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«Reply #15 on: November 16, 2010, 11:26:19 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya manzil ji~ |
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«Reply #16 on: November 22, 2010, 11:29:36 AM » |
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abhi ji aapki ye new and fresh love story...... i mean love at first sight....wakai gazab hai.........
itne pyaar se aapne use ye suna diya hota to wo bhi aapke poems k fan ho jati..aur aapki muskil aasaan ho jati......
bht bht pyara likha hai apne ye haal e dil apna.....
aur aapke pyaar ka andaaz to hai hi lajawab...... best wishes for this new twist and turn in ur life .......
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«Reply #18 on: November 22, 2010, 12:00:53 PM » |
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abhi ji aapki ye new and fresh love story...... i mean love at first sight....wakai gazab hai.........
itne pyaar se aapne use ye suna diya hota to wo bhi aapke poems k fan ho jati..aur aapki muskil aasaan ho jati......
bht bht pyara likha hai apne ye haal e dil apna.....
aur aapke pyaar ka andaaz to hai hi lajawab...... best wishes for this new twist and turn in ur life .......
kya anu jiii aap jante ho ye dil kabhi pyaar nhai kar sakta.. wo to kuchh pal us bala si khubsurati ko dekha to kuchh likhne ka bahana mil gaya or train me waise bhi neend nahi aati so jaagkar use hi dekhte rahe.. heehehehehe shukriya ... |
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«Reply #19 on: November 22, 2010, 12:07:56 PM » |
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Kya baat hai abhi bahut khoob apki ye pankitiya padh k main us manzar ko soch rahi thi kya mahol hoga na us raat mein chaht hogi baat karne ki bechaini hogi ek ajeeb sa karar hoga aknho mein khushi hogi...sach mein kayi baar kuch palo mein hi zindgi k har ehsas ko mehsus kar lene ka mazza hi alag hota hai...bahut khoobsurat kavita hai...
sach dii...mahaul to sach jaanleva tha maine dusri baar itni khubsurat ladki dekhi.. jaise khuda ne taraash ke banaya hoo..us par uski awaaz bhi badi pyaari thi...as usual uski ek painting bhi banayi he kabhi mauka mila to sabhi ke samne kisi designer poem ke sath pesh karuga... |
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«Reply #20 on: November 22, 2010, 12:09:23 PM » |
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kya anu jiii aap jante ho ye dil kabhi pyaar nhai kar sakta..
wo to kuchh pal us bala si khubsurati ko dekha to kuchh likhne ka bahana mil gaya or train me waise bhi neend nahi aati so jaagkar use hi dekhte rahe..
heehehehehe
shukriya ...
jaanti hun tabhi to soch me pad gai thi padhke..fir dil ne chaha k ye sach ho jaye....... |
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«Reply #21 on: November 22, 2010, 12:10:45 PM » |
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sach dii...mahaul to sach jaanleva tha maine dusri baar itni khubsurat ladki dekhi.. jaise khuda ne taraash ke banaya hoo..us par uski awaaz bhi badi pyaari thi...as usual uski ek painting bhi banayi he kabhi mauka mila to sabhi ke samne kisi designer poem ke sath pesh karuga...
ab this is what i call cheating..... ye khabar hume kahin aur se mile......very bad abhi ji....aapki painting aur hume pata hi nahin.... hmmmmmm |
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«Reply #22 on: November 22, 2010, 12:12:34 PM » |
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jahan tak bolne ka sawal hai ..me tareef karne se nahi chukta..
jism se rooh tak jam gaye "Abhi" mere,
kisi kaatil nazar ne nasheela koi teer chhoda hai...
or uske bad samne se ek hi reply ata hai jaise kuchh samajh na aya hoo..
"MATLAB"....or sab gud gobar...heheehe
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«Reply #23 on: November 22, 2010, 12:15:51 PM » |
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sach dii...mahaul to sach jaanleva tha maine dusri baar itni khubsurat ladki dekhi.. jaise khuda ne taraash ke banaya hoo..us par uski awaaz bhi badi pyaari thi...as usual uski ek painting bhi banayi he kabhi mauka mila to sabhi ke samne kisi designer poem ke sath pesh karuga...
Wow thts gr8 mujhe tumhari aesi designer post ka intezaar rahega... |
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«Reply #25 on: November 24, 2010, 06:13:48 AM » |
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«Reply #26 on: November 24, 2010, 07:09:48 AM » |
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bisaat ki baat na kare Abhi ji..
aapki bisaat ke humari(KB) ki aukaat hi kya hai...
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kya khoob kavita hai uff...kuch gyan-e-gur se nawaziye hume bhi
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«Reply #27 on: November 24, 2010, 07:57:59 AM » |
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kb jiiiapne itni tareef ki ham to usi ke layak nahi ...
ham to khud seekh rahe he poore YOindia ko padh padhkar...
ham kisi ko kya sikhayege~
zarra nawazi ka shukriya~
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«Reply #28 on: November 24, 2010, 08:49:58 AM » |
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aapne mere armaano par 2 balti pani fer dia Abhi ji
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«Reply #29 on: December 04, 2010, 09:29:32 AM » |
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