आसमान मे एक तारा हे ..............

by pawan16 on October 22, 2012, 06:49:14 PM
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आसमान मे एक तारा हे.
जिसके लिये ये दिल बेचारा हे,
आंखे आसमा मे किये हुये हे हम,
दिख रहा रोश्न चांदनी मे उसका नजारा हे,
वो इतना प्यारा हे,
हुआ जा रहा बेकाबू दिल हमारा हे,
हमारी चाहत केवल वो हे,
इस बात से वो ना-गंवारा हे,
उसकी चाहत मे बेबस हम,
पवन सबकी नजरो मे हुआ आवारा हे
एक कमी महसूस होती हे,
जंहा पवन नंही इतनी दुर क्यो ये सितारा हे…pawan
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2012, 09:42:53 PM »
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 :happy1:Pawan it is a great composition, Congratulations, sending popcorns for  treat
Sheel didi.
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«Reply #2 on: October 23, 2012, 12:54:03 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 23, 2012, 01:29:30 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2012, 02:34:53 AM »
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आसमान मे एक तारा हे.
जिसके लिये ये दिल बेचारा हे,
आंखे आसमा मे किये हुये हे हम,
दिख रहा रोश्न चांदनी मे उसका नजारा हे,
वो इतना प्यारा हे,
हुआ जा रहा बेकाबू दिल हमारा हे,
हमारी चाहत केवल वो हे,
इस बात से वो ना-गंवारा हे,
उसकी चाहत मे बेबस हम,
पवन सबकी नजरो मे हुआ आवारा हे
एक कमी महसूस होती हे,
जंहा पवन नंही इतनी दुर क्यो ये सितारा हे…pawan
Sundat atisundar... Param sukhdayini
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2012, 02:39:08 AM »
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Tare kabhi hath nahi aate.....hm sirf un ki chaht ker sakte hain...
aap ne bahut sunder likha hai...
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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2012, 04:45:13 AM »
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Bahut Khub Pawan JI Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2012, 02:30:00 AM »
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very nice...
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