मुस्कुराता हुआ चाँद

by Neel1525 on January 17, 2010, 05:54:27 PM
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कभी कभी मैं सोचता हूँ
कि ये वीणा कि झंकार है, या कि तुम्हारे पायलों कि रुनझुन ?
ये फूलों कि महक है, या कि तुम्हारी सांसों कि खुशबू ?
ये मासूम पंछियों कि सरगम है, या कि तुम्हारे कंगन कि आवाज़ ?
ये मुस्कुराता हुआ चाँद है, या कि तुम्हारा खिला हुआ चेहरा ?
ये बांसुरी कि धुन में समाया राग बसंत है, या कि तुम्हारे दिल से निकली कोई तान ?
ये तुम्हारे बदन पर थिरकती हुई बूंदें हैं, या कि सीप से निकले हुए मोती ?
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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2010, 08:17:20 PM »
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Ati uttam rachna hai Neel ji. Shubh kamnayen.
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2010, 07:59:44 AM »
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Wow bahut khoob Neel ji.mindblowing creation.excellent.aapke sabhi poems bahut pasand aayi. Hats off to you! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: January 20, 2010, 01:56:40 PM »
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Muddaton Kiya Hai Tera Intizaar Aai Sanam..
Umar Kat Chuki Ab To Jaana Hoga!
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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2010, 05:32:23 PM »
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Bahut Khub Neel Ji And Nice Line DD Ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2010, 05:46:44 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Neelji
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2010, 12:15:58 PM »
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Shukriya !!
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