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honeyrose

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Re: Cheeni Kum... :-)

« Reply #15 on: April 09, 2008, 02:57:16 AM »

Very nice netra.. and again shikha good one..

Cheeni Kum ho ya zyada mithas toh wahi hai
Ek pal ki zindagi ki mohabatt mithas se badkar naadir hai
(MINE)


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Re: Cheeni Kum... :-)

« Reply #16 on: April 13, 2008, 08:45:06 AM »

Nice One Again,.


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Re: Cheeni Kum... :-)

« Reply #17 on: May 08, 2008, 09:02:57 AM »

Thanks Netra, Honey and Azeem...


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Re: Cheeni Kum... :-)

« Reply #18 on: May 08, 2008, 09:03:47 AM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on April 09, 2008, 01:28:52 AM

Quote from: Mahiya

Nice One Netra... icon_thumleft

Muhabbat dil pe asar karne lagi jab se,
Palke hasraton ke bhaar se jhukne lagi...

Wo jo guzre dil ki sir-zameen se ho kar,
"Mahi" chaukhat pe nazaron ko rakhne lagi...

Har kisi ke jeevan mein ho humnafas koi,
Dua khuda se sabke liye yehi karne lagi..

bahoot khoob

doobe the kaha kabse nhi hosh hai mujhe
chahat hai niklane kee kon nikale ga mujhe
n koi hamdard dekhta tha n dikhta hai kahee
bahanaa dooao karke, bebas sa chod jate mujhe..

netra...

hhhmm... Nice Reply Netra...

"Khud ko apne hi banaaye hue haalaaton se maat naa de..
Yu Haarne waalon ko toh khuda bhi apna haath naa de,
Yakeen rakhiye duaaon mein, in mein karaamat chhupi hai,
Asar karti hai yehi duaa jahan dawaa koi saath naa de..."


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Re: Cheeni Kum... :-)

« Reply #19 on: May 08, 2008, 09:16:20 AM »

Wah bohat dino baad aapki shayari pad rahi hoon
really missing you shayaris mahiya sis g88 reply.. Usual Smile


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Re: Cheeni Kum... :-)

« Reply #20 on: May 09, 2008, 08:22:55 AM »

:sunny:app chamakta raha


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Jaanasheen

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Re: Cheeni Kum... :-)

« Reply #21 on: May 11, 2008, 07:17:55 AM »

Niced One Again Mahiya And Jaya Sis,k.


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_____________-A Salute To Shaheed Tipu Sultan-

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Re: Cheeni Kum... :-)

« Reply #22 on: May 12, 2008, 05:52:37 AM »

Thanks HoneyRose and Azeem.. notworthy


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Re: Cheeni Kum... :-)

« Reply #23 on: May 12, 2008, 10:41:22 PM »

Wah wah Shikha di.. cheeni kam nazar nahi aayi.Cheeni toda jyada hi hai ... very good lines dear...keep up...

Dilkash phoolon ki aankhon mein
Raat katal ki jaagi hai

Jaan-e-mann humse dhur raho
Yeh dil pyar mein bhagi hai..!!


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Re: Cheeni Kum... :-)

« Reply #24 on: May 13, 2008, 05:41:05 AM »

very nice mahiye jee good written

wo duao kee bat karte hai
muh chipa ke wahee nikal jate hai
daawaa karta hai dawa lagane ka jo
wahi jaleem ek naya ghav de jate hai..

netra...


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Re: Cheeni Kum... :-)

« Reply #25 on: May 13, 2008, 06:19:18 AM »

Thanks Mahiya dear..

Very nice lines netra ji aur Roja dear..

Aisa Ghav Laga Hai Dil Pe Har Pal
Yeh Kaise Kahe Hum Iss Pal
Joh Dawa Ki Aarzoo Kare Us Pal
Na Chain Aaye Humhe Har Pal.


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Re: Cheeni Kum... :-)

« Reply #26 on: May 13, 2008, 08:01:00 AM »

Quote from: honeyrose on May 13, 2008, 06:19:18 AM

Thanks Mahiya dear..

Very nice lines netra ji aur Roja dear..

Aisa Ghav Laga Hai Dil Pe Har Pal
Yeh Kaise Kahe Hum Iss Pal
Joh Dawa Ki Aarzoo Kare Us Pal
Na Chain Aaye Humhe Har Pal.

nice written,

wo dil pe ghav liye baithe hai
n jane kyo hame wo gunahgaar samaj baithe hai
jo laaye hai marham ghavon ka unke
usse hee wo bejaar hooe baithe hai

netra...


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