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«Reply #30 on: March 21, 2008, 04:04:41 AM »
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Thanks Pooja & Talat..
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«Reply #31 on: March 21, 2008, 10:11:00 AM »
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Achhe waqta yahaN apni kalam ki roshni de gaye..wallah hum toh mehroom rahe....shukriya sabhi logo ka ke unhoNe hameiN achhe taseer waale shabd padne ko diye....
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Thaam Ke Dil Ko Tadpata Hoon, Muskurata Hoon
Jab Teri Shaukh Adaaon Ka khayaal Aata Hai...

Aryan ji...adaab.. jawaab nahin aap kaa...ek achha our pukhta ashard pesh kiya aapne...maiN ise aage badaye deta hooN....umeed hai pasand aayega...

Jaane kyuiN jalne lagti haiN tanhaiiyaN bhi
Jab tere toote hue sayoN ka kahyaal ata hai

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«Reply #32 on: March 21, 2008, 08:00:10 PM »
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Sabne Kamaal Ka Likha Hai,.
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«Reply #33 on: March 22, 2008, 12:54:15 PM »
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bahoot mazedar likha hai....!!!!

jaane kis ghadi mein hum unko dil de baithe
apne sukun_E_jahaan ko yu hi tabaah kar baithe
do nigaahe chhu rahi thi mujhko
aur huum tamaam saanse naam unke kar baithe


DIL...Nasamjh hota hai na...?
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«Reply #34 on: March 22, 2008, 01:45:12 PM »
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Chitra wrote:-

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bahoot mazedar likha hai....!!!!

jaane kis ghadi mein hum unko dil de baithe
apne sukun_E_jahaan ko yu hi tabaah kar baithe
do nigaahe chhu rahi thi mujhko
aur huum tamaam saanse naam unke kar baithe

DIL...Nasamjh hota hai na...?

Ek Achha our kabil-e-tariif ashar pesh kiya aapne chitra ji....
Hamarii janib se tamam daad kabool karreiN......

KyuiN apne dil ko pareshaan kiye jaate ho
Har garrhi har saans tamaam kiye jaate ho
Woh samjhe the na samjheNge pyar ka sabab
YuiN hi apne dil ko Badnaam kiye jaate ho



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«Reply #35 on: March 23, 2008, 04:03:28 PM »
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Nice One Harash Ji,.
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«Reply #36 on: March 23, 2008, 04:18:27 PM »
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All are very good....  Applause
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«Reply #37 on: March 24, 2008, 06:02:18 AM »
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Thanks a lot Harash, Azeem, Chitra & Roja...

Good Ones Harash & Chitra...
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«Reply #38 on: March 24, 2008, 07:48:25 PM »
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you Are Welcome Aryaan Ji,. notworthy
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«Reply #39 on: March 25, 2008, 12:26:10 AM »
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superbb all of u ....sabne outstanding likha hai..padhkar bahut acha laga

hum bhi ghayal hain uss marz ke
jisse zamane vale dil ki lagi kehte hain

kuch log bata diya karte hain haal-e-dil
magar hum zara chup rehte hain
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«Reply #40 on: March 25, 2008, 12:35:46 AM »
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Niks

Bahut achche !

Kya baat aaj kal bakk bakk band kar di kya NaNaNa

Aap to chup rehne walon mein se nahi the Winking

Sabhi doston ne bahut achcha likha hai Applause
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«Reply #41 on: March 25, 2008, 12:41:53 AM »
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 Laughing hard
ji dil ke muamle kuch aise huya karte hain
aankhein kuch bolti hain..aur zubaan pe lafz kuch aur hua karte hain
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«Reply #42 on: March 27, 2008, 05:21:48 AM »
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Thanks Nikki... Likhne mein tau aapka bhi jawaab nahi..Usual Smile
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«Reply #43 on: March 29, 2008, 09:39:48 PM »
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Nice One,.
Nikki,. Applause
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«Reply #44 on: May 07, 2008, 12:40:55 AM »
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Quote from: Aryaan on September 05, 2007, 06:38:17 PM
Kuch Iss Ada Se Khela Tha
Woh IshQ Ki Baazi
Main Apni Fateh Samajhta Tha
Maat Hone Tak



aryan ji,

aapka likha padh kar aisa sakoon milta he jo bayan hi bus mehsoos hota he.

yeh ada thi ya khata thi
kyon chor di tunhe woh dhun
khudgarz thi unki mohabbat
ya shushk* tha tera junoon!

Prateek

shushk*--murjhaya hua
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