Jati Hai Koshish Karenge Ki Kuch Aur Acchi Tarah Se Likhne KI
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«Reply #55 on: December 17, 2009, 06:11:04 PM »
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Nahi Rishi-bhai hum koi Shayra nahi hai...bas yu he tukbandi kar leti hu...aur koshish kati hu har shabd jo mai likhu meaningful ho.Mann k bhavo ka sahi chitran ho aur rahyming ho....
Aap jab bhi likhen.,likh kar do baar padhiye....dekhiye jo aap kehna chah rahe hai wo convey huaa ya nahi...

xshma kariyega Chhote muh badi baat....
Par kya karu aadatse ho gayee hai salah dene ki...
Mann mai bhav yahi rehta hai ki sab achha likhe...

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on December 17, 2009, 12:51:46 PM

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Koyal JI Aur Salah Dene Ke liye Shukriya Hum Majjhe Huve Shayar To Nahi Hai Per Aap Jaise Acche Shayaro Ko Satha Rha to hum shayar ban jayenge
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«Reply #56 on: December 19, 2009, 08:13:25 AM »
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Chalo Hum Koshish Karenge Ki Is Bar Her sabd Meaning Full ho Aur Apni Aadat Ko Humesha Aisi Hi Rkhana Koyal JI Accha Lgta Hai
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«Reply #57 on: October 27, 2011, 07:13:41 AM »
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Quote from: samir_bc on December 08, 2009, 08:39:14 PM

dil ke dard ko kagaz pe utarun kaise
bewafa keh kar tujhe aaj pukarun kaise

tere sath rehne ki thi adat sada mujhe
in judai ki ghadiyon ko guzarun kaise

milna bichadna to khel hai kismat ka
in hathon ki lakeeron ko sawarun kaise





samir"dilse"

Bahut khoob
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«Reply #58 on: April 06, 2013, 01:57:33 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on October 27, 2011, 07:13:41 AM
Bahut khoob
thanks mkv ji. ...

Aao dosto phir mehfil ko sajate hain .
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«Reply #59 on: April 06, 2013, 02:11:06 PM »
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Quote from: Samir Dil Se on April 06, 2013, 01:57:33 PM
thanks mkv ji. ...

Aao dosto phir mehfil ko sajate hain .

mann mein hai umang to samjho holi hai
jeevan mein ho rang to samjho holi hai..
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