Ajnabi

by srishti2511 on August 30, 2005, 03:12:12 PM
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Fawad
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«Reply #45 on: September 17, 2005, 09:10:54 AM »
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yooN zindagi ki raah meiN takra gaya koi
ik roshni andheroN mein bikhra gaya koi

wo haadsa wo pehli mulaakat kyaa kahoon
itni ajab thi soorat haalat kya kahoon

wo kehar wo gazab  wo jafa muJko yaad hai
wo uski berukhi ki adaa muJhko yaad hai

mittha nahin hai zehan pe yoon chaa gaya koi
yooN zindagi ki raah meiN takra gaya koi

ab is dil-e-tabaah ki haalat na poochiye
benaam aarzoo ki lazzat na poochiye

ik ajnabi tha rooh ka armaan ban gaya
ik haadsa tha pyaar ka unwaan ban gaya

manzil ka raasta muJhe dikhla gaya koi
yooN zindagi ki raah meiN takra gaya koi
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nirbhay
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«Reply #46 on: September 17, 2005, 09:40:20 AM »
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k sristi i'll b caring 4 future and so will u hav 2do , and very well wrote fawad well fawad am nirbhay zaveri 4m kolkata , bout u ?
 
      Kaanch chubhe to zakhm reh jaata hai  
      dil tute jaye to armaan reh jaata hai  
      laga to deta hai waqt marham is dil par,
      phir bhi umar bhar ek nishann reh jaata hai,
      mana ye pal laut ke aane nahin par
      yaadon ke sahare hi zindagi guzarti hai,
      kyu gir jaye hum bar bar gamon ki thokro se,
      buland houslo se hi zindagi sawarti hai(NM)
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nirbhay
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«Reply #47 on: September 17, 2005, 09:46:33 AM »
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Ke pyar ke rishtey chaltey hai is dil ke naatey,
  jaise nadi koi tutey aaur nehar mein badal jatey,
  nehar ki har lehar sahil ko nahi chum patey
  ye dil hai doston dil..........
  kabhie dil hum kisi ko dey nahi patey ,
  aaur kabhie dil hamara le kar koi wapis nahi loutatey.
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Fawad
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«Reply #48 on: September 17, 2005, 11:14:23 AM »
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Nice to know about you Nirbhay, I'm Syed Nasir Fawad from Karachi.


Ajnabiyat ka taluq khoob hai,
hum tumhare, tum hamare ajnabi,

Zindagi ki talkhiyan hain hum nasheen,
phool, khushbo, rang saree ajnabi,

Wo jise hum ne wasee pehchaan di,
aaj woh hum ko pukarein ajnabi...,

bus dil hai udaas udaas tum bin aey ajnabi... Winking
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srishti2511
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«Reply #49 on: September 17, 2005, 09:23:50 PM »
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fine nirbhay..well written nirbhay and fawad...good job!!

Aaj gila karte hain woh humse ke humne kaha unko bewafa
tab na socha tha unho ne jab ki ti humare armano se saath daga
door jane ka yeh bahana bata rahe hai ke kiya humne unko ruswa
par woh yeh bhul gaye ke humare dil me hai sirf unke liye jaga
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nirbhay
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«Reply #50 on: September 19, 2005, 08:37:41 AM »
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Wah Wah wawah............................. , maan gaye sristi ur such a gr8 thoughts bahut khub likha .

  Na dil me daga na hoton pe daga na sanson me daga na aanknon me daga
  Dil ko chuwa teri khubsaurati sey pyar ka farmaan jaga
  Hoton ko chua tere hoton se to mahobaat ne bana li har raag raag me jaga
  Narm sanson ne chua to raat din mahke aur dil ki dhadkano me bhi ehsaas jaga
  aankhon ne kiya humse daga aaur banali har rukh me jaga
  daga to hamare sath hua hai aaur daga karne waaley ke dil me nahi jaga.
  JAI SHREE KRISHNA.
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srishti2511
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«Reply #51 on: September 21, 2005, 07:23:27 PM »
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shukriya nirbhay.....please no "ji"

Samajh n saka woh dil ki baat ko,
Dard usne bin soche hi de diya....
Seh gaye jab hum uske sitam ko
To phir hum ko patthar dil keh diya...
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Pooja
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«Reply #52 on: September 21, 2005, 08:40:32 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob Nirbhay and srishti!!!!!!
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nirbhay
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«Reply #53 on: September 22, 2005, 07:38:09 AM »
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ur well come sristi and once again beautifull lines these ones , and i hav already stoped this 'JI" u can c , and pooja thnx 4 appreciation and i wish u will also write somthing in the thread.

       Bkuhubi samajhtey hain hum is dil ki zubaan ko
       mahobaat ki hai , to dard ko deni hogi dil me panah...
       tum ne bhi ghayal kiya aapni nazaron se dewane yaar ko
       khauf khate ho karne mein izhar-e-pyar ko...........
       Aur zulimi karar diya aapne dewaane yaar ko.
       JAI SHREE KRISHNA.
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srishti2511
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«Reply #54 on: September 22, 2005, 07:40:48 PM »
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thx pooja and nirbhay......well written

nazoron ne ki batien
katin woh bechin ratien
tum shayad bhula paoge
par hum kaise bhul jayein
woh hasin mulakatien
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Pooja
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«Reply #55 on: September 22, 2005, 08:06:38 PM »
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wowow!!! good one srishti2511!!
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BeNam
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«Reply #56 on: September 23, 2005, 02:44:27 AM »
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Bahot achhe Srishti bahot achhe Nirbhay Jai sree Krishna!

--- BENAM --------
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nirbhay
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«Reply #57 on: September 25, 2005, 11:40:43 AM »
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Thnx benam ji and pooja ji , Jai shree krishna

        Tumhari in aadaon par baas hum is dil-o-jaan ko fida karte hain
        Bichade tumse to tumhari tanhaiyon se baatein kiya kartey hain
        Aasma pe chade us chand mein tumhara chehra dekha kartey hain
        fuloon ko chuke unki sarsarahat mein tumhara ehsaas kartey hain
        aasma par bikhrey sitaron ko tera aanchal samjha kartey hain
        behti hawoon mein tumhari khusboo dundha kartey hain ,
        Jabki humko bhi pata hai ki aap humpar janey saar nahi kartey hain
        par dil nahi manta , ye kehta hai ki hum sirf aap se pyar karte hain.

        JAI SHREE KRISHNA.
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srishti2511
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«Reply #58 on: September 26, 2005, 07:53:46 PM »
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thx everyone and very beautiful lines nirbhay!

khud se bhi zyada aapse pyar karte hain
aap par hi hum jaan nisaar karte hain
jante hain ke app nahi chahte humme
phir bhi din raat aapka intezar karte hain
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Pooja
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«Reply #59 on: September 26, 2005, 08:00:46 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob srishti2511!!

payar mai khud per ikhitiyaar kahan
najare bechain, aor is dil ko karar kahan
jab dekhy kahin sirf unko dekhein
yahi ek dil mai armaan, aor kuch ab kahan!!!
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