Dil ki khwaishein

by smardia on December 24, 2008, 09:26:53 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 21, 2009, 04:02:20 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 23, 2009, 04:41:46 PM
Bahoot he achi lines likhi hai apne smardia ji!!

Rooh ne kab kaha koi shakal paai hai
karmo ke gati ne her deewar giraai hai
na khwaisho ka koi chehra, na armaano ki koi soorat
kitna bhi kar lo muhobbat,
payar ki asali pehchan kab kisne paai hai


Dobara likhne ki koshish karugi... ajj kaam mai bahoot busy hu.. ek najar apki lines per parri aor jo man ne kaha likh diya... magar khud ko sahi sa nahi laga... so dobara koshish karugi ki kuch likhu jo apki lines ka sahi maynemain sath de sake!!

Quote from: Pooja on August 20, 2009, 11:02:48 PM
Ek baar phir se koshish ki hai... magar phir se kuch baat nahi bani....   DOH DOH
Zajbaato ke saaye, kai baar samjhaye nahi jaate
Milte hai kuch apne, jo khud ko samjhaye nahi jaate
Her ek shabd unka lagta hai apna apna sa
Uthate armmano se yah dil bachaye nahi jaaye

Mil chuke hai kahin, ya yah wo hai jiska tha intzaar
Aise sawalo ke jawab se khud ko karar dilaye nahi jaate
Mil le bas dil is shakas ek baar, yahi sil chahe
Aise chahat ke zajbaat, kabhi bhulaye nahi jaate….

Zajbaato ke saaye, kai baar samjhaye nahi jaate
Milte hai kuch apne, jo khud ko bhi samjhaye nahi jaate

Dono shayari bahut accha hi bani my dear di..
Mujhe bahut accha laga.... emotinally created lines.  Thumbs UP  Usual Smile
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smardia
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«Reply #16 on: August 22, 2009, 08:42:11 AM »
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Rojaji main sehmat hu aapki es baat se Poojaji ki har line badi sachot aur dilse likhi hoti hai...Jis khoobi aur veg(speed)se wo likhti hain...lagta hai sara shabdh kosh aur bhav unke jahan mai hai.....

Quote from: Roja on August 21, 2009, 04:02:20 AM
Dono shayari bahut accha hi bani my dear di..
Mujhe bahut accha laga.... emotinally created lines.  Thumbs UP  Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: August 22, 2009, 10:00:51 AM »
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zajbaato ka sailaab hai.....kya khoob sneh se oat-prot jawab hai...Poojaji wah wah !!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause

kya khoobsurat lines hain....

"Milte hai kuch apne,jo khud ko samjhaye nahi jaate
 Her ek shabd unka lagta hai apna apna sa"
"Mil le bas dil is shakas se ek baar, yahi dil chahe
 Aise chahat ke zajbaat, kabhi bhulaye nahi jaate…."

Ab main kya likhu....Chliye ek koshish....

Zajbaato k saaye kayi baar hamari samajh nahi aate
Kuchh aise rishte hain jo khud bhi samajh nahi aate
Rab ko n mai-ne dekha hai aur n tu ne dekha hai
Par oous se jo rishta hai wo rishta cum nahi hota

Milane se haath koi rishta mazboot nahi hota
Aatmaon k milan k rishte he atoot hote hain
Kyon jag jati hai MAA achanak beech raat mai
Lal uska jab saat-samunder paar mushkil mai hota
Rista wahi khaas hota hai jab eysa ehsaas hota hai
Dukh mai ho koi apna bin kahe hame aabhas hota hai
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«Reply #18 on: August 22, 2009, 11:22:29 AM »
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Quote from: smardia on December 24, 2008, 09:26:53 AM
N TUM HAMHE JANTE HO,N HUM TUMHE PAHCHANTE HAI
YE TO MEHFIL HAI RUHON KI,SHAKLE KAHAN KOI HAI
FIR BHI RUBARU HONE KI Dil ME khwaish KYU HAI 
PADH KER KALAM AAP K KYU MILNE KI KHWAISH HOTI

LAGTA HAI DARD-KI-GALIYON ME KABHI MULAKAT HUI HOGI
N TUM HAMHE JANTE THAY,N HUM TUMHE PAHCHANTE THAY

SURENDRA   icon_flower
Bahut Khoob Surendra Ji
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«Reply #19 on: August 23, 2009, 06:09:37 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 21, 2009, 04:02:20 AM
Dono shayari bahut accha hi bani my dear di..
Mujhe bahut accha laga.... emotinally created lines.  Thumbs UP  Usual Smile


Thank you so much Dear!!
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«Reply #20 on: August 23, 2009, 06:11:46 AM »
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Quote from: smardia on August 22, 2009, 08:42:11 AM
Rojaji main sehmat hu aapki es baat se Poojaji ki har line badi sachot aur dilse likhi hoti hai...Jis khoobi aur veg(speed)se wo likhti hain...lagta hai sara shabdh kosh aur bhav unke jahan mai hai.....


smardia ji... ab kaya kahu.. such to such hai.. apki lines ke samne, mujhe apna likha itna acha nahi lag raha hai!!
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«Reply #21 on: August 23, 2009, 06:15:23 AM »
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Quote from: smardia on August 22, 2009, 10:00:51 AM
zajbaato ka sailaab hai.....kya khoob sneh se oat-prot jawab hai...Poojaji wah wah !!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause

kya khoobsurat lines hain....

"Milte hai kuch apne,jo khud ko samjhaye nahi jaate
 Her ek shabd unka lagta hai apna apna sa"
"Mil le bas dil is shakas se ek baar, yahi dil chahe
 Aise chahat ke zajbaat, kabhi bhulaye nahi jaate…."

Ab main kya likhu....Chliye ek koshish....

Zajbaato k saaye kayi baar hamari samajh nahi aate
Kuchh aise rishte hain jo khud bhi samajh nahi aate
Rab ko n mai-ne dekha hai aur n tu ne dekha hai
Par oous se jo rishta hai wo rishta cum nahi hota

Milane se haath koi rishta mazboot nahi hota
Aatmaon k milan k rishte he atoot hote hain
Kyon jag jati hai MAA achanak beech raat mai
Lal uska jab saat-samunder paar mushkil mai hota
Rista wahi khaas hota hai jab eysa ehsaas hota hai
Dukh mai ho koi apna bin kahe hame aabhas hota hai


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah kaya baat hai....jalad he kuch likhne ki koshish hogi!!
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«Reply #22 on: August 23, 2009, 08:17:31 AM »
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Shukriya..Dhanyawad...Rajeshji...
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 22, 2009, 11:22:29 AM
Bahut Khoob Surendra Ji
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«Reply #23 on: August 23, 2009, 08:23:57 AM »
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 Shukriya..Dhanyawad...Poojaji...
Intzaar rahega aap ki pratikriya swaroop chand lines ka...... Usual Smile

Quote from: Pooja on August 23, 2009, 06:15:23 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah kaya baat hai....jalad he kuch likhne ki koshish hogi!!
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«Reply #24 on: January 20, 2011, 04:12:00 PM »
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Lijiye hum tou intezar he karte reh gaye.....Poojaji ki lines ka.......par wo itni busy ho gayi hain ki ab yoindia par aa he nahi pati hain........

koi aur try kare,,,,,
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