Dekhna Tujhe

by Pooja on August 07, 2009, 06:37:28 PM
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«Reply #30 on: August 13, 2009, 06:26:50 PM »
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Quote from: HumTum on August 13, 2009, 03:25:16 PM

Pooja Ji asie baat nai hai ... aap hamesha hi bahut accha likhte ho ... magar waqt ki kami ki wajah se mein aap ki shyri ke upper koi jawab nai de paya aur haan reply karne ka mouka bhi nai chodna chahta tha ...  so aap ki shyri ki tareef hi kar di .. waseey bhi aap ko pta hai ke aaj kal yha bahut shyar ho gaye hai ... kucch pots karo to agle din woh post 3 - 4 panne par milti hai ... khair ... Lijiye Arz kiya hai ...


Muhoobat Mein Itna Hum Ko Na Satayaa Karo Tum
Ahad Karo Jab Wasl Ka To Phir Nibaya Karo Tum

YaqeenaN Aap Hum Se Muhhobaat Karte Ho, Magar
Dil Chahtaa Hai Ke Kabhi Kabhi Jataya Karo Tum

Larzzate LaboN Se, Daihkate Ishq Ke NaGmaat
Baith Kar Mere Pehluu Mein, GunGunayaa Karo Tum

Tumhare Jane Se Dil Ka Qaraar Bhi Chla Jata Hai
Kasam Hai Tum Ko Muhoobat Ki, Na Jayaa Karo Tum

Qareeb Aaane Se Muhoobat Aur JawaaN Hoti Hai
Kabhi Kudh Paas Aao, Kabhi Mujhe Bulaya Karo Tum

Chodo Bhi Gile Shikwe, Sab Bekaar Ki Baatien Hai
Meri BahoN Mein Aao, Khush Rho, Muskuraya Karo Tum !!


Jawab Ka Muntzir

HumTum


wah wah wah kaya baat hai kaya baat hai... ek ek line HumTum ji kamaal ki rachi hai apne.... Mann ji ko jawab nahi de ho raha hai aor apki is lajawab kavita ka kay ajawab du..Koshish kar rahi hu:

Baatein na itani pyari-pyari banaya karo tum  NaNaNa
Urdu main likho to Arth bhi likh jaya karo Tum  DOH

Yakeen hai teri muhobbat per, khud se bhi jayada
Per jab aaye pass, to is kadar na sataya karo Tum

Kahne diya karo baat, jab pahlu main hote hai hum
Un lubo se lub mila kar, na chup karaya karo Tum

Qareeb tere akar, jaana wapis ho jaata hai mushkil
Samjhte ho sab, na is kadar nasamjh ban jaaya karo Tum

Na hoge shikawe Gile, to kaise haq apna jatlaoge
Kabhi to dil ki baat, bin bole samjh jaaya karo Tum!!!!
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«Reply #31 on: August 13, 2009, 06:38:22 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 13, 2009, 06:09:04 PM
Bohot hi pyara likha hai Pooja aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks Celmira!!!
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«Reply #32 on: August 13, 2009, 08:27:10 PM »
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Quote from: DhavalRami on August 13, 2009, 11:28:30 AM
Poojaa jee:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap?

aapki koShiSh se pehli baar ru-ba-ru ho rahaa huuN! dil ko chhu lene waale aSh'aar.. be-had pasaNd aaueN! Shuruaat ka Sher mujhe KhaaS pasaNd aaya.! tuuNhi bazm ki Shaan baRhaate raheN! dil se DheroN saarii daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval

Tahe dil se shukaria Dhaval ji!!
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«Reply #33 on: August 14, 2009, 09:49:52 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 13, 2009, 06:26:50 PM
wah wah wah kaya baat hai kaya baat hai... ek ek line HumTum ji kamaal ki rachi hai apne.... Mann ji ko jawab nahi de ho raha hai aor apki is lajawab kavita ka kay ajawab du..Koshish kar rahi hu:

