Kaash ke na chup rahta mai

by bekarar on November 17, 2008, 07:37:47 AM
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«Reply #15 on: November 17, 2008, 07:38:27 PM »
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Adhuri daad lagi yah to bekarar ji, mujhe intzaar tha ki app kuch likhe aor jawab main phir kuch likhu...chaliye apki adhuri daad abhi kishat main manjoor hai... baki ki kishat jab bhi waqat mile jaroor likhiyega.

Apke shabd mujhe lajawab kar jaate hai bekarar ji. itani pyari kavita likhi hai apne aor uske bad ek ke baad ek same rythem main apki posts... kalam apne app he likh gai. yah meri kalam nahi apki kalam ka jaadu hai. waise bhi shabd bhi app he ke hai is kavita main... maine to sirf thora sa roop badal diya!!
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«Reply #16 on: November 17, 2008, 07:46:28 PM »
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Tere naino ki moun swikrti,
us waqt agar padh leta mai,
dar dar yun na bhaga firta
khud apni kismat gadh leta mai,

ye kasak na dil ko tadpaati
yun mar mar ke kyun jeeta mai
kash ke mai sab kuch kah deta,
kash ke "NA CHUP RAHTA MAI"
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«Reply #17 on: November 17, 2008, 07:53:39 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai.... bahoot khoob Bekarar ji.. ajj muddato baad Khumar main likhna bahoot acha lag rah ahai... bahoot bahoot shukaria apka yah awsar dene ke liye:

Parr kar bhi tere nain
Na yah juban kuch kah paai
Jab bhi chaha tujhko samjhana
Haya ki deewar, bich humare paai

Duvidha teri rahi, duvidha meri rahi
Raahein zindagi ki is duvidha main alag paai
Kash kah jaate tum, kash ksamjha jaati main
Is kash main humne zindagi kitani hai ajj uljhaai
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«Reply #18 on: November 17, 2008, 08:53:07 PM »
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bahoot sunder jawab hai pooja ji.......aur shukriya kis baat ka?

pichale panne ulate to,
har panne par tasweer teri,
har shaam tasavur tera hi,
har din tera har raat teri,

aalam ab bhi aisa hi hai,
farq magar bas itna hi
pahle tujhko paa lene ki,
umeed bani si rahti thi,

par ab tum jageer kisi ki,
mai bhi mangalsutra kisika,
par tum bin, na jaane kyun,
har rang lage hai feeka feeka

kyun yaad abhi tak aati ho
bas yahi sochta rahta hun mai
Kash ke mai sab kuch kah deta,
kash ke "NA CHUP RAHTA MAI"
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«Reply #19 on: November 17, 2008, 09:45:19 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai!! bahoot khoob Bekarar ji!!

Her pal ek chehra ankhon mai samaya rahta hai
Na jaane kyun her chehra, us chehre se milaya rahta hai

Yaadon ke jharokhe main, uski baato ko chupaya rahta hai
Jab bhi dil bhar aye, wo aho main samaya rahta hai

Tan kisi ka, man mai koi aor basaya rahta hai
Kyun zindagi main bhi sab pakar, sab kuch gawaya rahta hai

Teri un nigaho ke sawal ka jawab, ajj bhi dil ko tadpaya  rahta hai
Kah jaate jo ek baar tum, bas yahi tufaan dil main dabaya rahta hai
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«Reply #20 on: November 18, 2008, 05:26:44 AM »
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Pooja di... Achha hua jo aap ki kalam chup nahin rahi.  icon_thumleft
Kya sahii likha hai aapne..  Masha-Alaah.. Shocked Even More
Waah Waah.. Jabar10t, ek se badh kar ek...  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #21 on: November 18, 2008, 05:29:46 AM »
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 Thankyou ! Mahiya, apki kalam hume bhi padne ko mil jaati to acha lagta
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«Reply #22 on: November 18, 2008, 05:32:50 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 17, 2008, 07:46:28 PM
Tere naino ki moun swikrti,
us waqt agar padh leta mai,
dar dar yun na bhaga firta
khud apni kismat gadh leta mai,

ye kasak na dil ko tadpaati
yun mar mar ke kyun jeeta mai
kash ke mai sab kuch kah deta,
kash ke "NA CHUP RAHTA MAI"
Quote from: bekarar on November 17, 2008, 08:53:07 PM
bahoot sunder jawab hai pooja ji.......aur shukriya kis baat ka?

pichale panne ulate to,
har panne par tasweer teri,
har shaam tasavur tera hi,
har din tera har raat teri,

aalam ab bhi aisa hi hai,
farq magar bas itna hi
pahle tujhko paa lene ki,
umeed bani si rahti thi,

par ab tum jageer kisi ki,
mai bhi mangalsutra kisika,
par tum bin, na jaane kyun,
har rang lage hai feeka feeka

kyun yaad abhi tak aati ho
bas yahi sochta rahta hun mai
Kash ke mai sab kuch kah deta,
kash ke "NA CHUP RAHTA MAI"



Lo ji.. Hum toh behosh ho gaye...

Aap toh pakka yeh soch kar likh rahe ho, "Peeche hatt jaa vairiya, Saddi Rail Gaddi aayi" Laughing hard
means... Sab peeche hatt jaao aur dekhte raho, ki Sanjeev (ji) kaise ek ke baad ek kamaal karne waale hai.. Usual Smile

Seriously, kamaal par phir kamaal ...  Applause
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«Reply #23 on: November 18, 2008, 05:44:50 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 18, 2008, 05:29:46 AM
Thankyou ! Mahiya, apki kalam hume bhi padne ko mil jaati to acha lagta



Pooja di, Aapne kaha hai toh Ek chhoti si koshish kar rahi hoon...
Bhool chook maaf kar dijiyega...




