JINDAGI KI RAAH

by jasbirsingh on November 25, 2008, 09:17:01 PM

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jasbirsingh

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«Reply #30 on: November 30, 2008, 10:11:19 AM »

Thanks Pooja

JAB SEY GAYE HO TUM
DIL LAGTA NAHI HAI MERA
KAB AAOGEY TUM
KI FIR HO SAWERA

Jasbir Singh


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Re: JINDAGI KI RAAH

«Reply #31 on: November 30, 2008, 05:21:16 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on November 30, 2008, 10:11:19 AM

JAB SEY GAYE HO TUM
DIL LAGTA NAHI HAI MERA
KAB AAOGEY TUM
KI FIR HO SAWERA

Jasbir Singh

bohat khoobsorat khiyal hay Jasbir ji... Bohat aachay...

Sajid Hadayat


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«Reply #32 on: November 30, 2008, 05:29:03 PM »

THANKS SAJID

JASBIR SINGH


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Re: JINDAGI KI RAAH

«Reply #33 on: December 01, 2008, 07:22:59 AM »

Sajid Bhai Bohat Badhiya Likha Hai,.
Nice One,.
And Nice One Jasbir Ji,.


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«Reply #34 on: December 01, 2008, 10:30:21 AM »

thanks Jahanasheen

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«Reply #35 on: December 01, 2008, 11:32:28 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on November 30, 2008, 10:11:19 AM

JAB SEY GAYE HO TUM
DIL LAGTA NAHI HAI MERA
KAB AAOGEY TUM
KI FIR HO SAWERA
Jasbir Singh

Jasbir Singh ji!
Really, it's a lovely composition!
Pahlee laain mein 'enter' karney mein 'JAB SEY GAYE HO TUM' ki jagah 'JAB SEY GAYE TOH HUM' taaip ho gayaa thaa! Mein ney sudhaar diyaa hai; aap bhi sudhaar deejiyegaa!
- abd bundeli


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«Reply #36 on: December 01, 2008, 11:39:46 AM »

Corrections done ! Usual Smile

Rajbir
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«Reply #37 on: December 01, 2008, 11:40:22 AM »

THANKS BUNDELI

& i appreciate your comments

Jasbir Singh


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«Reply #38 on: December 01, 2008, 12:07:07 PM »

Rajbir JI!
I knew not that the monitors are empowered to make suitable corrections as well! Thanks, you did what I should have done myself!
- abd bundeli


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«Reply #39 on: December 01, 2008, 12:09:25 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 01, 2008, 11:40:22 AM

THANKS BUNDELI
& i appreciate your comments
Jasbir Singh

Dear jasbirsingh ji!
It's alright! You're welcome! It's my pleasure!
- abd bundeli


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jasbirsingh

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«Reply #40 on: December 01, 2008, 12:10:18 PM »

Welcome bundeli. You are great friend to be with.

Jasbir SIngh


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«Reply #41 on: December 01, 2008, 12:12:48 PM »

Thanks jasbirsingh ji!
- abd bundeli


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«Reply #42 on: December 01, 2008, 10:43:23 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 27, 2008, 09:55:37 AM

Zindagi Ki Raahon Mein, Main Tanhaa Musaafir Tha,.
Koi Mera Humsafar Banta, Aisa Mujhe Koi Milaa Nahi,.

Khud Main Hi Carwaan Tha, Saya Tha Saathi Apna,.
Tune Hi To Manzil To Dikhaai Ya Rab, Tujhse Koi Gilaa Nahi,.

__________________________________-Jaanasheen-

bahoot sahi kaha lil bro... Good one!!


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«Reply #43 on: December 01, 2008, 10:59:19 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 27, 2008, 09:55:37 AM

Nice one Jaanasheen

Apni tanhaiyon mein khoye ja rahe the
Hum paas se gujre to dekha tak nahi
Ab kahte hai ki koi hum safar na mila
Kab tak tanhai ka chalega yeh tera silsila