जो हो सके तो मुझे दास्तान बना भी दे ...

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निढाल क़दमों को मंज़िल का आसरा भी दे
उदास शाम को मंज़र सा कुछ नया भी दे

जनम जनम से खुद अपनी तलाश में गुम हैं
तस्वीर-ऐ-दर्द को हम से कभी मिला भी दे

हमारे दरमियाँ हैं रस्म-ओ-रिवाज़ की दूरियां
जो हो सके तो ये दीवारें गिरा भी दे

मैं सादा वरक़ हूँ तेरी कहानी का 'मीना'
जो हो सके तो मुझे दास्तान बना भी दे

nidhaal kadmon ko manzil ka aasra bhi de
udaas shaam ko manzar sa kuchh naya bhi de

janam janam se khud apni talaash mein guum hain
tasveer-ae-dard ko hum se kabhi mila bhi de

humare darmiyaan hain rasm-o-riwaaz kii duuriyaan
ho mumkin gar to ye deewarein gira bhi de

main saada warq hun teri kahani ka 'meena'
jo ho sake to mujhe dastaan bana bhi de
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2014, 08:47:34 AM »
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निढाल क़दमों को मंज़िल का आसरा भी दे
उदास शाम को मंज़र सा कुछ नया भी दे

जनम जनम से खुद अपनी तलाश में गुम हैं
तस्वीर-ऐ-दर्द को हम से कभी मिला भी दे


Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2014, 09:01:40 AM »
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Mixie Jee Aadaab...!

Waah jee waah kia kahne behad khoob aur umda kalaam kahi hai aapne... behad gehre aur pyaare ashaar kahe haiN jee...

Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... 
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«Reply #3 on: March 04, 2014, 09:46:32 AM »
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Wah Wah kyaa baat hai Mixie Jee.  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 04, 2014, 02:25:06 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2014, 05:42:48 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: March 04, 2014, 06:22:23 PM »
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Awesomeeeeeee... likhte rahiye... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #7 on: March 04, 2014, 09:42:00 PM »
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bahut bahut khoooooob.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #8 on: March 04, 2014, 10:56:17 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: March 06, 2014, 04:28:43 AM »
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Aadaab...!

Waah jee waah kia kahne behad khoob aur umda kalaam kahi hai aapne... behad gehre aur pyaare ashaar kahe haiN jee...

Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

aur ummed hai aap se aise kuch aur pyaari nyari baate padhne ka.good bye GOD bless you dear.and take care of yourr good self
 Applause Applause Applause love9 love9 love9

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«Reply #10 on: March 07, 2014, 08:43:54 AM »
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Aap sabka tah-e-dil se shukriya is hausla afzahi ke liye...
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