Cheeni Kum... :-) (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on April 07, 2008, 04:54:24 PM
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तुम जो मिल गये हो तो, अब ढूँढूं और क्या…?
तेरी चाहत के सिवा चाहूँ, तो चाहूँ और क्या..?

अधखुली पलकें लिए फिरती हूँ इस जहाँ में,
रहती हूँ नशे में बस एक तेरे ही गुमान में…
अपने ख्वाबों में चेहरा कोई देखूँ और क्या…?
मैं तेरे काँधे पे सिर रख के सोलूँ  और क्या…?

तू मेरी नज़मों में उतर आता है कभी यूँ,
और कहता है, मेरी 'माही' गुमसुम  सी है क्यूँ…
गुलाबी सी धूप पसरी है आँगन में अब भी क्या?
तुम्हारी आँखों की रंगत को बोलूँ और क्या…?

चाय का प्याला और वो एक शिकायत तुम्हारी,
चीनी कम है या ज़्यादा है मिठास तुम्हारी…
याद आकर ये बातें तुम्हे भी रूलाती है क्या?
आँख भारी है, मैं ज़रा देर रोलूँ और क्या…?
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Tum jo mil gaye ho to, ab dhoondhu aur kya…?
Teri chahat ke siwa chaahu, to chahun aur kya..?

Adhkhuli palkein liye phirti hoon is jahan mein,
Rehti hoon nashe mein bas ek tere hi gumaan mein…
Apne khwaabon mein chehra koi dekhu aur kya…?
Main tere kaandhe pe sir rakh ke solun aur kya…?

Tu meri nazmon mein utar aata hai kabhi yun,
Aur kehta hai, Meri 'Mahi' gumsum si hai kyun…
Gulaabi si dhoop pasri hai aangan mein ab bhi kya?
Tumhaari aankhon ki rangat ko bolun aur kya…?

Chai ka pyaala aur woh ek shikaayat tumhaari,
Cheeni kum hai ya jyada hai mithaas tumhaari…
Yaad aakar ye baatein tumhe bhi rulaati hai kya?
Aankh bhaari hai, main zara deir rolun aur kya…?
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2008, 04:59:45 PM »
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Mahiya

Too good yaar Applause

Cheeni Kum Winking
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2008, 05:09:43 PM »
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Thank You... Rajbir Ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2008, 05:49:33 PM »
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Wonderful.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2008, 05:53:10 PM »
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Winking Laughing hard
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2008, 07:23:18 PM »
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Nice One,. Applause
But Title Thoda Mazakhiya Hai,. Giggle
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2008, 08:32:04 AM »
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Wah Mahiya.....!! Behad Mohabbat Bhari Rachna Pesh Ki Hai aapne.. Great Work..!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur Subse accha to Is Rachna Ka naam Laga.. "CHEENI KAM", Bahut Bahut Khooooob..

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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2008, 12:39:05 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on April 07, 2008, 04:54:24 PM
Tum jo mil gaye ho to, ab dhoondhu aur kya…?
Teri chahat ke siwa chaahu, to chahun aur kya..?

Adkhuli palkein liye phirti hoon is jahan mein,
Rehti hoon nashe mein ek tere hi gumaan mein…
Apne khwaabon mein chehra koi dekhu aur kya…?
Main tere kaandhe pe sir rakh ke solun aur kya…?

Tu meri nazmon mein utar aata hai kabhi yun,
Aur kehta hai, Meri 'Mahi' gumsum si hai kyun…
Gulaabi si dhoop hai aangan mein ab bhi kya?
Tumhaari aankhon ki rangat ko bolun aur kya…?

Chai ka pyaala aur woh ek shikaayat tumhaari,
Cheeni kum hai ya jyada hai mithaas tumhaari…
Yaad aake ye baatein tumhe bhi rulaati hai kya?
Aankh bhaari hai, main zara deir rolun aur kya…?


baoot khoob,
tareef ke liye shabd nahi hai,

hansrate bahut bharee hai najro me teri
ye khwab hai ya mahobbat hai teri
dekhte hee teree plko cilman ko ..
sochta hoo khash....
koi miltee koi najar, najron se meri....

netra....
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2008, 02:17:18 PM »
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Shikha Very Nice.. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2008, 04:58:49 PM »
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Very nice..with good flow....Thanks Shikha for giving us chance to read your beautiful work again ! Applause
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2008, 06:00:09 PM »
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Thanks for appreciation.. Jagdish, Azeem, Vicky, Netra, HoneyRose and Celmira...
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«Reply #11 on: April 08, 2008, 07:22:36 PM »
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Quote from: NETRAPAL on April 08, 2008, 12:39:05 PM
baoot khoob,
tareef ke liye shabd nahi hai,

hansrate bahut bharee hai najro me teri
ye khwab hai ya mahobbat hai teri
dekhte hee teree plko cilman ko ..
sochta hoo khash....
koi miltee koi najar, najron se meri....

netra....

Nice One Netra...  icon_thumleft



मुहब्बत दिल पे असर करने लगी जब से,
पलके हसरतों के भार से झुकने लगी...

वो जो गुज़रे दिल की सर-ज़मीन से हो कर,
"माही" चौखट पे नज़रों को रखने लगी...

हर किसी के जीवन में हो हमनफस कोई,
दुआ खुदा से सबके लिए यही  करने लगी...

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Muhabbat dil pe asar karne lagi jab se,
Palke hasraton ke bhaar se jhukne lagi...

Wo jo guzre dil ki sir-zameen se ho kar,
"Mahi" chaukhat pe nazaron ko rakhne lagi...

Har kisi ke jeevan mein ho humnafas koi,
Dua khuda se sabke liye yehi  karne lagi..
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2008, 07:42:56 PM »
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bahoot khoob Mahiya.. nice to see something from you after a long time./.... aise hi likhati raho....
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Shikha12
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«Reply #13 on: April 09, 2008, 10:10:40 AM »
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Thanks a lot Pooja di...
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #14 on: April 09, 2008, 10:58:52 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on April 08, 2008, 07:22:36 PM
Quote from: NETRAPAL on April 08, 2008, 12:39:05 PM
baoot khoob,
tareef ke liye shabd nahi hai,

hansrate bahut bharee hai najro me teri
ye khwab hai ya mahobbat hai teri
dekhte hee teree plko cilman ko ..
sochta hoo khash....
koi miltee koi najar, najron se meri....

netra....

Nice One Netra...  icon_thumleft

Muhabbat dil pe asar karne lagi jab se,
Palke hasraton ke bhaar se jhukne lagi...

Wo jo guzre dil ki sir-zameen se ho kar,
"Mahi" chaukhat pe nazaron ko rakhne lagi...

Har kisi ke jeevan mein ho humnafas koi,
Dua khuda se sabke liye yehi  karne lagi..


bahoot khoob

doobe the kaha kabse nhi hosh hai mujhe
chahat hai niklane kee kon nikale ga mujhe
n koi hamdard dekhta tha n dikhta hai kahee
bahanaa dooao karke, bebas sa chod jate  mujhe..

netra...
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