Naa khawaab adhoore reh jaate,
Jo tum aise naa humko tadpaate..
Sang jeene ki, sang marne ki,
Kasam kabhi hum mil kar khaate...
Bus tees yehi hai jaati saanson ki,
Kaash isi safar mein mil paate...

Khamosh nazar se kiya ishaara,
Dikhe ashkon mein behte hum..
Dil se tumne laakh bulaaya par,
Kabhi toh labon se kehte tum..
Ae Kaash kabhi kuch kehte tum...
Kaash ke naa chup rehte tum...
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«Reply #24 on: November 18, 2008, 05:46:38 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

Wah, yah hue na baat, bahoot he acha likha hai Mahiya!!
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«Reply #25 on: November 18, 2008, 06:09:17 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 17, 2008, 09:45:19 PM
wah wah wah kaya baat hai!! bahoot khoob Bekarar ji!!

Her pal ek chehra ankhon mai samaya rahta hai
Na jaane kyun her chehra, us chehre se milaya rahta hai

Yaadon ke jharokhe main, uski baato ko chupaya rahta hai
Jab bhi dil bhar aye, wo aho main samaya rahta hai

Tan kisi ka, man mai koi aor basaya rahta hai
Kyun zindagi main bhi sab pakar, sab kuch gawaya rahta hai

Teri un nigaho ke sawal ka jawab, ajj bhi dil ko tadpaya  rahta hai
Kah jaate jo ek baar tum, bas yahi tufaan dil main dabaya rahta hai


pooja ji raat ko padha jaroor magar jawab nahi de paya.......bahoot sunder tarike se aap is silsile ko aage badha rahi hain...sach me bahoot pasand aaya
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«Reply #26 on: November 18, 2008, 07:44:32 AM »
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Kal ye thread dekha tha, par waqt ki kami ki wajah se kuch likh nahin paaye....aur aaj to yahan kamaal pe kamaal ho rahe hain.......!! Kaun kaun si post quote karun aur kya tareef karun...Like always, I am lost for words....Hume tareef karna to nahin aata, yehi kahenge, Bohot Khoob Sanjeev, Pooja and Mahiya Applause
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«Reply #27 on: November 18, 2008, 07:53:59 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 18, 2008, 05:32:50 AM


Lo ji.. Hum toh behosh ho gaye...

Aap toh pakka yeh soch kar likh rahe ho, "Peeche hatt jaa vairiya, Saddi Rail Gaddi aayi" Laughing hard
means... Sab peeche hatt jaao aur dekhte raho, ki Sanjeev (ji) kaise ek ke baad ek kamaal karne waale hai.. Usual Smile

Seriously, kamaal par phir kamaal ...  Applause
mera aisa koi irada nahi.....aapki jarranawaji hai..aur ...
baat sirf itni hai ki aaj aap bhi khumar-e-ishq ke mood me hain.......

Quote from: Mahiya on November 18, 2008, 05:44:50 AM


Pooja di, Aapne kaha hai toh Ek chhoti si koshish kar rahi hoon...
Bhool chook maaf kar dijiyega...




Naa khawaab adhoore reh jaate,
Jo tum aise naa humko tadpaate..
Sang jeene ki, sang marne ki,
Kasam kabhi hum mil kar khaate...
Bus tees yehi hai jaati saanson ki,
Kaash isi safar mein mil paate...

Khamosh nazar se kiya ishaara,
Dikhe ashkon mein behte hum..
Dil se tumne laakh bulaaya par,
Kabhi toh labon se kehte tum..
Ae Kaash kabhi kuch kehte tum...
Kaash ke naa chup rehte tum...



padhne ke baad ek kahavat yaad aa gai..ki "sou sunaar ki ek luhaar ki"
bahoot hi adbhoot panktiyan......bahoot prabhavshali........
dil ko choo gai.....wah  Applause Applause Applause :clap:wah
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«Reply #28 on: November 18, 2008, 12:28:47 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 18, 2008, 05:44:50 AM


Pooja di, Aapne kaha hai toh Ek chhoti si koshish kar rahi hoon...
Bhool chook maaf kar dijiyega...




Naa khawaab adhoore reh jaate,
Jo tum aise naa humko tadpaate..
Sang jeene ki, sang marne ki,
Kasam kabhi hum mil kar khaate...
Bus tees yehi hai jaati saanson ki,
Kaash isi safar mein mil paate...

Khamosh nazar se kiya ishaara,
Dikhe ashkon mein behte hum..
Dil se tumne laakh bulaaya par,
Kabhi toh labon se kehte tum..
Ae Kaash kabhi kuch kehte tum...
Kaash ke naa chup rehte tum...




kyun odhe rahti thi tum hardum,
sanjeeda wala wo chehra,
har baar jutai himmat bhi,
kabhi lab kanpe, kabhi dil haara,

nakam larjte honthon se,
bas naam tera hi leta mai
Kash ke mai sab kuch kah deta,
kash ke "NA CHUP RAHTA MAI"
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«Reply #29 on: November 18, 2008, 12:34:06 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on November 18, 2008, 07:44:32 AM
Kal ye thread dekha tha, par waqt ki kami ki wajah se kuch likh nahin paaye....aur aaj to yahan kamaal pe kamaal ho rahe hain.......!! Kaun kaun si post quote karun aur kya tareef karun...Like always, I am lost for words....Hume tareef karna to nahin aata, yehi kahenge, Bohot Khoob Sanjeev, Pooja and Mahiya Applause

meri koi bhi rachna tumhaari aankhon ke aage se nikal jaaye humaare liye itna hi bahoot hai..aur agar comment aa jaye wo bhi itna sunder to samjho...bekarar ki bekarari......bulandi pe hoti hai.....tahe dil se aabhar..talat
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