Baatein na itani pyari-pyari banaya karo tum  NaNaNa
Urdu main likho to Arth bhi likh jaya karo Tum  DOH

Yakeen hai teri muhobbat per, khud se bhi jayada
Per jab aaye pass, to is kadar na sataya karo Tum

Kahne diya karo baat, jab pahlu main hote hai hum
Un lubo se lub mila kar, na chup karaya karo Tum

Qareeb tere akar, jaana wapis ho jaata hai mushkil
Samjhte ho sab, na is kadar nasamjh ban jaaya karo Tum

Na hoge shikawe Gile, to kaise haq apna jatlaoge
Kabhi to dil ki baat, bin bole samjh jaaya karo Tum!!!!


waah waah .. kamal kar diyaa US walooN ne .... Chaliyee kucch Europe walooN ki taraf se .. Prem Bhariii Chend Pangtiyaa...


ShabdooN Ka Arth DhundneN Mein Na Waqt Ganvayaa Karo Tum DOH
Bharii hai Inmein *Faqaat Muhoobat, Samjh Jayaa Karo Tum Winking

*Sirf


Arz Kiyaa Hai ....


Jheel Sii Neeli AnkheiN Teri, Sagar Jasiaa Mann
Chanchal Shokh HaseNa Hai Tu Makhmal Tera BadaN

Dil Meraa Behkaate Hai Yeh Naram Gulaabi Honth
Pankhdiyaa Do Gulaab Ke Jasei aur Unpe Shabnaam

Baat Kare Jab Lage Hai Goyaa, Koyal Koii Bole
Ghayaal Kar Detaa Hai Humko Yeh Teraa BaankpaaN

Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Zor Se Dhadke, Milne Ko Tasre
Kya Kehti Hai Mere Dil Ki DhadkaN Kaan Lagkar Sunn

Dil Khayee Hichkole Meraa, Chale Jab Tu Bal Kha Ke
Chudi Khanke, Jumar Damke, Payal Chanke ChaN ChaN ChaN

Aa Bhi Jao Dekho Meiney Sitare Bhichaye Hai Raste Par
Mein Ishq Tum Hii Se Karta Hoon, Maan Bhii Lo Sanam !!


HumTum
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«Reply #34 on: August 16, 2009, 06:46:41 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai humtum ji.. wah... jalad he apko jawab likhne ki koshish hogi....
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«Reply #35 on: August 16, 2009, 06:51:09 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 13, 2009, 06:26:50 PM
wah wah wah kaya baat hai kaya baat hai... ek ek line HumTum ji kamaal ki rachi hai apne.... Mann ji ko jawab nahi de ho raha hai aor apki is lajawab kavita ka kay ajawab du..Koshish kar rahi hu:

Baatein na itani pyari-pyari banaya karo tum  NaNaNa
Urdu main likho to Arth bhi likh jaya karo Tum  DOH

Yakeen hai teri muhobbat per, khud se bhi jayada
Per jab aaye pass, to is kadar na sataya karo Tum

Kahne diya karo baat, jab pahlu main hote hai hum
Un lubo se lub mila kar, na chup karaya karo Tum

Qareeb tere akar, jaana wapis ho jaata hai mushkil
Samjhte ho sab, na is kadar nasamjh ban jaaya karo Tum

Na hoge shikawe Gile, to kaise haq apna jatlaoge
Kabhi to dil ki baat, bin bole samjh jaaya karo Tum!!!!



wah bahut hi khoob pooja ji

jasbir singh
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«Reply #36 on: August 16, 2009, 06:51:56 PM »
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Quote from: HumTum on August 14, 2009, 09:49:52 AM
waah waah .. kamal kar diyaa US walooN ne .... Chaliyee kucch Europe walooN ki taraf se .. Prem Bhariii Chend Pangtiyaa...


