<>*Tere bin*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 15, 2010, 10:48:29 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 19, 2010, 10:27:06 PM »
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Wah...wakei dil se daad Koyal di, Kasak jee aur Kapil Dost...Behad khubsoorat likha hai aap teenon ne iss thread main..

Koyal di, kya kehne apke...har line padkar bas wah wah kiye jaa raha tha...especially this one...
Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 15, 2010, 01:00:32 PM

Ye kaisi na-umeeddee hai kasak-di
Kyu nahi hai bharosa apne pyar pe

Kasak hai agar uske dil me tere pyar ki
Khicha chala aayega wo chaukhat pe teri



Kasak* means (*The wave of heart pain in the memories of someone)



Kasak jee, apne bhi bahaut khubsoorat likha hai...i lovedd this one...yeh najane kaisa sawal kar baithe...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 16, 2010, 08:17:26 AM
shukriya Hriday ji........aapko pasand aai ye peshkash bhi.....

kismat ka likha ab to mita dijiye

ye raahen meri raahon se mila lijiye

kyunnahin ho sakte hum aapke sanam

bas ek bar itna hume bata dijiye
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Aur Kapil Dost...tum toh ho hi classic...hehe lajawab!



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«Reply #16 on: July 19, 2010, 11:46:04 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on July 19, 2010, 10:27:06 PM
Wah...wakei dil se daad Koyal di, Kasak jee aur Kapil Dost...Behad khubsoorat likha hai aap teenon ne iss thread main..

Koyal di, kya kehne apke...har line padkar bas wah wah kiye jaa raha tha...especially this one...

Kasak jee, apne bhi bahaut khubsoorat likha hai...i lovedd this one...yeh najane kaisa sawal kar baithe...

Aur Kapil Dost...tum toh ho hi classic...hehe lajawab!



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«Reply #17 on: July 20, 2010, 04:46:11 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 16, 2010, 08:47:41 AM
U r welcome Kasak ji...!!!

kuch rishte kuch naate hote hain kuch aise,
ki maano na milne ke liye wo bane ho jaise,
mile the bichhadne ke liye hi hum shayad,
kya wajah hai uski hum aapko batayein kaise..


kyun kar ye hamari nazrein mili
aakhir kyun tumse hi sanam ye rishta juda
kyun main bina kuch kahe ban gai hun teri
kyun tum mujhe yun zamane se tanha kar gaye...!!!
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«Reply #18 on: July 20, 2010, 04:47:12 AM »
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shukriya aapka Rahim ji k aapko hamari koshish pasand aai.....

hausla afzai ka shukriya ji
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«Reply #19 on: July 20, 2010, 07:27:12 AM »
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Aapka tahe dil se shukriya Rahim-bhai....Aapko meri lines pasand aayee.....Daad sweekaar hai..... icon_flower

Quote from: -Rahim- on July 19, 2010, 10:27:06 PM
Wah...wakei dil se daad Koyal di, Kasak jee aur Kapil Dost...Behad khubsoorat likha hai aap teenon ne iss thread main..

Koyal di, kya kehne apke...har line padkar bas wah wah kiye jaa raha tha...especially this one...

Kasak jee, apne bhi bahaut khubsoorat likha hai...i lovedd this one...yeh najane kaisa sawal kar baithe...

Aur Kapil Dost...tum toh ho hi classic...hehe lajawab!



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«Reply #20 on: July 20, 2010, 08:13:01 AM »
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bahut khoob Kasak ji...!!!

na bhoola hoon na bhoola paunga kabhi,
bas kuch hi palon ki doori hai abhi,
ye ghum ka ghana saaya dhal jayega,
apna atoot milan ho paayega tabhi...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 20, 2010, 04:46:11 AM
kyun kar ye hamari nazrein mili
aakhir kyun tumse hi sanam ye rishta juda
kyun main bina kuch kahe ban gai hun teri
kyun tum mujhe yun zamane se tanha kar gaye...!!!
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«Reply #21 on: July 22, 2010, 05:41:59 PM »
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bht mast likha hai aapne klaskar ji....

aajao k ab to aankhen bhi pathra gai hain
dhadkane bhi dheeme ho gai hain
saans bhi chhodne lagi hai sath ab to
aajao k ummeed bhi ab haarne lagi hai...!!!
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«Reply #22 on: July 23, 2010, 06:40:05 AM »
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Shukriya Anamika ji... aapne bhi bahut hi khoob likha hai...!!!

milan dur nahi ab, yun na haar maano tum,
dhadkano ko apne thoda aur sambhaalo tum,
sanson ko apne yun na chhod jaane do saath,
meri saanse ho tum, meri zindagi ho tum...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 22, 2010, 05:41:59 PM
bht mast likha hai aapne klaskar ji....

aajao k ab to aankhen bhi pathra gai hain
dhadkane bhi dheeme ho gai hain
saans bhi chhodne lagi hai sath ab to
aajao k ummeed bhi ab haarne lagi hai...!!!
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«Reply #23 on: July 23, 2010, 06:59:03 AM »
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wahhh ji wahhhh

zindagi kehke zindagi ko chhod gaye
apna kehkebegano se rishta jod gaye
aake dekh to jao kya haal hai mera
jab tum mujhe yahan tabha chhod gaye.....!!
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«Reply #24 on: July 23, 2010, 07:36:04 AM »
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Tere bin mera jeena bhee koi jeena hai
In Majburiyon ka zahar kab tak peena hai

Dil tou ab bhee tere he paas hai
Fir bhi shikaayat teri jaayaz hai

Kya kahu kaise samjhau mein tujhko
Kis kadar uljhee hai takdeer meree
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«Reply #25 on: July 23, 2010, 07:56:17 AM »
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bht khub Anaam ji...kya jawab diya hai aapne .

iss uljhitakdeer ko sang mere jod de
fir sulajh jayegi har baat teri

khud ko mere naam se tu jod le
sanwar jayegi fir ye takdeer teri

ek bar kar de tukhudko mere hawale
fir na kabhi hogi sanma haar teri...
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«Reply #26 on: July 23, 2010, 08:05:45 AM »
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Bahut achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap logon ne
Pa.dhkar hum jhoom uthe hain
Jaari rakhiye
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«Reply #27 on: July 23, 2010, 08:13:40 AM »
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ji shukriya rajesh ji..aap bhi yahankuch kehte to raunak aur badh jati...
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«Reply #28 on: July 23, 2010, 08:29:49 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 23, 2010, 08:05:45 AM
Bahut achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap logon ne
Pa.dhkar hum jhoom uthe hain
Jaari rakhiye
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«Reply #29 on: July 23, 2010, 08:30:41 AM »
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Shukriya Kasak ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

tumse dur hoke bhi tumhse dur nahi hoon,
pukarke dekho main tumhare paas hi hoon,
tumse alag hoke bas tumhaara intzaar hi hai,
raahon me aankhen bichhaye main aaj bhi hoon...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 23, 2010, 06:59:03 AM
wahhh ji wahhhh

zindagi kehke zindagi ko chhod gaye
apna kehkebegano se rishta jod gaye
aake dekh to jao kya haal hai mera
jab tum mujhe yahan tabha chhod gaye.....!!
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