Koun ho tum?

by abdbundeli on July 02, 2008, 03:57:26 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 13, 2012, 10:32:38 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 12, 2012, 12:39:30 PM
Suman ji! Aap sapariwaar khush wa tandurust raheyn!

Pyaar to pyaar hai, koyee karey kisee sey bhee!
Pyaar to paak hai, uskaa hai paak har rishtah!
Ab to kab sey hai zayeefoun mein hi shumaar; 'abd',
Khaak key saath khaak ho na yun magar rishtah!!

                    - abd bundeli


(abd jee bahut bahut abaar hu mai. aapka aashirwad sada hum sab pe baraste rahe.)

mujhe bi maloom hai..
pyar toh pyar hai, pyar paak hai
magar tumne kiya nahi saccha pyar, mera kasur kya tha?
kabhi teri juban pe sirf mera hi naam tha,
mera hi nagma gaata tha
aaj tera naam mere naam se juda kyu nahi?
zamana kyu kehta hai mujhse "Kaun Ho Tum?"
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«Reply #16 on: September 14, 2012, 01:51:11 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on September 13, 2012, 10:32:38 PM
(abd jee bahut bahut abaar hu mai. aapka aashirwad sada hum sab pe baraste rahe.)

mujhe bi maloom hai..
pyar toh pyar hai, pyar paak hai
magar tumne kiya nahi saccha pyar, mera kasur kya tha?
kabhi teri juban pe sirf mera hi naam tha,
mera hi nagma gaata tha
aaj tera naam mere naam se juda kyu nahi?
zamana kyu kehta hai mujhse "Kaun Ho Tum?"


Suman ji, kyaa aap 'south' sey hain? Aapkee 'bhaashaa' barhee hee meethee hai!!

Ham jurhey hain, dahar chukey hain jurhey!
Ham to hain khaandaan sey US key!
Aur, yeh rishtah barhaa pakkaa hai:
Ham hain khuld-o-jahaan sey US key!!

                   - abd bundeli
 
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«Reply #17 on: September 14, 2012, 07:09:29 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 14, 2012, 01:51:11 PM
Suman ji, kyaa aap 'south' sey hain? Aapkee 'bhaashaa' barhee hee meethee hai!!

Ham jurhey hain, dahar chukey hain jurhey!
Ham to hain khaandaan sey US key!
Aur, yeh rishtah barhaa pakkaa hai:
Ham hain khuld-o-jahaan sey US key!!

                   - abd bundeli
 
Abd jee bahut sahi pehchana aapne.  icon_thumleft
waise boli hamari kannad hai.. kya kahi mere likhayi pe galati to nahi hai na? Feared. aisa kuch hai to hame zarur kahiyega plz  Usual Smile Ab Reply

Na likhenge khat hum aaj ke baad
Ye socha hai humne ro-ro ke aaj..

Karke yaad aapki yu hi jiya karenge
Yeh soch ke hum gut-gut ke mara karenge..
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«Reply #18 on: September 15, 2012, 09:51:31 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on September 14, 2012, 07:09:29 PM
Abd jee bahut sahi pehchana aapne.  icon_thumleft
waise boli hamari kannad hai.. kya kahi mere likhayi pe galati to nahi hai na? Feared. aisa kuch hai to hame zarur kahiyega plz  Usual Smile Ab Reply

Na likhenge khat hum aaj ke baad
Ye socha hai humne ro-ro ke aaj..

Karke yaad aapki yu hi jiya karenge
Yeh soch ke hum gut-gut ke mara karenge..

Suman ji! Aapkey prayaas saraahneeya hain! Aap mein khud wa khud nikhaar aataa jaayegaa! Iseeliye to main aapkey har jawaab kaa jawaab deytaa huun! Main 73 kaa huun; mujhey nahin lagtaa aap 30-35 sey jiyaadah kee hongeen! Ho saktaa hai, aur bhi chhotee hon!

Yah mat karnaa, muntazir
Rahtaa huun main, yaar!
Khush rah kar, sukh sey jiyo,
Hai zindagee bahaar!!

          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #19 on: September 16, 2012, 04:20:30 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 15, 2012, 09:51:31 AM
Suman ji! Aapkey prayaas saraahneeya hain! Aap mein khud wa khud nikhaar aataa jaayegaa! Iseeliye to main aapkey har jawaab kaa jawaab deytaa huun! Main 73 kaa huun; mujhey nahin lagtaa aap 30-35 sey jiyaadah kee hongeen! Ho saktaa hai, aur bhi chhotee hon!

Yah mat karnaa, muntazir
Rahtaa huun main, yaar!
Khush rah kar, sukh sey jiyo,
Hai zindagee bahaar!!

          - abd bundeli

aapne kaha nikhaar aa hi jayega hamari likhayi mein. yeh aapka aashirwad lekar aur bi likhne ka josh mujhme aagaya hai  Usual Smile

now reply

Tere naam maine kuch khat likhey hai
andhero ke seene mein, khuli palko se likhey hai
zara palkey band karke, zara adkhuli palko se
kabhi pad lena aur kabhi, jawab likh dena..TUM.
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«Reply #20 on: September 16, 2012, 07:46:48 AM »
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Zindgi ka fanda hai --dosto ko azmaya na karo kabhi
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«Reply #21 on: September 16, 2012, 11:03:32 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on September 16, 2012, 04:20:30 AM
aapne kaha nikhaar aa hi jayega hamari likhayi mein. yeh aapka aashirwad lekar aur bi likhne ka josh mujhme aagaya hai  Usual Smile

now reply

Tere naam maine kuch khat likhey hai
andhero ke seene mein, khuli palko se likhey hai
zara palkey band karke, zara adkhuli palko se
kabhi pad lena aur kabhi, jawab likh dena..TUM.



Shukriyah Suman ji! Aap mein pratibhaa hai! Khoob likheyn, par jab pariwwar key paalan-poshan sey samay miley tab! God Bless You!

Main ney dono khat padhey,
Aur huaa huun dhanya!
Tum see anuj-wadhuu milee,
Sneyh-pradeept ananya!

  - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli
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«Reply #22 on: September 18, 2012, 07:45:00 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 16, 2012, 11:03:32 PM
Shukriyah Suman ji! Aap mein pratibhaa hai! Khoob likheyn, par jab pariwwar key paalan-poshan sey samay miley tab! God Bless You!

Main ney dono khat padhey,
Aur huaa huun dhanya!
Tum see anuj-wadhuu milee,
Sneyh-pradeept ananya!

  - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli

(haan kabhi kabaar mil hi jaata samay.... thanks abd sir)


kabhi mere dil ke kareeb aate ho
kabhi mujhse dhur chale jaate ho
do din ka pyar aur saal ber ka judayee dete ho
aisa kyu mere dilse khelte ho?
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«Reply #23 on: September 18, 2012, 12:37:25 PM »
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Quote from: sushilbansal on September 16, 2012, 07:46:48 AM
Zindgi ka fanda hai --dosto ko azmaya na karo kabhi

Badee beybaaq baateyn kartey ho, Sushil bbhayi! Bahut achchhey!
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