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«Reply #30 on: June 20, 2006, 07:28:57 PM » |
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bahut khub GAURAV AND SHAHID ......aap sach mein bahut aacha likhte hain .......shahid ............. :D
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«Reply #31 on: June 20, 2006, 07:38:24 PM » |
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shukriya Ram sagar ji and bahut khub Gaurav........
ek kahaani ek khawab hai yeh meri jindagi ka
main hun yadi dharati toh tu parteek hai gagan ka
mere aanchal tale tujhe sakun milta hai
mere dil bhi tere pyaar ko tarsata hai
jindagi ke ujaale tujhe se hi ab mere
tu hoga saath mere toh reahnge kaise fir andhare
A khuda aaj dharti ko gagan se mila de
ek khawab hai yeh adhura sa isko sach bana de Jiss Dinn dekhunga tujhe uss Dua karni Chor dunga...... Pujunga sirf tujhe Mandiron se main mooh moud lunga....... Kabhi jo hua Dil udaas toh tere Aanchal me sirr chupa ke thoda ro lunga...... Bas ghadi do ghadi ki hai baat phir aagle Janam me tujhe apna bana lunga........ ranjana and gaurav..,....too good yaar......maza agaya... sorry kabab mein hadhi ban gayi....rokh nahi payi jis din se tujhe dekhlia, usse din se rab se natha toot gaya tha yakeen mujhe appne app par, par na jane kyun woh toot gaya |
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«Reply #32 on: June 20, 2006, 07:42:50 PM » |
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shukriya Ram sagar ji and bahut khub Gaurav........
ek kahaani ek khawab hai yeh meri jindagi ka
main hun yadi dharati toh tu parteek hai gagan ka
mere aanchal tale tujhe sakun milta hai
mere dil bhi tere pyaar ko tarsata hai
jindagi ke ujaale tujhe se hi ab mere
tu hoga saath mere toh reahnge kaise fir andhare
A khuda aaj dharti ko gagan se mila de
ek khawab hai yeh adhura sa isko sach bana de Jiss Dinn dekhunga tujhe uss Dua karni Chor dunga...... Pujunga sirf tujhe Mandiron se main mooh moud lunga....... Kabhi jo hua Dil udaas toh tere Aanchal me sirr chupa ke thoda ro lunga...... Bas ghadi do ghadi ki hai baat phir aagle Janam me tujhe apna bana lunga........ ranjana and gaurav..,....too good yaar......maza agaya... sorry kabab mein hadhi ban gayi....rokh nahi payi jis din se tujhe dekhlia, usse din se rab se natha toot gaya tha yakeen mujhe appne app par, par na jane kyun woh toot gaya thnx Ajani.....kabab me haddi nahi ho tum koi na hee koi kabab hai yahan |
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anjani_si
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«Reply #33 on: June 20, 2006, 07:48:16 PM » |
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isse lia tu....kabab kaise banegha...jabh usme haddi hai :D:D:D
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«Reply #34 on: June 20, 2006, 08:33:49 PM » |
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shukriya Ram sagar ji and bahut khub Gaurav........
ek kahaani ek khawab hai yeh meri jindagi ka
main hun yadi dharati toh tu parteek hai gagan ka
mere aanchal tale tujhe sakun milta hai
mere dil bhi tere pyaar ko tarsata hai
jindagi ke ujaale tujhe se hi ab mere
tu hoga saath mere toh reahnge kaise fir andhare
A khuda aaj dharti ko gagan se mila de
ek khawab hai yeh adhura sa isko sach bana de Kabhi kabhi soch ta hu kin logo ke bich me aa gaya hu mein!!!!,bohot khub gaurav aur ranjana ji! :D ..waise to tumlogo ka duet mein khada hona muskil hein...par kya karun control nahi hota! :wink: ... :D Teri har khawab ko mein hakikat mein tabdil kardunga
Jo chupa tere dil me tamanna usko aap na naseeb karlunga
Tu tarastii hein pyar ko,aur mein mohobbat ka saylab liye khada hu
Jo ek baar mil jaye teri haami,hamari jindaji ko ishq-e-rangin kardungaThnx a lot Shahid bhai......aise keh ke Sharminda mat karo bhai.......aap bhi kuch kam nahi likte....... :wink: Nahi mein sach kehraha hu gaurav!!! ..tum logo se to sikhta hu.......... |
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«Reply #35 on: June 20, 2006, 08:42:22 PM » |
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bahut khub GAURAV AND SHAHID ......aap sach mein bahut aacha likhte hain .......shahid ............. :D kya keh diya aapne ranjana ji! :rolleyes: ...thnxk u ranjana jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii :D Bas tera hii sahara hein jo hum jiye ja rahen hein
Matlab faros is duniya mein pani ko bhi taraste hein
Pyas bhujhane ko khud ka hii aansu barso piye ja rahen hein |
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«Reply #36 on: June 20, 2006, 11:09:11 PM » |
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bahut khub GAURAV AND SHAHID ......aap sach mein bahut aacha likhte hain .......shahid ............. :D kya keh diya aapne ranjana ji! :rolleyes: ...thnxk you ranjana jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii :D Bas tera hii sahara hein jo hum jiye ja rahen hein
Matlab faros is duniya mein pani ko bhi taraste hein
Pyas bhujhane ko khud ka hii aansu barso piye ja rahen heinshahid waah kya baat hai :D:D:D:D |
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ranjana
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«Reply #38 on: June 21, 2006, 08:52:39 AM » |
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mere khawabo ko aap apne pyaar ke rango se sajaane lage
meri kahaani thee pariyo.n si aap haqikat baanane lage
bhar diya aapne inmein apni wafao ka rang
pyaar ke geeto ki dhun ab mere lab gungunane lage
aasaman per chand bhi ab sharma ke badli mein chhip raha
jab aap mere pass aake apna pyaar jaatane lage...........
