Chahat Ki Pyas

by Meena on March 18, 2005, 04:07:47 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 19, 2005, 06:02:25 AM »
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Quote from: "Meena"
Duniya sie door teri bahon me hum samane lage,
Tere Jism me apni rooh ko pyar se basane lage,

Deewani hoon teri, teri chahat ki pyas hai,
Chum kar mere badan ko, meri bekarari ko tum churane lage,

Teri har sans pe mera nam likha hai,
Apni deemi awaz se mujhe bula kar  yuh mere dil ko tum tadpane lage,

Takrane lage tere hoont mere hoonton se jab,
Tere pyar ke sholey  is ki aag ko sulgane lage,

Muqambal jahan pa liya sanam tere pyar me aaj,
Teri chahat me hi karar-e-ishq me hum pane lage!


SubaN Allah.... SubaaN Allah.... wah moh-tarma kya baaT hai.....kuch arz ker paya hooN jra gor farmaiyega....

Haathon mein haath leke tera, saath nibhaana hay,
Tujhko meri mohabbat ka, jazbaah dikhaana hay

Teri baahon mein aakar, sukoon mil jaaye mujhe,
Teri zulfon ko, apne kaandho pe bichhaana hay

Tu azeez hain mujhe itni, main keh nahi sakta,
Tera dewana hoon main, bas itna bataana hay

Haseen nazaaro mein, ab mera mann lagta nahi,
Tere chehre ko, nigaahon ke saamne laana hay

Main kahiN baith jaaooN tanha, duniya ki fikr mein,
Tujhe apne paas bithaakar, sabko bhulaana hay

Jab dekhe tu mujhko, to chehra khil jaaye mera,
Har takleef ko, apne dil se mujhe, mitaana hay

Main dua'a mein maangta hoon, khuda se tujhko,
Apna sab kuch khokar, bas tujhe hi paana hay

Khwaabidaa hokar, aksar yeh sochta hay 'HumTum'
Kya tujhe bhi kuch is tarah, mujhe sunaana hay Huh?


HumTum



wah kya baat hai meena aapka hale e dil sunane ka andaaz bada hi pyara hai jeee...

Humtum aur sanya aap dono ka bhi jawab nahi....bahut khoob kaha...
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Meena
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«Reply #16 on: March 19, 2005, 07:24:45 AM »
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thank u sanya, lovebites ji, dhadkan!

 :D

sanya:

bohot hi pyara likha tumne bhi! keep it up kuddiye!

 :D

Hum tum ji:

aab "wah wah" bolon? woh bhi explain nahin kar payega how much i liked ur poem! bohot hi pyari hai!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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«Reply #17 on: March 19, 2005, 08:28:58 AM »
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Wowwwwww Sissssssssss KYaaaaaaaaaa BAaaaaaaaaaaat haiiiiiiiiiiii Sub ne buhat nice likha hai!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #18 on: March 19, 2005, 08:34:52 AM »
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thanxxxxxx nehaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, nice to c ya back!!!!

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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #19 on: March 19, 2005, 09:20:31 AM »
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bohut achhaa likha hai meena ji
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sanya310
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«Reply #20 on: March 19, 2005, 10:04:58 AM »
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thanx meena and immi !! n everyone!
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Meena
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«Reply #21 on: March 19, 2005, 12:15:26 PM »
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shukriya ji shukriya!!

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«Reply #22 on: March 19, 2005, 12:45:47 PM »
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Duniya sie door teri bahon me hum samane lage,
Tere Jism me apni rooh ko pyar se basane lage,

Deewani hoon teri, teri chahat ki pyas hai,
Chum kar mere badan ko, meri bekarari ko tum churane lage,

Teri har sans pe mera nam likha hai,
Apni deemi awaz se mujhe bula kar  yuh mere dil ko tum tadpane lage,

Takrane lage tere hoont mere hoonton se jab,
Tere pyar ke sholey  is ki aag ko sulgane lage,

Muqambal jahan pa liya sanam tere pyar me aaj,
Teri chahat me hi karar-e-ishq me hum pane lage!


Meena, very  well written my dear sister. Excellent poem, you're good at writing this stuff too. So much romantic and passionate, full of love. Keep writing, God bless you dear.

Amit xXx
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Meena
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«Reply #23 on: March 19, 2005, 12:47:13 PM »
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aww thanx a lot heartyy!!!!!!

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«Reply #24 on: March 19, 2005, 05:55:45 PM »
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Duniya sie door teri bahon me hum samane lage,
Tere Jism me apni rooh ko pyar se basane lage,

Deewani hoon teri, teri chahat ki pyas hai,
Chum kar mere badan ko, meri bekarari ko tum churane lage,

Teri har sans pe mera nam likha hai,
Apni deemi awaz se mujhe bula kar  yuh mere dil ko tum tadpane lage,

Takrane lage tere hoont mere hoonton se jab,
Tere pyar ke sholey  is ki aag ko sulgane lage,

Muqambal jahan pa liya sanam tere pyar me aaj,
Teri chahat me hi karar-e-ishq me hum pane lage!



Takrane lage tere hoont mere hoonton se jab,
Tere pyar ke sholey  is ki aag ko sulgane lage,

ufffff kya gajab lika hai meena  :wink:
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«Reply #25 on: March 19, 2005, 05:57:38 PM »
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shukriya devdas ji!

 :D
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