KRISHNALILA

by smardia on January 21, 2009, 05:28:41 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 08, 2009, 05:47:26 AM »
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Waah Waah Surender ji.. bahoot bahoot khusboorat rachna pesh ki hai.. bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #16 on: September 05, 2009, 11:35:29 AM »
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Surendrajee aapki ye kavita bhi bahut achhi aur rasilee hai...Itne saral shabdo main aapne krishna-ki-lila ka varnan kiya hai saath he haasya ka put dete huye aaj k aam manushya ki majboori ka jikra man lubhavan hai...daad kabul kijeeye... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Samay k abhav se kam he aa pati hu yoindia par...

Quote from: smardia on January 21, 2009, 05:28:41 PM
KRISHNALILA
Kanha !
Main bhi tumhare jaise
Khel khelna chahta hu
Gopiyon k vastra churana chahta hu
Per ab wo talab kahan
Kadamb k vriksh kahan
Befikra nahane ki pratha kahan
Ab tou swimming pool hain
Sab kuchh pardarshak hai
Ab wo kotuhal kahan
Ab wo jigyasa kahan

Krishna !
Main bhi tumhari tarah
Raas-lila rachana chahta hu
Tumhai tou saath tha
Solah hazar ka
Main ek k saath
Kaise rass rachau
Bolo gopiye kahan pau ?

Hey Kanhiya !
Main bhi tumhari tarah
Premlila ka aanand
Uthana chahta hu
Radha tou shayad
Mil bhi jay
Per………
Rukmani si bharya kahan pau
Jo Radha ko sah paye

Hey Gopal !
Tum bhi, Aam aadmi ko
Kis duvidha me daal gye ho
Ye asadhya, kintu
Priy khelo k
Udahran chhod gye ho
Hame lila ki lalsa main
Lalchate chhod gye ho
Kasi lila hai ye
Tumhari Prabhu !!!       Surendra Mardia
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«Reply #17 on: September 05, 2009, 12:47:28 PM »
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wah wah sam ji .... bahut hi khoob... totally new piece of tot...


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«Reply #18 on: December 05, 2009, 12:47:24 PM »
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Smardia-jee Ati sunder haasya-vyang se ot-prot aapki ye rachna behad pasand aayee....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Rukmani Radha Meera jo kaho ban jaaun
Par bataao Krishna ko main kahaan paun


Quote from: smardia on January 21, 2009, 05:28:41 PM
KRISHNALILA
Kanha !
Main bhi tumhare jaise
Khel khelna chahta hu
Gopiyon k vastra churana chahta hu
Per ab wo talab kahan
Kadamb k vriksh kahan
Befikra nahane ki pratha kahan
Ab tou swimming pool hain
Sab kuchh pardarshak hai
Ab wo kotuhal kahan
Ab wo jigyasa kahan

Krishna !
Main bhi tumhari tarah
Raas-lila rachana chahta hu
Tumhai tou saath tha
Solah hazar ka
Main ek k saath
Kaise rass rachau
Bolo gopiye kahan pau ?

Hey Kanhiya !
Main bhi tumhari tarah
Premlila ka aanand
Uthana chahta hu
Radha tou shayad
Mil bhi jay
Per………
Rukmani si bharya kahan pau
Jo Radha ko sah paye

Hey Gopal !
Tum bhi, Aam aadmi ko
Kis duvidha me daal gye ho
Ye asadhya, kintu
Priy khelo k
Udahran chhod gye ho
Hame lila ki lalsa main
Lalchate chhod gye ho
Kasi lila hai ye
Tumhari Prabhu !!!       Surendra Mardia
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smardia
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«Reply #19 on: July 29, 2010, 05:22:31 PM »
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TAHE DIL SE AAPKA SHUKRIYA ANAAM BHAI.......
Aap jaise daad dene wale hon tou kalam apne aap chalne lagti hai......
Dair se acknowledge karne k liye xshma.......
bahut vyast aur aalasya k kaaran yo par aa he nahi paaya.....



