"Achha lagta hai" -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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«Reply #15 on: October 08, 2005, 04:07:31 PM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

Wow sanya,amazing write,lovely Usual Smile

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"Mujhse baat karte waqt tumhaara sharmana ,
achcha lagta hai :oops: ,
jab raat bhar mujhe yaad karte ho,ehsaas hota hai,
wo tera ehsaas achcha lagta hai,
tera har waqt mere kareeb rehna,mera khayal rakhna,
wo samaa achcha lagta hai,
nazron se bohat kuch kehke kuch mujhse sunna chahna,
wo nazron ka aetbaar achcha lagta hai,
tumhe pareshan karte waqt tumhara betaab sa hona,
wo betaabiyan achchi lagti hain,
mohabbat jahan shuru hai,jahan khatm hai,wo sirf tu hai,
tujhe apni mohabbat pukaarna bohat achcha lagtaa hai."

hmmmmmm wah Nidhi,........ tum to always nice likhti ho,.... such a beautiful work .. nice wordings........... nice works all..... sabhi logon ne accha likha......


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"Achha lagta hai"

«Reply #16 on: October 08, 2005, 10:56:27 PM »

bohot bohot shukriya Aryaan aur waheed mAmU!


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"Achha lagta hai"

«Reply #17 on: October 08, 2005, 11:08:55 PM »

Thanx a lot waheed Usual Smile


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waheed_rose2004

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"Achha lagta hai"

«Reply #18 on: October 09, 2005, 12:30:45 AM »

ur Sanya Mamani...........Nidhi........ tongue3


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thanks sanya

«Reply #19 on: October 10, 2005, 02:38:14 PM »

aap bahut khoob likhti ho humne bus yoon hi thoda sa aapki pyari si shayari ko change kar diya maafi chahte hain
fir se kaho na koi acchi si shayari

ek hum kehte hain

Dekhte rahe har pal tumhe;
Behte rahe har pal tummein;
Paate rahein tumko har pal;
Khote rahe khud ko har pal;
Aankhon se aankhen milti hai jab jab;
Saanson se saanse judti hai tab tab
Chein ki kadi judti hai har pal;
Betaabi ghate hue bhi badte rahe har pal


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"Achha lagta hai"

«Reply #20 on: October 11, 2005, 01:12:47 AM »

no prob gesu, nice one!

main kal likhungi, ab mujhko jaana hai
jaake hi to phir kal wapas aana hai!


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"Achha lagta hai"

«Reply #21 on: October 11, 2005, 02:09:25 PM »

sanya kuch nahi hota aap jaldi mein hain to yeh
likhi hai meine shayad pasand aaye

jaagte hain raaton mein , khojte hai raaton mein,
woh haseen pal ke jab hum tum saath honge,
saath honge kuch is tarah ke jo tadap tadpati hai hamein,
wo pehloo mein aapke sulaayegi kuch is tarah,
ke kho jaayenge, beh jaayenge ek ajnabi duniya mein,
jahan saanse to hogi per chal na sakega yeh pata
ke yeh saans jo abhi chali thi woh hamari thi yaan tumhari


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sanya310

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"Achha lagta hai"

«Reply #22 on: October 11, 2005, 10:09:15 PM »

wow bohot achhe gsu kapoor!!

arz hai..

ho mere dam se yunhi mere sanam ki zeenat
jis tarah phool se hoti hai chaman ki zeenat
pyaar ki arzuu mein hum tujhse mile thhe aise
kya pata tha ishq tera badal dega meri kismat..."


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"Achha lagta hai"

«Reply #23 on: October 12, 2005, 12:44:34 AM »

wow Sanya........ superbssssssssssssssssssss jawaab nahi tumhari sher ka..... good one kapoor..

chalo aaj tumhara naam likhen saagar kinare shahil per
rait per mein koi phool khilane mein jamana beet gaya..


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sanya310

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"Achha lagta hai"

«Reply #24 on: October 12, 2005, 02:17:48 AM »

arey wah maamu..ekdum touching words likh e hain tumne...


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"Achha lagta hai"

«Reply #25 on: October 12, 2005, 01:45:45 PM »

ek yeh likhi hai bus yoon hi kuch koshish ki hai aap sabke aage to kuch nahi

Din raat mere khaabon mein rehtaa hai tu hi tu,
Kasak hoti hai dil mein saza deta hai tu hi tu,
Tadaptaa bhi hai magar tadpaata bhi hai hamein tu hi tu,
Aansoon jab girtey hain to yaad aata hai tu hi tu,
Mein kahin bhi rahoon mere paas rehta hai tu hi tu,
Dil ki har dhadkan mein samata jaata hai tu hi tu,
Bechaini badakar mere dil ko tarsaata hai tu hi tu,
Har teer jo lagta hai idhar chodtaa hi tu hi tu!!!!!!!!!


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"Achha lagta hai"

«Reply #26 on: October 12, 2005, 01:48:27 PM »

thanks sanya and waheed


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"Achha lagta hai"

«Reply #27 on: October 12, 2005, 08:08:56 PM »

ur Alwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaays Weclome Sanya...Kapoor..nice again kapoor........ tongue3

Hawain tez thi, baarish bhi thi, toofan bhi tha, lekin,
Tera aisay mein bhi vaada nibhana yaad aata hai !

Guzar chuki thi bahut raat baton baton mein,
Phir uth kay woh tera shama bhujana yaad aata hai !

Ghatain kitni dekhi hain par mujhay `Israr',
Kisi ka rukh par woh zulfain giraana yaad aata hai !

Hamay to ab bhi woh guzra zamana yaad aata hai,
Tumhay bhi kya kabhi koi deewana yaad aata hai...nm


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sanya310

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"Achha lagta hai"

«Reply #28 on: October 15, 2005, 12:57:32 AM »

bohot achha gesuuu !!
boho achhi shayri hai maamu!!!


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Pooja

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"Achha lagta hai"

«Reply #29 on: October 15, 2005, 01:06:42 AM »

wah bahoot khoob gesu, waheed and sanya!!!


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