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«Reply #15 on: September 03, 2006, 08:27:14 PM » |
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dono aache shayar se bahut accha likha hai :D wonderful job :D
aankho mein hai mohbbat ka peghaam
bikahri julphe bataati i hain dil ka bikhara bikhara haal
chalak raha hai koi halaka halaka sa nasha sama mein
yeh aaj mere dil ko kaun kahi liye ja raha hai
woh aa ke chum lete hain hamko khawabo mein
yeh aaj hame ishq kis mukaam par liye ja raha hai!!
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«Reply #16 on: September 04, 2006, 12:52:15 PM » |
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Thnx Majid bhai and Gud one Ranju
Thi jab Veeran Jindagi toh Sahara tera mila.....
Hua kuch iss Kadar Pyar tumse ki maan lia aaj tumhe apna Khuda.....
Na kehna ab ki yeh Mausam ki baat hai.....
Samajh jaa Sanam yeh Mahobbat ka Aghaaz hai.....
Gumgeen nahi ab TaQdeer jo ab tera Saath hai.....
Badal dunga iss Dunia ko bhi kyunki tera Vishwaas hai......!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #17 on: September 04, 2006, 01:52:38 PM » |
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bahut khoob gaurav .......
yun zindagi rafta rafta katati rahi
kabhi dhup ban ke kabhi chhaav ban ke milti rahi
kiya hamne bharosa sirf teri baato ka
yeh dil ki duniya bas tere rango mein dhalti rahi!!
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«Reply #18 on: September 04, 2006, 09:25:04 PM » |
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Ek Shabd me kya Tareef karun aapki....
Khayal mere kuch kam padenge......
Kya adab doon me aapko aye huzoor....
Lafz mere toot padenge....
Aap hai Woh Ghazal jise harr Shayar likhna chahata hai....
Khud se karta aapki tareef woh Nazm ka roop pata hai.....!!!!!!!
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«Reply #19 on: September 05, 2006, 07:52:52 PM » |
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unko bethe bethe mera khyaal aata tih hoga
kabhi yun hi mujh per pyaar aata toh hoga
likh dete honge fir woh mera naam kore kagaz per
dil unka mere liye koi geet gaata toh hoga!!
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«Reply #20 on: September 05, 2006, 08:22:57 PM » |
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Ranju, Gaurav
Bahut he achcha likha hai tum dono ne....
Ranju tumhare aakhri sher par mujhe ek gaana yaad aaya
Shayad kisi ka dil tumhare liye yeh geet gaata ho :wink:
Gaata rahe mera dil, tuhi meri manzil
kahin beete na yeh raaten kahin beete na yeh din :D
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«Reply #21 on: September 05, 2006, 08:24:12 PM » |
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aaj fir jeene ki tamanna hai...
aaj fir marne ka iraada hai...
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«Reply #22 on: September 05, 2006, 08:42:36 PM » |
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nice work Ranjana..... Gaurav......... good jobbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
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«Reply #23 on: September 05, 2006, 10:40:49 PM » |
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Thnx Waheed bhai Jaan.....
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«Reply #24 on: September 06, 2006, 11:54:28 AM » |
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Ek Shabd me kya Tareef karun aapki....
Khayal mere kuch kam padenge......
Kya adab doon me aapko aye huzoor....
Lafz mere toot padenge....
Aap hai Woh Ghazal jise harr Shayar likhna chahata hai....
Khud se karta aapki tareef woh Nazm ka roop pata hai.....!!!!!!! GAURAV BHAI... behad khubsoorat likha hai aapne.... kalaam to aapka har ek padhta hoon main... likhte to aap humesha hi khubsoorat hain... par aapka yeh kalaam sab se alag hat ke laga hai... ek-ek lafz aapne behad lajawab likha hai... kya khubsoorat TAREEF ki hai aapne... bahut khoob........ khaas kar last line.... bahut pyari likhi hai.. |
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«Reply #25 on: September 06, 2006, 08:31:48 PM » |
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Bahoot Khoob Doston,..
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«Reply #26 on: September 07, 2006, 09:10:57 AM » |
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Ranju, Gaurav
Bahut he achcha likha hai tum dono ne....
Ranju tumhare aakhri sher par mujhe ek gaana yaad aaya
Shayad kisi ka dil tumhare liye yeh geet gaata ho :wink:
Gaata rahe mera dil, tuhi meri manzil
kahin beete na yeh raaten kahin beete na yeh din :D
Rajbir  kiska dil Rajbir......  :D :D jab ishq husan ka diwaana ho jaata hai toh izhaar ka andaaz bhi shayaraana ho jaata hai hone lagti hai baate lafazo ki jubaan se aur sama koi pyaar ka geet gunganaane lagata hai keh jaate hain woh baate bhi hum aksar jo unke saamane kehne se dil ghabaraane lagata hai!! :D :D |
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«Reply #27 on: September 07, 2006, 09:51:54 AM » |
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Dil me agar ho Junoon......
Toh Mahobbat meri tum Pehchaan lo......
Kise kehte hai Sanam aur kya hota hai Behem......
Dekhlo ab Dil ke Rishte aur Khuda ki baat jaan lo......
Haan hum karte hai Pyar unse......
Par Wafa ki Umeed par Kashti-e-Zindagi na bahayenge.......
Chahenge bas unhe aur unke Dil se Dil lagayenge.....
Kya Soche Dunia aur kya Jaante tum ho.....
Samajh jao kya hoti Mahobbat agar Khuda ko maante tum ho.....
Dil me agar ho Junoon.....
Toh meri Mahobbat Pehchaan lo......!!!!!!!
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«Reply #28 on: September 07, 2006, 10:54:33 AM » |
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woh aankho aankho mein karke baat afsaana bana dete hain
mujhse karke izhaar mujhe apana diwaana bana dete hain
kuch aaj ajab sa nasha hai unki aankho mein
woh sirf aaj nazaro se peela ke hamko beheka dete hain
darte hain hum zamaane ki nighaao se
woh apne pehlu mein hamko betha ke hosala bada dete hain
agar aaj khuda maan le meri har dua sanam
toh aaj hum apni dua mein tujhe umarbhar ke liye maang lete hain !!
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«Reply #29 on: September 07, 2006, 09:01:57 PM » |
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