Ibadat ki nazar...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on February 24, 2011, 05:31:43 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 27, 2011, 06:08:19 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 27, 2011, 06:07:15 PM
Ek aur mast poem Geet-di...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tum jaane kya mere ho gaye ho
Mere Raat aur Din tum ho gaye ho

Kya kahu main tumse tum mere kya ho
Meri jeevan naiyaa k patvaar ban gaye ho







Thnx alot sweetu n thnx for such lovely words...
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«Reply #16 on: February 27, 2011, 07:13:11 PM »
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boht ache raheem ji it was sweet of u ke ap ne ise share kiya, aur geet ji mujhe intezar rahega apke reply ka..thankyou so much
Diya
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«Reply #17 on: February 27, 2011, 07:17:01 PM »
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Quote from: rooh-e-ibadat on February 27, 2011, 07:13:11 PM
boht ache raheem ji it was sweet of u ke ap ne ise share kiya, aur geet ji mujhe intezar rahega apke reply ka..thankyou so much
Diya

Ji main jald hi apke liye ek khubsurat si kavita likhti hu...apko zyada intezar nhi karna padega ek baat kehni thi apse agar aap apni kavita mein kinhi khaas baato ka ya ehsaso ka zikr chahti hai tou beshak mujhe bata sakti hai...
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«Reply #18 on: February 27, 2011, 08:10:53 PM »
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Quote from: rooh-e-ibadat on February 27, 2011, 07:13:11 PM
geet ji mujhe intezar rahega apke reply ka..thankyou so much
Diya

Diya ji lijiye apka intezar khatam kiye deti hu ye merri ek chhoti si koshish hai umeed karti hu apko pasand aayegi kuch kamipeshi ho tou zarur bataiyega...


Jab mile the hum tou the ajnabi ki tarah,
aaj hum sang hai sanso ki rawangi ki tarah,

khayal tumhara hi rehta hai merre dil ko,
tumhara naam labo pe rehta hai tishnagi ki tarah,

phoolo ki khushbu si mehekati hai sanse merri,
aur tumhara pyar odhe rehti hu taazgi ki tarah,

khayal tou bahut rehte hai zehen mein,
per tum hi tum base ho yado mein bandgi ki tarah,

aaj hamari mhbt ko poora ek saal ho chala hai,
ek hi tamanna hai diya ki fahim zindgi mein rehna asudagi ki tarah.........

Asudagi-happiness,khushhali...
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«Reply #19 on: February 27, 2011, 08:24:02 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on February 27, 2011, 08:22:50 PM
Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Shukriya shihab ji..take care ji...
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«Reply #20 on: February 28, 2011, 12:20:40 PM »
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Thank you very much geet ji boht acha likha hai apne..mai aksar apki hi likhi lines unhe sms kiya karti hu so pls keep writing bht shukriya again geet ji apki help kelie..
Diya
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«Reply #21 on: February 28, 2011, 12:47:54 PM »
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Agar apke khayal mein koi aur bhi lines aye mere liye to zarur likhiyega kyunki kuch din baaki hain ab bhi, bas itna dhyan mein rakhega k words ek dam simple ho im sorry mai saudia mein pali badi hu na islie mujhe na khaas urdu ati hai na hindi, padti sabke post hu par kabhi kabhi samajh nai paati pura..thanx again geet ji
Diya
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«Reply #22 on: February 28, 2011, 04:25:25 PM »
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Quote from: Rooh-e-ibadat on February 28, 2011, 12:20:40 PM
Thank you very much geet ji boht acha likha hai apne..mai aksar apki hi likhi lines unhe sms kiya karti hu so pls keep writing bht shukriya again geet ji apki help kelie..
Diya

Quote from: Rooh-e-ibadat on February 28, 2011, 12:47:54 PM
Agar apke khayal mein koi aur bhi lines aye mere liye to zarur likhiyega kyunki kuch din baaki hain ab bhi, bas itna dhyan mein rakhega k words ek dam simple ho im sorry mai saudia mein pali badi hu na islie mujhe na khaas urdu ati hai na hindi, padti sabke post hu par kabhi kabhi samajh nai paati pura..thanx again geet ji
Diya

Ji zarur diya ji kuch aurr bana tou likhungi..and advance mein happy anniversary to u n fahim ji...khush rahiye..god blessu both..
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«Reply #23 on: February 28, 2011, 04:30:03 PM »
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Thank you very much geet ji
Diya
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«Reply #24 on: February 28, 2011, 04:32:35 PM »
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Quote from: Rooh-e-ibadat on February 28, 2011, 04:30:03 PM
Thank you very much geet ji
Diya
Dont b..take care..
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