Quote from: ANAAM on August 06, 2009, 10:41:03 AM
Wah ! wah ! kya khawaish hai aap ki Surendraji.....BAHUT HE SUNDER DHANG SE AAPNE
AAJ K MANAV KI MAJBOORI KA CHITRAN KIYA HAI... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ye lines padh kar tou mazaa aagya......
                                                                             

" Radha tou shayad
Mil bhi jay
Per………
Rukmani si bharya kahan pau
Jo Radha ko sah paye.."
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«Reply #20 on: July 29, 2010, 05:41:39 PM »
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TAHE DIL SE AAPKA SHUKRIYA ANAAM BHAI.......
Aap jaise daad dene wale hon tou kalam apne aap chalne lagti hai......
Dair se acknowledge karne k liye xshma.......
bahut vyast aur aalasya k kaaran yo par aa he nahi paaya.....
Quote from: ANAAM on August 06, 2009, 10:41:03 AM
Wah ! wah ! kya khawaish hai aap ki Surendraji.....BAHUT HE SUNDER DHANG SE AAPNE
AAJ K MANAV KI MAJBOORI KA CHITRAN KIYA HAI... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ye lines padh kar tou mazaa aagya......
                                                                             

" Radha tou shayad
Mil bhi jay
Per………
Rukmani si bharya kahan pau
Jo Radha ko sah paye.."
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«Reply #21 on: July 29, 2010, 06:28:20 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on January 21, 2009, 05:28:41 PM
KRISHNALILA
Kanha !
Main bhi tumhare jaise
Khel khelna chahta hu
Gopiyon k vastra churana chahta hu
Per ab wo talab kahan
Kadamb k vriksh kahan
Befikra nahane ki pratha kahan
Ab tou swimming pool hain
Sab kuchh pardarshak hai
Ab wo kotuhal kahan
Ab wo jigyasa kahan

Krishna !
Main bhi tumhari tarah
Raas-lila rachana chahta hu
Tumhai tou saath tha
Solah hazar ka
Main ek k saath
Kaise rass rachau
Bolo gopiye kahan pau ?

Hey Kanhiya !
Main bhi tumhari tarah
Premlila ka aanand
Uthana chahta hu
Radha tou shayad
Mil bhi jay
Per………
Rukmani si bharya kahan pau
Jo Radha ko sah paye

Hey Gopal !
Tum bhi, Aam aadmi ko
Kis duvidha me daal gye ho
Ye asadhya, kintu
Priy khelo k
Udahran chhod gye ho
Hame lila ki lalsa main
Lalchate chhod gye ho
Kasi lila hai ye
Tumhari Prabhu !!!       Surendra Mardia


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gazab likhte ho aap surendra ji....kanha ko bhi nahin chhoda aapne to....par sach me kitna achcha kaha hai...wo to apni lila dikha k chale gaye aur hum bechare unke liye taraste hi reh gaye....

bht hi dilchasp rachna aur bilkul naye andaaz me......liked ur style veryyyyyyyyyyyyy muchhhh.....
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«Reply #22 on: July 30, 2010, 06:29:38 PM »
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Dair se sahi par aapne dekha tou hamaara comment....Surendraji.....Behadd achha likha hai....

Aapko bhi pasand aayee......Kasak ji


Quote from: smardia on July 29, 2010, 05:41:39 PM
TAHE DIL SE AAPKA SHUKRIYA ANAAM BHAI.......
Aap jaise daad dene wale hon tou kalam apne aap chalne lagti hai......
Dair se acknowledge karne k liye xshma.......
bahut vyast aur aalasya k kaaran yo par aa he nahi paaya.....
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smardia
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«Reply #23 on: August 15, 2010, 02:59:43 PM »
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Sophiji aapka bahut bahut shukriya......
aapke comments ka tou hamme intezaar rehta hai....
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«Reply #24 on: August 15, 2010, 03:01:17 PM »
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Dil se aapka aabhaar.....aapke comments ka shukriya.......

Quote from: ANAAMIKA on September 05, 2009, 11:35:29 AM
Surendrajee aapki ye kavita bhi bahut achhi aur rasilee hai...Itne saral shabdo main aapne krishna-ki-lila ka varnan kiya hai saath he haasya ka put dete huye aaj k aam manushya ki majboori ka jikra man lubhavan hai...daad kabul kijeeye... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Samay k abhav se kam he aa pati hu yoindia par...
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«Reply #25 on: August 15, 2010, 03:03:08 PM »
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Jasji dhanaywaad aapke prohtsaan k liye......


Quote from: jasbirsingh on September 05, 2009, 12:47:28 PM
wah wah sam ji .... bahut hi khoob... totally new piece of tot...


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«Reply #26 on: January 20, 2011, 05:02:17 PM »
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya.......aapko  ye rachna pasand aayee......dhanaywaad ji.....


Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 29, 2010, 06:28:20 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
gazab likhte ho aap surendra ji....kanha ko bhi nahin chhoda aapne to....par sach me kitna achcha kaha hai...wo to apni lila dikha k chale gaye aur hum bechare unke liye taraste hi reh gaye....

bht hi dilchasp rachna aur bilkul naye andaaz me......liked ur style veryyyyyyyyyyyyy muchhhh.....
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