Dil ke darwaaze

by honeyrose on January 29, 2008, 08:46:32 PM
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honeyrose
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«Reply #330 on: July 08, 2008, 07:06:01 AM »
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Buhat khoob likha hai syed.. Thumbs UP

Shukriya Azeem bro..

Aaj dil mayus hai aapko yaad karta hai mera dil
Na jaane kitne sawal hai jho pooch raha hai mera dil
Door rahete ho phir bhi yaadon se machal ta hai mera dil
Ek bhar toh samajh jaate kya kahena chahata hai  mera dil
Aankhon se aansu nahi dikhaye ghumon se jee raha hai mera dil
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«Reply #331 on: July 08, 2008, 11:15:32 AM »
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Dastak na mili koi,,
Darvaza band hi raha,,
kisi ne dahleez par,,
Bhool kar qadam bhi na rakha..
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palkhi
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«Reply #332 on: July 08, 2008, 02:18:23 PM »
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OMG..... Gulab Di, nd Syed Ji, very nice lines!!!!!!!

 
     Khul Kai Bhi Na Jaane Kayun Baand Hai Uskai Dil Kai Darwaaze Merai Liyai,
Chaah Kar Bhi Uski Ban Nahin Sakthi Main,
Zindagi Hai Usko Deh Di Maine,
Magar Kabhi Uski Ban Na Sakongi,
Khulai Hai Uskai Dil Kai Darwaaze Merai Liyai,
Pir Bhi Woh Baand Hai Merai Liyai,
Chaah Kar Bhi Hum Ek Na Ho Sakaigai,
Or Na Chaah Thai Huai Bhi Baana Diya Hai Mujko Kissi Or Ki Imanaath......
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syednaami
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«Reply #333 on: July 08, 2008, 09:10:06 PM »
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Wah wah,,, buhat hi kamaal likha hai... Sabah,,, keep writing...
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Sonia01
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«Reply #334 on: July 09, 2008, 02:46:42 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on July 08, 2008, 11:15:32 AM
Dastak na mili koi,,
Darvaza band hi raha,,
kisi ne dahleez par,,
Bhool kar qadam bhi na rakha..


ahaaaa bade hi wafadar nikle aap bhaiya...  Giggle

Sehmi huyi nazar woh haya yaad hai mujhe
Woh tera rootne ki ada yaad hai mujhe
Kaise tere khayal ko dilse nakal du
Tere chupke se pyar jatana
Ye mere sanam, tera kya misal du
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palkhi
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«Reply #335 on: July 09, 2008, 03:27:10 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on July 08, 2008, 09:10:06 PM
Wah wah,,, buhat hi kamaal likha hai... Sabah,,, keep writing...

......... Thanks!!!!!!!!
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palkhi
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«Reply #336 on: July 09, 2008, 03:29:13 AM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on July 09, 2008, 02:46:42 AM
ahaaaa bade hi wafadar nikle aap bhaiya...  Giggle

Sehmi huyi nazar woh haya yaad hai mujhe
Woh tera rootne ki ada yaad hai mujhe
Kaise tere khayal ko dilse nakal du
Tere chupke se pyar jatana
Ye mere sanam, tera kya misal du
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    awwwwwwwww........too cute di!!!!!
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syednaami
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«Reply #337 on: July 09, 2008, 08:23:05 AM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on July 09, 2008, 02:46:42 AM
ahaaaa bade hi wafadar nikle aap bhaiya...  Giggle

Sehmi huyi nazar woh haya yaad hai mujhe
Woh tera rootne ki ada yaad hai mujhe
Kaise tere khayal ko dilse nakal du
Tere chupke se pyar jatana
Ye mere sanam, tera kya misal du
 tongue3


Really marvelous... buhat pyara likha hai...
Jaaiz hai teri baat,,
Par main bhi kya karun,,
Dil phenk hun aashiq,,
Kis kis se pyar karun..



Quote from: palkhi on July 09, 2008, 03:27:10 AM
......... Thanks!!!!!!!!

Thanks Sabah... yer welcome...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #338 on: July 10, 2008, 07:24:26 AM »
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Super lines syed,,palu dear,,sonia.. Thumbs UP

Shukriya Punam,,sonia,,Palu ,,Syed,,Shael,,aur Roja i always miss you
aap sab ne dil ka darwaaza ko aage badaya.. notworthy


Mein khush naseeb hun joh aapka pyaar mila
Nazar peecha karte huey dekha tumen paaya
Aur kya mangu mein tumare chaon ke siwa
Aakhiri saans tak tham lena humen kuchh pooche bina
Zamane se na kuchh chahun mein tumare bina
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syednaami
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«Reply #339 on: July 10, 2008, 07:07:25 PM »
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Aapne bhi buhat achhi shayiri likhi hai...
Thanks jee for your appreciation...
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palkhi
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«Reply #340 on: July 10, 2008, 10:09:41 PM »
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Too cute syed ji nd gulab di!!!!!!!!!
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Sonia01
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«Reply #341 on: July 11, 2008, 02:59:17 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on July 09, 2008, 08:23:05 AM
Really marvelous... buhat pyara likha hai...
Jaaiz hai teri baat,,
Par main bhi kya karun,,
Dil phenk hun aashiq,,
Kis kis se pyar karun..



Thanks Sabah... yer welcome...

Thank you bhaiya aapko hamara yeh chota kalam pasand aaya...

Dil main jinka chehra bas gaya
Unhe yaad karna aur pyar karna
Dastak dene zarur aayegi ek din
Tab mera yeh kaha yaad karna
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palkhi
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«Reply #342 on: July 11, 2008, 07:25:30 PM »
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               Awwwwwwwww di tooo good ji!!!!


           
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syednaami
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«Reply #343 on: July 12, 2008, 03:33:08 AM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on July 11, 2008, 02:59:17 AM
Thank you bhaiya aapko hamara yeh chota kalam pasand aaya...

Dil main jinka chehra bas gaya
Unhe yaad karna aur pyar karna
Dastak dene zarur aayegi ek din
Tab mera yeh kaha yaad karna
 tongue3

Kuchh log samjhe nahin,,
Mere alfaaz ko,,
Baat ki thi par jami nahin,,
Dastak to kuchh nahin,,
Humne to deewar phalaang li,,
Unke dil men ghus kar bhi,,
Unki muhabbat na mil saki..
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sarthika
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«Reply #344 on: July 12, 2008, 04:27:18 AM »
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nice work
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