ShabdooN Ka Arth DhundneN Mein Na Waqt Ganvayaa Karo Tum DOH
Bharii hai Inmein *Faqaat Muhoobat, Samjh Jayaa Karo Tum Winking

*Sirf


Arz Kiyaa Hai ....


Jheel Sii Neeli AnkheiN Teri, Sagar Jasiaa Mann
Chanchal Shokh HaseNa Hai Tu Makhmal Tera BadaN

Dil Meraa Behkaate Hai Yeh Naram Gulaabi Honth
Pankhdiyaa Do Gulaab Ke Jasei aur Unpe Shabnaam

Baat Kare Jab Lage Hai Goyaa, Koyal Koii Bole
Ghayaal Kar Detaa Hai Humko Yeh Teraa BaankpaaN

Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Zor Se Dhadke, Milne Ko Tasre
Kya Kehti Hai Mere Dil Ki DhadkaN Kaan Lagkar Sunn

Dil Khayee Hichkole Meraa, Chale Jab Tu Bal Kha Ke
Chudi Khanke, Jumar Damke, Payal Chanke ChaN ChaN ChaN

Aa Bhi Jao Dekho Meiney Sitare Bhichaye Hai Raste Par
Mein Ishq Tum Hii Se Karta Hoon, Maan Bhii Lo Sanam !!


HumTum


kamaal hai HUMTUM ji, kamaaal hi hai... wah wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #37 on: August 16, 2009, 06:57:36 PM »
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Quote from: HumTum on August 14, 2009, 09:49:52 AM
waah waah .. kamal kar diyaa US walooN ne .... Chaliyee kucch Europe walooN ki taraf se .. Prem Bhariii Chend Pangtiyaa...


ShabdooN Ka Arth DhundneN Mein Na Waqt Ganvayaa Karo Tum DOH
Bharii hai Inmein *Faqaat Muhoobat, Samjh Jayaa Karo Tum Winking

*Sirf


Arz Kiyaa Hai ....


Jheel Sii Neeli AnkheiN Teri, Sagar Jasiaa Mann
Chanchal Shokh HaseNa Hai Tu Makhmal Tera BadaN

Dil Meraa Behkaate Hai Yeh Naram Gulaabi Honth
Pankhdiyaa Do Gulaab Ke Jasei aur Unpe Shabnaam

Baat Kare Jab Lage Hai Goyaa, Koyal Koii Bole
Ghayaal Kar Detaa Hai Humko Yeh Teraa BaankpaaN

Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Zor Se Dhadke, Milne Ko Tasre
Kya Kehti Hai Mere Dil Ki DhadkaN Kaan Lagkar Sunn

Dil Khayee Hichkole Meraa, Chale Jab Tu Bal Kha Ke
Chudi Khanke, Jumar Damke, Payal Chanke ChaN ChaN ChaN

Aa Bhi Jao Dekho Meiney Sitare Bhichaye Hai Raste Par
Mein Ishq Tum Hii Se Karta Hoon, Maan Bhii Lo Sanam !!


HumTum


kamaal hai HUMTUM ji, kamaaal hi hai... wah wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #38 on: August 17, 2009, 02:56:24 AM »
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Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne Pooja di  Applause

HumTum...... bahut accha saat diya hai aapne Pooja di ka .. excellant work  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #39 on: August 20, 2009, 10:40:45 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 17, 2009, 02:56:24 AM
Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne Pooja di  Applause

HumTum...... bahut accha saat diya hai aapne Pooja di ka .. excellant work  Thumbs UP

Thanks Dear!!!

Jalad He Mann ji ko aor Humtum ji ko jawab likhne ki koshish hogi!!!
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«Reply #40 on: August 31, 2009, 12:47:54 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on August 27, 2009, 10:00:18 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahot bahot acha likha hai aapne Pooja ji
aur bahot hi acha saath dia hai HumTum ji,very well
bahot khoob likha hai  Applause Applause Applause  Thumbs UP

shukaria Kaash ji
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