Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

by javedarshad on July 07, 2009, 03:16:13 AM
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aaina
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«Reply #60 on: July 18, 2009, 08:20:26 AM »
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Woh tum they tum jise na bhula saka main
woh main main na  raha jise yaad karu tum



tere gham mai aansu baha liye jayen
agrchay yaad karna hi shart thera hai

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Deepati
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«Reply #61 on: July 19, 2009, 12:51:12 AM »
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bahot bahot khoob likha hai sabhi ne
Pooja ji,Roja ji,Aslam ji,Humtum ji,Deepati ji Hussain ji

bahot umda  Applause Applause Applause Applause

husn aisa ki jaise madhoshi kum pad jaye
madhoshi aisi ki khumaari ka nasha chaad jaye
mohabbat tab khud hi is kadar doob jaati hai
ki din kya hai raat kya na pata chal paaye

Shukriya Kaash Ji! Usual Smile

Bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne! Applause

Aur baaki sabhi ne bhi bahut khoob likha hai! Applause
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Deepati
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«Reply #62 on: July 19, 2009, 12:54:33 AM »
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bahut khoob

piyaas hai to saqi hai aur maikhana hai
jahan rind nahin woh to bas weerana hai



javed

Bahut khoob, Javed Ji! Applause


Mai rahey, meena rahey, gardish mein paimaana rahey,
Mere saaqi tu rahey aabaad maikhaana rahey.(nm)


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javedarshad
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«Reply #63 on: July 19, 2009, 03:19:44 AM »
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Bahut khoob
nace sharing

Jab bhi uthata hun jaam teri surat ubher aati hai.
badh jati hai piyaas ki shiddat,teri yaad satati hai




javed
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«Reply #64 on: July 19, 2009, 04:05:51 AM »
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Very beautiful lines Javed ji,Aaina ji,deepti ji,sabhi e bahut khoob likha.
bahut khoob. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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aaina
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«Reply #65 on: July 19, 2009, 06:57:04 AM »
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Bahut khoob
nace sharing

Jab bhi uthata hun jaam teri surat ubher aati hai.
badh jati hai piyaas ki shiddat,teri yaad satati hai




javed


khoob javed sahab..........


sehra ki tapti rait pe ye ajeeb sitam tune kiya
meri tishnagi badha si di mera jaam tune hata diya
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javedarshad
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«Reply #66 on: July 19, 2009, 02:17:34 PM »
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wah kia baat hai

 tapti rait, dhoop woh bhi sahra ki

Hata de yeh mai tood dai jaam
aaj ankhon ke paimane pene de


javed
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aaina
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«Reply #67 on: July 19, 2009, 03:32:30 PM »
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wah kia baat hai

 tapti rait, dhoop woh bhi sahra ki

Hata de yeh mai tood dai jaam
aaj ankhon ke paimane pene de


javed

bhut khoob javed sahab

aankho se kyun peete ho kis baat ka dar hai
abh se marjana hai ya zindagi mukhtasar hai
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javedarshad
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«Reply #68 on: July 20, 2009, 12:34:57 AM »
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Kia kahne aaina ji

ab to mizah jaag utha hai

Choone se mujhe nahin use maan ka der hai
Pochti hai iske bad kia hoga kuch khaber hai



javed
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Deepati
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«Reply #69 on: July 20, 2009, 03:57:49 AM »
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Very beautiful lines Javed ji,Aaina ji,deepti ji,sabhi e bahut khoob likha.
bahut khoob. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya, Madhu Ji!  Usual Smile

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«Reply #70 on: July 20, 2009, 04:00:07 AM »
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Bahut khoob
nace sharing

Jab bhi uthata hun jaam teri surat ubher aati hai.
badh jati hai piyaas ki shiddat,teri yaad satati hai




javed

Very nice, Javed Ji! Applause


Masti teri aankhon mein, jaadu teri baaton mein,
Sochun main tere baare mein, jaagun ab tou raaton mein.


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javedarshad
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«Reply #71 on: July 20, 2009, 04:18:52 AM »
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Good one

Teri khawabeeda ankhain sunati hain kahani
ab tu jagti hai shab bher kisi ki yadoon mein



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«Reply #72 on: July 20, 2009, 04:32:53 AM »
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Bahut khoob, Javed Ji! Applause


Aankhein meri badlane lagi, dekhti hain khwaab,
Illahi mere chehre pe, rakhiyo mera naqaab.(nm)
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«Reply #73 on: July 20, 2009, 04:41:30 AM »
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nice sharing

Tu perda ker hathon se ya sahara le naqab ka
sab kah jaati hain yeh teeri shermati aankhain




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«Reply #74 on: July 25, 2009, 06:19:04 PM »
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Bahut khoob, Javed Ji!


Meri aankhon mein na jaa, mere dil mein samaa jaa,
Kuch meri kahaani sun jaa, kuch apni daastaan suna jaa.
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