mitane laga hai ab dilo ka fasala dheere -dheere
jab se aap mere sang meri rahao.n per aane lage
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«Reply #39 on: June 21, 2006, 09:51:11 AM » |
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Thnk u anjani ji! :D
Aur gaurav and ranjana ji! tum dono ke baare mein kuch kehne ka darkar nahi hein............... :D
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«Reply #40 on: June 21, 2006, 02:04:52 PM » |
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wo kehti hai use sirf meri talaash thi
sadiyon se khojti rahi jo wo awaaza mere pass thi
apne kaano me mujhe har waqt sunna chahti hai woh
kehti hai ek paheli hun mein
aur mujhe suljhana chahti hai wo
apne dosto se aaj kal bahut sharmati hai wo
mera naam hatheli par likh kar mitati hai wo
apne har gam ko mere kandhe par sir rakh kar sunati hai wo
magar lagta hai darr aaj mujhe
ki ye jo sheesha hai wo tut na jaaye
jo lagti hai mujhe bhi koi apni si
wo sapna bankar chur na ho jaye
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ranjana
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«Reply #41 on: June 21, 2006, 07:16:23 PM » |
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ek shaksh thaa woh jo ek kahwab ban ke mujhe milta raha
uski awaz ka jadu bas ek preet ka geet ban ke dil mein utarata hai
karta hai woh mujhse na jaane kya shokhiya.n
per ek sharmo haya ka parda bhi woh mujhse rakhta hai
uska yeh bholapan,yeh masoomiyat dekh ke
mere dil mein uske liye pyaar sa umarata hai
ek shaksh hai woh jo khawab ban ke mujhse milta hai!!!!!!!
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«Reply #42 on: June 21, 2006, 07:20:31 PM » |
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Aa Rang doon ek Kahani tere Aanchal tale......
Phir na jaane Pyar karne ka WaQt kab mile......
Na Sharmana aaj warna yeh Haseen pal phir guzar jayenge.....
Shab ka kuch nahi par Subha ke sitare rukk jayenge....!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #43 on: June 21, 2006, 07:27:21 PM » |
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wo kehti hai use sirf meri talaash thi
sadiyon se khojti rahi jo wo awaaza mere pass thi
apne kaano me mujhe har waqt sunna chahti hai woh
kehti hai ek paheli hun mein
aur mujhe suljhana chahti hai wo
apne dosto se aaj kal bahut sharmati hai wo
mera naam hatheli par likh kar mitati hai wo
apne har gam ko mere kandhe par sir rakh kar sunati hai wo
magar lagta hai darr aaj mujhe
ki ye jo sheesha hai wo tut na jaaye
jo lagti hai mujhe bhi koi apni si
wo sapna bankar chur na ho jaye awesome yaar...!!! raat ko jabh ankhein baandh karti hoon chehra uska samne pathi hoon raat ki khamoshi mein uski yaadoin mein ghoom ho jaithi hoon khwab jabh koyi dekhti leti hoon uski rang mein rang jaithi hoon khwab ki ghehrayi mein uski bahoin mein kho jaithi hoon |
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ranjana
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«Reply #44 on: June 22, 2006, 02:28:23 AM » |
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bahut khub anjani and gaurav...........
yeh teri meri duniya ek pyaar ki teesari duniya hai
yahan gul hai,khawab hain,umange hain aur bas pyaar hai
yahan mohabbat dil mein basti hai,chahre se jhalakti hai
preet hi preet hai yahan jo bas dilo mein palti hai..........
khumar hai ishqe ka jo utarata hi nahi hai
yeh teesri duniya teri meri mohabbat mein nayi hai
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