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«Reply #120 on: March 18, 2006, 03:00:35 PM » |
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Nice work everyone !
Chitra
Aap bahut achcha likhti hain
Aise he likhte rahiye :D
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«Reply #121 on: March 18, 2006, 03:10:01 PM » |
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bahut khoob chitra ji..
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«Reply #122 on: March 18, 2006, 03:24:54 PM » |
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Shukriya HUZooooooooooooooR......Rajbir jee....!
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«Reply #123 on: March 18, 2006, 09:36:05 PM » |
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yeh uss bande k liye, jo kaam k baad apne ghar jaldi pahuchna chahta hain..apna sajna k liye..
betahaashaa main tere ghar ki taraf bhaagaa huun;
in mashiinon ne zaraa der jo chhuTii de dii.....
[Zafar Gorakhpuri][/color]
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«Reply #124 on: March 18, 2006, 10:09:18 PM » |
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Shayar_sildaar ji.....Chhutti to mili...!!
Jahnaseeb ke Aap ghar humare aaye
bepanaah khushiyo ki bahaar saath laye
bas didaar ho gya aapka
bhale hi ye pal jara der se aaye
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«Reply #125 on: March 19, 2006, 10:30:26 PM » |
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A1 shayara_chitraji
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«Reply #126 on: March 19, 2006, 10:38:38 PM » |
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Main SD se bilkul sehmat hoon :D
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«Reply #127 on: March 20, 2006, 10:29:00 AM » |
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bahut khoob shayar ji and chitra ji!!!!!!
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«Reply #128 on: March 20, 2006, 10:37:53 AM » |
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Shayar_sildaar ji.....Chhutti to mili...!!
Jahnaseeb ke Aap ghar humare aaye
bepanaah khushiyo ki bahaar saath laye
bas didaar ho gya aapka
bhale hi ye pal jara der se aaye hum der se sahi aab aaker tumhare dil me tehrenge...... tub labo se kaho na kaho hum hale dil magar sun chuke tumhara... |
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«Reply #129 on: March 20, 2006, 11:16:23 AM » |
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good one tushar ji..
Ek pal ka sath tumhara jo mil jaata hai naseeb se,
Umango ka baadal yoon lage ke guzra ho kareeb se,
Yoon hi bethey rahe hum tum ke deedar ho kuch nazdeek se,
Khushiyaan yeh pal do pal ki na chheeno gareeb se..
gesu's koshish!!!!!
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«Reply #130 on: March 20, 2006, 11:33:06 AM » |
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ek pal ka sath kaha nata hai humara janmo ka .....
juda na the kabhi na hum tumse juda honge.......
tu rub hai humara mannate kerta hu tujhse .......
tu hai ishq humara tu hi hai khuda.....
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«Reply #131 on: March 20, 2006, 05:04:10 PM » |
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kya mohabbat kya ibadat saba nasha hai pyaar ka
gaur se dekho sanam saba ko intjaar hai yaar ka
mehfile ab saj gai hai aur sama bhi jal chuki hai
shayari koi kese kahdoon ana baki hai dildar ka
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«Reply #132 on: March 20, 2006, 08:46:08 PM » |
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Moshin ji..!
Aayi hoon mahfil mein sharma ke O jaane bahar
roknna na khud ko ab pyaar mein dil chahe izhaar
zazbaat dafan seene mein unko bayaan tu karde
sun-ne ko baichen baitha hai samne tera ye dildaar
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«Reply #133 on: March 20, 2006, 09:03:00 PM » |
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wah kaya baaat hai bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #134 on: March 20, 2006, 09:05:35 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Tushar......Mohsin ji......Chitra ji.......
Baichaine tumhari ab khatm hone ko hai.....
Yeh Dil bhi tumhe baahon mein lene ko hai.....
Par intezar toh thoda karna hoga tumhe mere dildaar.....
Bas kuch pal mein hee Raat khatm hone ko hai............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~~**Badnaam Shayar**~~
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