HAMAARA JO HAAL HAI_Ghazal

by riyaz106 on January 30, 2010, 04:28:48 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 30, 2010, 07:05:10 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB RIYAZ SAHAB Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: January 30, 2010, 07:25:27 PM »
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Dher saara shukriya MALLI Ji ke aapne meri is ghazal ke marm ko samajhte huye isko pasand farmaya.
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Bahut badiya likha hai aapne Riyaz ji.... ishq bi hai dard bi hai.... bahut bahut khoob  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #17 on: January 30, 2010, 07:29:16 PM »
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Bahot shukriya Khamosh ji ke aapne meri is poem ko pasand kiya. Aapki hausla afazai rahi to aur bhi likhne ki koshish karunga.

BAHUT KHOOB RIYAZ SAHAB Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #18 on: January 31, 2010, 02:39:50 PM »
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Nice creation Riyaz Ji And Nice Response Pandey Ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #19 on: February 01, 2010, 07:18:32 AM »
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Thanks Rishi Ji.
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cara
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«Reply #20 on: February 01, 2010, 07:42:44 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI  RIYAZ106 JI....

JAB ILZAAM LAG RAHE THEY MUJPE WO KHAMOSH KYUN THA TAB
ISI KA TOU MUJHE MALAAL HAI,
ISILIYE TOU HAMARA YE HAAL HAI....
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«Reply #21 on: February 01, 2010, 12:52:59 PM »
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Bahut achhe cara ji shayari ka jawaab shayari se dena to koi aapse seekhe. Thanks for your valuable response.
KYA BAAT HAI  RIYAZ106 JI....

JAB ILZAAM LAG RAHE THEY MUJPE WO KHAMOSH KYUN THA TAB
ISI KA TOU MUJHE MALAAL HAI,
ISILIYE TOU HAMARA YE HAAL HAI....
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«Reply #22 on: February 02, 2010, 02:33:29 PM »
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                  GHAZAL
Hamse se na poochiye ke hamara jo haal hai
Mushkil hua hai jeena to marna muhaal hai
Tootey huye dilon ka nahi hai ilaaj kyon
Jiska nahin jawaab ye aisa sawaal hai
Haira.n hun mehrban achaanak huye hain kyon
Lagtaa hai doston ki nai koi chaal hai
Nakamiyan mili hain mujhe apni wajha se
Baitha hua tha jispe main kaati wo daal hai
Ilzaam 'Ashna' pe lage, tha wo bhi saamne
Khamosh kyon raha wo, mujhe ye malaal hai

Riyaz 'Ashna'


Woww very nice bohat gehrayi hai is ghazal me...bohat khoob
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S.hashmi
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«Reply #23 on: February 03, 2010, 08:26:40 AM »
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 Applause  well done Riyaz ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #24 on: February 03, 2010, 09:11:07 AM »
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Khushi ji bahot bahot shukriya ke aapko meri ghazal pasand aai.
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waquif ansari
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«Reply #25 on: February 03, 2010, 09:15:32 AM »
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Khoobsurat shayari ki ye peshkash bahut lajawaab hai. HaseeN pairaaye ke ashaar hai janaab Riyaz Saheb. Khoob, khoob bahut khoob..............
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riyaz106
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«Reply #26 on: February 03, 2010, 09:18:49 AM »
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Hashmi Ji and Waqif Sahab aapka behad mashkoor hun ke is nacheez ki haqeer si ghazal aapko pasand aai.
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hameeda
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«Reply #27 on: February 12, 2011, 10:26:50 AM »
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bahut hi achchi..jawaab nahi..
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sbechain
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«Reply #28 on: May 07, 2011, 12:40:30 PM »
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                  GHAZAL
Hamse se na poochiye ke hamara jo haal hai
Mushkil hua hai jeena to marna muhaal hai
Tootey huye dilon ka nahi hai ilaaj kyon
Jiska nahin jawaab ye aisa sawaal hai
Haira.n hun mehrban achaanak huye hain kyon
Lagtaa hai doston ki nai koi chaal hai
Nakamiyan mili hain mujhe apni wajha se
Baitha hua tha jispe main kaati wo daal hai
Ilzaam 'Ashna' pe lage, tha wo bhi saamne
Khamosh kyon raha wo, mujhe ye malaal hai

Riyaz 'Ashna'



sabka yahi haal hai,
mera bhi yehi kyal hai,
ashna ji waah likhne mein  aapka kammal hai ,
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Shaifali
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«Reply #29 on: August 08, 2011, 07:52:19 PM »
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wah Applause Applause
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